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Yes, there is no OOC at the moment, but there are a lot of memories of the protagonist before his transformation. I personally don't like it. Now that I have become Kafka, I have to make a break with my past self. One more thing, many of the books I read have been discontinued halfway through, I hope I can keep writing this one [Like]

Su Yan has too much past, there is no need to [eat melon]

Five stars have been awarded. The author is great. He is still alive. Please give me a shout.

Generally speaking, this group of writers is very good. There are some shortcomings, but it's okay. I guess the author is a novice novelist. If you write like this as a novice, I feel it is very good. Of course, if you are not a novice, I'm sorry to offend you. Overall, if the novel is well written, I think it is still possible. It should be possible to get a high score of more than 9 points. Overall, it is okay. I feel that the author's grasp is still very good. Try to write as few unnecessary things as possible. The ones that should be written are a bit longer. I think it's okay. I feel that the protagonist is a bit inferior. I suggest that the protagonist be strengthened. Just steal all Kafka's skills. In this way, I have a new mother and [KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][][][][][][]

It's very interesting to watch, and the memories are not useless. The fact that my brother turned into a blade is very novel, but I still hope to describe it to the audience a little more, or people from other countries to add a little more. In addition, I have a question, is the script of the ancient house a national rule ghost story, or is it entered alone? I just realized that your sudden break was just to write a new book, right? Go back and fill in the old book! ! !

First of all, the writing style is OK. Secondly, every event has a certain correlation, and the process of transformation is easy to understand and does not feel so abrupt. Moreover, I can only say that Star Core Hunter is worthy of being a Star Core Hunter? You can tell the truth from the lies at once, but since I am still willing to help, I don't feel that it is out of the ordinary to help, and I don't know why. It may be because the author's writing is so good, and it is really cool to have two card moms in this world!

10 Points for watching. Highly recommended. However, it would be better if it were updated faster. It has not been updated for a long time and I only watched it recently. Highly recommended. . It is full of details. If you can recommend it, I can give it full marks.

The author's second book is also very good [love] [love] [love] [love], give it five stars

Very well written! But one thing makes me very confused, why do you have to have a brother?

It's from the first book. To be honest, I think the first book is quite good because there aren't many that kind of themes. It's a pity that it won't be updated [I'm about to cry]

Come on, this is the second book I love

I really like this theme. I've fallen behind all the Kafka books I've read before. I beg the author to stick with it [Sending my heart]

The author's second book is also very good [sending my heart]

It looks good. I have an exam in 20 days and haven't read any textbooks. The question was not answered. I read your book [laughing and crying], my heart is really big.

Can you view: the panel properties of the current character?

Beautiful, I like it very much

Looks good, looking forward to the follow-up

Very good, keep up the good work✊

Looking forward to meeting his brother

It's okay, let's wait and see

Are you trying to kill me?

Very good, just a little bit lacking

Where has the author gone?

I like the protagonist, thank you for the author

I think it's pretty good, but if you want to read Kafka, I don't recommend it.