Wuxia Crossover: I Took Wang Yuyan as a Concubine, and Now I'm Immortal

It should be inevitable to give yourself a five-star review [laughing]

A diamond kidney is given at the beginning, and the beauties in the harem have many tasks. [Cover face] In the world of mixed martial arts, cultivation is flourishing, and prosperity depends entirely on tasks. [Cool] Searching for brainless cool articles, looking forward to the climax of the new work! [Sending Hearts] The front is really pretty, but it's hard to connect with the dog's tail. [Cover face] The ending is sudden and chaotic, and Shuangwen is really mindless to watch. [Laughing awkwardly]

It's well written, but they are all young girls who don't know when the married woman will appear!

The backhand of the harem article is a five-star encouragement. Come on

Without further ado, I'll give it four stars first, and if the plot is good, I'll give it five stars. Come on, support! The protagonist's personality is too immature, lacks scheming, and wants to be a salty fish🐟. His combat power has improved, but the protagonist's personality is too mismatched and he is always out of place! I hope the protagonist will be smarter and more mature, and not end up capsized in the gutter and be plotted by others! Support and cheer.

Suddenly a blind spot is discovered. The protagonist is invincible in the field, and initially it is a cottage, a village within the scope of it. Next is Qingyun Villa, which is at least the size of a township. The protagonist's invincibility is at least that of an Earth Immortal (but it's the setting of an Earth-bound spirit, so strong means very strong). So, how big is the three-dimensional space in this range, that is, how high up and how deep down? Let's count the huge columnar spaces within the atmosphere, down to those points in the earth's core. Then, wouldn't this invincibility be able to stabilize the ground below and create many layers of space? Or, Qingyun Mountain was transformed and the mountain turned into a huge building? Mountain villas, modern manors, palaces, villas, gymnasiums, stadiums, racetracks, racing circuits... Wouldn't it be great to rub all kinds of attractions with your hands? Can it also form a huge industry? Once there is an industry, there will be people, and the scope will be expanded, and it will gradually become bigger...

It's pretty good, funny, and decent at the same time. There are just too many female protagonists, but it's just a novel, it's only called a novel if you enjoy reading it. I suggest you use your brain when watching, otherwise you won't be able to understand [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Everything about the plot setting is pretty good, except whether the invincible field can be made stronger. I feel that it is of no use. Is the range too small? There is no response when the Four Ultimates infiltrate. After all, the invincible field should be regarded as passive [face covering]

It's okay, the pace is reasonable, and there is no suspicion of deliberate watery words, which proves that the author's writing style is good. Whether the novel is well written or not is one thing. Unlike many authors, who deliberately use watery words to enrich the number of words in the novel, that is a sign of incompetence.

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