Konoha Village, This Is a Parting Gift

Good-looking, very good-looking but a little lacking

This book is the author's first book, and it will be mixed with a lot of the author's personal emotions. That is, the author will have clear likes and dislikes for a certain character, but he will not magically change the characters. He will develop the character according to the original work. The author will check more information and accept readers' opinions. The features of this book are as follows: 1. There are a lot of fights. As a passionate anime, the author likes fighting scenes; 2. There will be many derivative ninjutsu, which are not completely fabricated, but are speculated or evolved based on the performance in the original work; 3. A new growth system will be added, and it is not made up. It is based on the setting of Naruto and the performance of the original work. I personally think it is relatively reasonable. The growth system in the original work will still exist, and its importance is the same as the original work; 4. Menma is Naruto from another world, and the author also likes Naruto and wants to change him, so Naruto will have a lot of roles, and his growth trajectory will also change because of Menma, and the direction is for the better; 5. Menma's signature ninjutsu, Spiral Wheel Yu and Big Spiral Wheel Yu, will appear more and more as the plot develops. The same goes for Menma's signature psychic technique, Nine-faced Subaha, and will evolve later. 6. More parting gifts will be given. Finally, I would like to thank all readers for taking the time to watch, and I would also like to thank the readers who provided comments to the author [I understand] There are always readers who don't like me weakening Kyuubi. In fact, this is to create a cheat for Kyuubi, and it's a big cheat.

My dear friends, I don't have much writing anymore. There is one who writes very well, but his mother stopped updating it [angry] I must support it.

Author, you write well, keep up the good work

Can the author only have a female protagonist? I really like the subject matter of this book! Come on author

The author is really short-sighted, and my sister-in-law is really miserable.

I was looking at destroying Konoha, but it turned out to be Tsukuyomi Sekai

Very nice. But I've seen two things I don't like so far. In one place, Menma's nine-tails have been shaved off, and in the other place, it's a bit verbose. Four stars first.

It's pretty good, but a little lacking. Keep up the good work!

Not bad, let's take care of it first

It's okay to start with a little nonsense at the beginning

Author, you know. After reading your updated content, I clicked the shitty yellow button exactly 250 times and it turned into 251.

Does the heroine have Tsunade? [Laughs evilly]

このはとてもいです.そしてThe protagonist のめんまがとてもhas a good impression of をhold たせてくれます

There is no five-star review here.

@ Love you too today

It feels pretty good-looking

You are so awesome, I want to give you bones and palms

Not bad, this is a parting gift, hehehehe [laughing and crying] [face covering]

It feels pretty cool. I've rarely seen this type of facial expressions.

Yeah, it's very beautiful, although it's a bit lacking [laughing][laughing] After all, this is considered a new subject, come on, come on [like]

The writing is very good, well, it's a little slow in the early stage, but it doesn't affect the rhythm of the later stage. The rhythm of the later stage is very suitable for me. It shows the various abilities of the protagonist Menma, and the setting is also very rigorous.

Isn't Jiuwei 100 meters away? [Hold face][Hold face]

Not bad, very pretty

Very good looking very good looking

Also very beautiful

The author's writing is excellent

Feeling okay, no collapse so far

I miss you so much author

This is a very nice book