Personality V: Group-Hated Supervision

In fact, the author's writing is quite good (✪▽✪). I just commented on the characters in it, wrote it, and expressed my own feelings. I think the big squid in it really doesn't persuade people to die, and is unwilling to accept it. God, why can't you love others? (◇) This is the same as gender constraints. Why should you care about other people's opinions? In the end, the heroine threw herself into the sea. I felt very deeply. He has never really expressed his love. He is just like a plaything and is always afraid of being thrown away. My opinion about Idhayla is not very qualified. He already has a child and he can abandon his wife. This is not what a qualified husband should do. In the end, the system cannot resurrect him. I also feel very deeply. He can actually be resurrected because of the special characteristics. After Lei Xi died, he was resurrected, but he was unwilling to let Bai Cha get hurt again. I think this system is not very simple. It is like an observer of all things. I originally thought it was a sweet book, but I didn't expect it to be a knife. Indeed, the author said that he once fell in love with a gentleman, which made the author collapse. Just because of Bai Cha, it is not worth it. A star chaser, a star chaser, a person who can never catch up with the stars! ! But no one noticed where Miss Nightingale went? ? ? ? ? Miss Nightingale, if she were still in the manor now, she would probably be depressed to death. Looking back after more than nine months, [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [crying], I don't believe what Squid said!

It's really good-looking. Although I skipped reading it, it's really good-looking. Yidhela and Bai Cha are really close to each other. Bai Cha's emotional expression is not very obvious, but in the end it's BE's. There are many CPs. The author made them part ways. But don't stop reading it just because it's a BE article. It's really the best among the BE articles. I think this one is the best among all the BE articles I've read.

I have read this book in the storybook next door. The writing is very good. Friends who like The Fifth can check it out.

Sister, I imitated the beginning, and I will also say it in the novel I wrote. I hope it works, if not, I will just finish it.

Am I the first? So cool! Five stars, five stars!

It looks good, but it feels too ooc (don't criticize if you don't like it, it's just a personal opinion)

The writing is still very good But most of the characters in the early stage were seriously OOC Lady, Jack, Spider, Air Force (I think the OOC is the most serious) single pusher to avoid lightning! Other characters are also quite OOC, but if you don't like OOC, please be careful!

Author, I advise you to write another book for me with a good ending. Your ending makes my liver hurt [smile]

Is this hemorrhoids? It has flesh and blood and a knife [smile]

Well, read it all in one go. Many of the plots in the middle made my hands and feet feel cold, and my whole body couldn't help but feel numb (?) And trembling. I feel quite sad, but I also think this ending is quite reasonable. My experience is not enough for me to comment. . . But it is indeed a good fanfic. . . Finally, good night, Miss White Tea An, I hope you can get rid of the haze and sleep peacefully.

As sweet as it is in the middle, it will be so sweet in the later stages. Why can't gods have feelings? Why can't Baicha and Idhayla be together? Why do two people want to fall in love and why must they separate at the end? But in my opinion, the be ending may be very suitable for the ending, but it is definitely not the most suitable for Bai Cha. She is already very tired. Maybe letting her take a rest is the best choice.

The writing of this book is very interesting, and the characters are also very good. It's a little bit a bit of a novel, but that's why I read it. Overall very good.

It's so beautiful, you all should come and see it. After watching it, you will know what is good [get it]

I like it very much but it's too sharp

Anyway, it really touched my heart. The protagonist's attitude is uncontested, but as long as his bottom line is touched, he will be merciless. Maybe he is used to being alone. His first reaction when meeting his lover is inferiority complex

Does the author want to write so sharply? I have watched it several times and cry every time

To be honest, it's really good. Although OOC was a bit serious in the early stage, OOC happens in most novels now. But in the later stage, when I return to reality, I start to feel that everyone has changed back. But I have a question. What about our Soul of the Umbrella? I feel that it would be more interesting if the two of them are here (although it is fine now). As for the ending, I can only say that it was expected. After all, God does not love people. This has been mentioned before, but it is still a bit regretful.

It's beautiful, but very sharp, and the characters are well created.

It's quite interesting, except that in the second chapter there's "Bai Cha watched Ada and Emil jump into the cellar". Isn't the cellar open only when one person is present? Anyway, there are a lot of bugs

It's pretty good-looking, but there are a bit too many oc's.

A tragedy that feels depressing and real to me.

Would she be happier if she hadn't met her? She was her "That was the straw that broke the camel's back"

It's all about knives, even the ending is about knives. It makes me feel so uncomfortable and depressed [crying]

Why didn't Idhayla stop her from dying?

I like it. I personally cried a lot. I cried many times while reading this book. The second part is quite sad [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

So many knives, so many knives. I want to cry. I'm already crazy. @Sa Author I have added you. My name is: Give me a big account. I will wait until my rank is improved before I can play with you. I currently only have one account.

I love it very much. I like it very much. The reason why I gave it four stars is that it killed me with a knife in the end [crying][crying][crying]

It's so sad, I cried all my tears and it's all swollen. Author, please forgive me for my tears. Do you know the feeling of twitching and twisting into maggots on the bed? But it's very good-looking. The ending is a bit open-ended. All in all, the author will forgive me for my tears (⑉꒦ິ^꒦ິ⑉)

It looks good, but I don't know why the score is so low? After reading it, I don't know what to say. To be honest, this book touched me quite a lot. If I say it's OOC, I feel it's actually okay. After all, the author made it very clear at the beginning. Secondly, White Tea is just like what the psychologist said. He probably should have died a long time ago. He has been hurt too many times [almost crying]

Nice looking, but too OOC