Wanqing Shenji

Dear readers, this is my first time writing. In the first few chapters, I may not be able to control the subject matter, transitions, etc., And the plot may be a little uncomfortable, but I will try my best to control and correct it in the future. I hope you can support me. If there are any problems, I hope you can raise them and I will try to correct them.

The beginning is very absurd and bizarre, and so is the style of the entire book, which can attract readers. Moreover, this kind of plot is also very novel and has almost never been seen before, and the potential is unlimited. I only give some suggestions on writing. Sometimes transitions don't need to be too fast and some descriptions should be added appropriately. To put it bluntly, write more important scenes and don't rush to advance the plot. Slow down when it's time to slow down. This is a kind of control of the rhythm.

Let's become Fire Fist together!

The writing is very good and the storyline is good