Heroes of Might and Magic: Eternal Lord

There are no particularly big flaws, and there are quite a few minor flaws. Personally, I feel that the biggest problem is that the narrative is too procrastinating. A business deal with a businessman can only be drawn out for a few chapters. It is understandable that the author wants to write a supporting character with brains and a logical world. But this is actually very difficult. For example, if you really want to write well, then why should the narrative mode be Eastern? First of all, this is a Western fantasy background. Apart from the main character, the way the aborigines speak is very oriental, very dramatic and unconventional. For example, from time to time, there are classical Chinese, encounters, idioms, etc., Including the main character asking his subordinates to call him son, claiming to be a slave, a low-level job, and always making dramas. Why do you say procrastination? Because it's not logical enough, I won't talk about the White Tiger Mercenary Group. I just killed this bunch of people, and the fourth level is considered to be pretty good. To put it bluntly, what qualifications does an ordinary businessman have to play with the protagonist after he just killed someone? He also said that he was afraid of not paying when the goods arrived, which was superfluous. This is not how you want to get to the top. I already said at the beginning that this world cannot use things from the previous world. The underlying logic of the extraordinary world is fundamentally different from our world, so I won't give specific examples. It can be seen that the author was very careful in writing this book. The writing style is average and there are no major problems. Overall, it can be given four stars. However, it is disgusting to give two or three stars for a disagreement in the comment section. I would like to encourage you to give it five stars.

Who says you can't read it? I think it has potential for development. There is no such thing as a perfect book. Good luck to the author.

Come on, it's my first time writing after all @ bloody holy judge Personally, I think it would be better to change the previous one.

It's readable, the pace is pretty steady, there's very little water, and there's not a whole expository text.

Is this a dark room? The last chapter has been reviewed

Hey, I like this novel very much, but it's a pity that it's relatively niche and I stopped updating it.

A very good book must be given a five-star rating! 👍

It's been a long time since I've read a novel about invincible heroes, and it's so exciting.