Give Up*************

Five stars, five stars, five stars, five stars [sending my heart] [laughing evilly]

Add stars, praise, I like this feeling very much. Sometimes it makes me cry, and sometimes it makes me want to laugh. All in all, it is very neutral. It is very suitable for me to read when I am fishing. It is neither too emotional nor too boring. I hope the author will write more. I finished reading more than a hundred chapters in one go.

Not bad, looks quite comfortable so far

Sweet, so let's talk about when to be together

Okay, I just keep saying that my previous life was a little bad.

Overall, it's good. In the later stage, the proportion of daily sweetness can be further reduced, and the focus will be on overcoming the father-in-law and seducing and fighting with others. After that, the book will be almost finished. A book currently only has a 6.5 Rating. I think the reason is that based on the author's character creation of the male and female protagonists, it is difficult to write something that is too sweet. There is a book written by Fendou Laojiu that is very similar to what you wrote. The author can refer to it.

It's well written and very interesting, but the overall rebirth thing has some flaws.

The plot setting, plot, and character creation are all pretty good, but the later stages feel too fast. It was really too fast. The later stages went by too fast. Otherwise, it was still very exciting, so I deducted one star.

It feels good to listen to it with headphones

This comment section is so pitiful, only one comment from the author

The ending is perfect. The foreshadowing laid in the front is also fulfilled in the back. Why are you so anxious to finish the book? This book can be continued with hundreds of chapters to kill off the Lu family and the Zhou family one by one.

The book is quite good and the story is quite interesting. I originally didn't like rebirth and systems (I personally prefer more realistic ones that are closer to life and easier for readers to immerse themselves in), but out of great support for the author (I am currently following another novel by the author), I read on and found that the plot is not bad, especially the later part of the story that brings together rebirth and time travel (a bit fantasy, but very bright), so I support it! I hope the author will continue to work hard and his books will be even better! Of course, I still hope that the author will write some stories that are more realistic and closer to life. Big cheers to the author! ! !

The story line is clear, and the foreshadowing is well arranged, without giving people an uncomfortable feeling. The final rescue part is simply the finishing touch, and it should be arranged at the best position near the end. It is very well written [Love]

The writing is okay, but the content, especially the part about being reborn and then talking about this and that with other people, feels very different.

Lao Chen! I'd better shock you to death first! Your brother will be my brother from now on! Go in peace! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

There's nothing to say, you'll know it when you see it Is the ending so rushed? The author has just started school, right? [What]

To be honest, no novel can make me feel so deeply. The author's writing is a bit like my experience, and I can only say that it is very well written. Because people can't always go smoothly, there will always be some setbacks and some regrets. For example, in this novel, I have only experienced the first half, and I am still far from knowing how wonderful the second half will be...

The plot is very good, but I feel that I could add 1-2 chapters before the end to understand all the changes, but there is nothing wrong if I don't add it. It adds some imagination for the audience to follow for a period of time, but I like to read the imagination written by others.

This book also has some toxic points, but overall it's still very good. It ended a bit quickly. I finished it at 11 o'clock on October 14, 2023.

I also want female brothers [crying]

Finished? ? ? ? Too sudden

It was great and touching.

If you haven't seen it, I'll give it five stars. If you check it out and think it looks good, I won't change it. If it doesn't look good, I'll give it 3-4 stars.

The book is pretty good, so why is the rating so low?

It's okay, it's a pretty good novel.

At least I feel like it, it's very novel

Very beautiful, really beautiful (๑◕τ￩๑)b

There are certain flaws but it is still a good story. This five stars is a thank you for accompanying me during this time.

I think it looks great. Why is it rated so low? Although this single female protagonist doesn't quite suit my taste, the plot is really good.

Very good, come on!