Elf: Me! Conquer! Invincible!

I'm really curious how you wrote it down

It's pretty good, but the battle line is a bit long. Some battle details don't need to be written in such detail, such as the first, second and third scenes, and then there are Carlos, Hezhong and other places that are basically over 1,500 according to this progress. There are also giant super evolutions. Furthermore, it depends on the author's intention to write a female protagonist. Overall it's worth recommending.

Author, please keep writing, some daily stories, some cool stories, and some more mythical beasts. How many mythical beasts have you seen in so long? Come on, don't give up! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This is my personal opinion and I won't participate in the discussion. Let's have a few heroines, not too many! ! ! ! ! ! !

A very real Pokémon world, the plot continues the four major alliances! It's a pity that it's difficult to write after this expansion, so it's understandable if the author stops updating or ends it! What a pity for such a good work

It's very nice to read, and the story has a good pace, especially when it comes to dealing with the villains with heavy punches and a lot of heat, which makes me feel very happy. I hope that when the author writes about the Kalos region, he can give it a good beating or even kill the villains of the Kalos region, Team Flare, especially Fradali, or else. If he didn't give him a good beating and let him lie in bed for ten or eight years, there was also Ailan, who had long been unhappy with him, so he had to give him a good beating. No matter what, he couldn't be an accomplice of the villain, not to mention that he was being used, and no matter what, he couldn't make the Pokémon suffer. So please, author, this is just my personal opinion, I hope it will not affect the author's writing ideas.

I think this is a very nice fanfic of "Pokémon". This is the most beautiful book in my opinion. Especially the one that Xiaomeng was personally recognized by the God of Creation and what Gengar said when he was dueling with those rich people, I was very moved, etc. [Blow kiss]

Later I saw why the system was gone for a long time?

I don't know how other people rate it, but for me, I think it looks good

From a daily perspective, it's good, but the system is a subjugation system. It would be nice to have a containment space at the beginning so that the submissive elves can be raised. The protagonist is also very Buddhist, so he collects some auspicious eggs, which are almost like dolls. Like Eevee's family portrait, it's totally worth considering, and it's too boring to follow the TV protagonist route. It can be a little innovative. Why not conquer the same elves as Xiaozhi? You can completely cut off Xiaozhi. Look at the bay leaf, how pitiful it is. But the author has written so much, and it's hard to change it, so I just complained, mainly because the plot I watched was not exciting, and I just wanted the protagonist, who is too Buddha-like! ! Come on, author [love]

If I remember correctly, when I read this book, the rating of this book was quite high. Now I don't know why the rating has dropped to this point. Anyway, I personally think this book is very interesting, but I don't know why it suddenly stopped updating.

Come on, author, don't miss the six major regions. Come on, let's liberate the six major regions. Don't be like the last eunuch of other Pokémon. Come on, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, the author is great!

I have an idea, doesn't Guai Li have four hands? , Learn from the farmer's three punches plus a shadow box [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

Very exciting, but I just don't know why there is no rating

You write so many, why do you get so few comments [face covering], come on [like]

I like it very much. It is one of the few Pokémon stories that is not greedy. There are mythical beasts but they are not often used. It does not say that the protagonists are all quasi-gods and popular Pokémon. They are all ordinary Pokémon. I really like reading it.

I like no heroine, the author is great

The overall feeling is good, the content is full, and not all of the plot is the original text, so it is worth reading.

It's really, really good-looking. It's the best-looking Pokémon fanfic I've ever seen [Adoration][Adoration]

I'm a little curious how you wrote it?

Okay, okay, still damn good (✪▽✪)

This is the current situation. The little girl got on the hot bed and made me smile [shy]

This book is very good, I hope the author can continue to update it, and I must update it to the end! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Personally I think it's pretty good

Author, you are finally back.

Very beautiful, highly recommended!

Does this book have a female protagonist? Can the author arrange a glittering Metagross for the protagonist?

Very good, I like it very much

Can you make a chapter of the Pokémon you have conquered?

Why is 999 9? Because 6 is doubled.

Something that will never disappear from my bookshelf [Like][Like][Like]