Fantasy************

The biggest flaw in the first generation is the repeated use of words and inconsistent logic, followed by the too rapid development after about 420 chapters (Su Tong did not even return to the alliance and previous city-states). I hope that the author can review the previous article when writing, and then simply write the repetitive and complicated content (similar plots that appear many times), and describe the big scenes and patterns in the climax, or describe the plot about the character's personality in detail. I also look forward to this film completing the plot of Su Tong resurrecting Luo Ziyin. The author shouldn't be so anxious. He has been waiting for such a long time. I hope the author will do better and better.

Blindly guessing that this god is Su Tong [eating melon]

My understanding is so good that there is Su Tong in 2? If not, I won't watch it

There were so few people. When I was visiting the school belle's grave, I clicked on the author's homepage and discovered that there was a new book. I felt that I should promote it. And Is the protagonist already invincible? Then it should be more seductive (it's definitely not what I want to see [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]. Really, it's to cater to everyone's preferences.)

It's so good. The first book "My Understanding Is So Good" ended so hastily, and I felt very angry at that time. It was obviously very good-looking, but the ending...

It is obviously much better than the previous work, the first chapter is so active, and the protagonist is also very interesting!

Isn't Su Tong's wife Yan Ling? Why does this mean Luo Ziyin again?

Finally, Part 2 is out. I have only one request from the author: Just don't let it suck. It's pretty good, just don't mess it up

It's pretty good. It's a big improvement compared to the previous generation. I just hope the ending of this novel won't be too hasty.

Apart from anything else, the author's attitude deserves this five-star rating.

The author will update soon. I will start school tomorrow. I hope I can see the end when I come back in a week. Haha, this girl is very stubborn. I hope I can fill in the pit of a book later. Hehe

I still really want to know about the dungeon life of Su Tong and Lingyan. Thank you for the author. I really love them and can't get enough of them.

Why are good books never read?

So far so good, give it five stars.

Great support for the author, I like reading [Send heartfelt thanks]

It looks great. I love it. Come on, author.

I thought the protagonist was Su Tong qwq

Not as good at writing as Snow and Sword

The concept is quite satisfactory, the writing is pretty good, and the story rhythm is also very appropriate. I like it very much.