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The emotional drama between Xiao Bai and Xiao Chuwan is actually very delicate. It's not a cliché misunderstanding and robbery, and finally an inexplicable reconciliation. Xiao Chuwan is humble and begging for mercy from the beginning to the end, even though it's his fault... I really like this book! One of the few dual-male protagonist Gu Xuan that I have finished watching!

The character of the protagonist is in line with the character's own personality characteristics, and the storyline is also very good. There are no messy embarrassing things. In the early stage, the spiritual power disappeared and the sick beauty was restored. In the later stage, he chased people until the ending and extra chapters. The writing is also good, and it is still very good. You can read it. If you can't accept the suggestion of being sick and weak, you should still reach it👏🏻👉🏻👈🏻🫵🏻

The author's descriptions are so delicate [crying], and the plot is not sluggish at all, I can't get enough of it. The Fishing Immortal has so much sexual tension, I really want to be trampled under his feet, and I really want him to regain his spiritual freedom [crying] Bai Xingyuan is really good. When he tortured Xiao with indifference and disgust, it felt a little refreshing, but also a little boring. Xiao didn't know how to love correctly, and it wiped out the hope he had finally accumulated. I felt so sad when I saw it. Bai Xingyuan said that he wanted to cry when he was treated like the woman he raised in the backyard. After all, he also has a strong self-esteem. Let Xiao experience how the crematorium of the master is treated like this will be sweet again [crying] This book is really in line with my taste. Because it is a new book, don't be dissuaded by the ratings. This is definitely a masterpiece [almost crying]

Highly recommended! I just like this kind of character where both sides have brains and a combined 800 hearts!

Don't give up on writing! We have to work hard to fill in the pits, and the most important thing is not to give up. [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] This is the best ancient novel I have ever read, and it is the best in my heart. I like this kind of book.

I really like this book. It's the first time I read a book in its entirety and rarely skips chapters. Except for the sad part at the end, I hope it will be sweet later. I also hope that more people will know about this book. The author is great. In fact, I was a little angry when I saw it later. I thought why Master did this? His apprentice is so kind to him, but he still acts like he owes him millions. Does he have to be a stupid beauty if he is thin? People obviously like him, but they still pretend to refuse and welcome him.

Very beautiful!!! It's all my fault if I don't give five stars! I really like this sick beauty I really like this, but it's a pity that only 90 photos are gone [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

Woohoo, why are the ratings so low? This book is really good! I like the white-haired master very much, and besides, he is a businessman who values ​​profits. What should I do if I just traveled through time and found that my apprentice has already turned dark? It's okay, let's see how I train the wolf cub. (After a period of time) A wolf cub is a wolf cub, it can't be changed (눈_눈)😅Forget it, you can take care of your own apprentice Yaoyao has arrived, and the quality is stamped!

The writing is really good. I feel that each character has his own characteristics. The ending is quite happy. The ending was a little rushed, but the extra chapter is quite interesting [shy][shy][shy] I hope the author will work hard.

It's very interesting. Although the plot is rather cliche, it's still a very good book. However, the main text is finished in a hurry. It would be better to end the extra chapter when the main text is completed. I seriously suspect that the author is being lazy! This is a very good novel! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss][love][love]

Nice! The author's writing is good, but few people read Mustard's good books. It's not a loss if you buy it [Cool]

Personally, I thought it was really good. The character of Bai Xingyuan was well portrayed, but the ending may have felt a bit rushed and a little unclear. The writing style is relatively comfortable and the world view is complete. I personally recommend it [Love]

The writing and plot are highly recommended. The subject matter is not novel, but the character creation is very successful. It did not make me feel embarrassed. The IQ is online, the extreme stretch, and the ending feels a bit rushed. Everything else is very good. Rather than comparing 1 to the "large dogs" mentioned many times in the article, I would like to compare him to a wolf, which is not tamed and has wildness and wisdom. "The wolf represents the power of death and destruction, but it also represents the passion and loyalty of love." It has not only strategy, but also feelings. Rather than letting Master be a bird in a cage, he is more suitable to be a hard-to-get prey, impossible to catch, and attractive enough. The two are not unilaterally dependent, but evenly matched. "Like is like meeting an opponent, love is willing to be defeated." I'll leave the rest to your own imagination~ The above are all personal opinions, don't comment if you don't like them

The character setting really pokes me, I like watching this kind of pulling and pulling feeling. In fact, I feel sorry for Xiaoliu. No one has taught him how to love since he was a child. His love for his master is expressed in a twisted way, which is undesirable but understandable. Bai Xingyuan also blames him for the original owner's eight years of cold violence. He looks like two grievances [laughing and crying]

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This book is really good. I am a person who likes master-disciple articles very much. There are many master-disciple articles after opening the software, but this one is my favorite. It's also the first book that I can read (I'm very picky when it comes to reading). The writing is okay👌. I've recommended it to my friends.

I really like the characters written by Boss from the bottom of my heart, but I just can't get enough of them. Their stories are still going on. Good night, friends, Boss! New book! Quick! Love watching! Yeah, yeah, yeah!

Overall very good! It's not a traditional story about a master and his apprentice. The master is neither weak nor cold, and the apprentice is not all compulsive, but rather conciliatory. Overall, it's a very good article, and it's worth watching, but I personally think that the ending is not very satisfying... Maybe it's because I think the previous writing was too awesome, so I can't stand the ending at the end, but let's see how you feel, it's still very interesting. The author will publish a new book! Please.

I like DaDa's writing style very much. It's very delicate and flawless, and it's very interesting to read. However, the pace is very fast and a bit rushed. The ending is quite refreshing (scrambled). The change is too big and it's not easy to accept. Overall, what I wrote above is quite to my liking, and I wish your writing will get better and better. In fact, DaDa's character structure is quite good. The main characters are full-bodied, and the supporting characters are briefly introduced. Some living emotions may be better for the article, but there are some pitfalls in the front. In fact, the first taste of the book is not bad, but it cannot be savored carefully. Saving it is like chewing tasteless sugar cane. DaDa's early writing is really good. Later, I don't know if DaDa is a little impatient or for other reasons. The article is a little absent-minded and tastes light. I wish DaDa's writing will improve day by day and get better and better.

It's really good to read. This is the nth book with two male protagonists that I've read. Master Bai is really arrogant, and the one named Xiao is also really doting on him. It's the nth novel with two male protagonists that I've read and it's worth reading for a long time because the writing is really good. It's just that the mosquito nets feel a bit too sparse. After all, there aren't many good-looking ones nowadays.

I read this book and I loved it so much. I read it in one breath without stopping, and I managed to survive the sleepiness and the pressure of going to school tomorrow. I have finished it at half past one. Thank you to the author for letting me see such a book that suits my taste. I almost kowtowed. Orz

The writing is good. It tortured me deeply in the later period. My heart throbbed and hurt, but it still felt so good. I still think it's better that the master is freed. The relationship between them is unclear and the forgiveness is a bit sloppy. Overall, it's okay.

2024.4.12 The story is over, but their future is still bright. Fortunately, the story leaves no regrets, and all the characters are delicately portrayed and have their own destiny. From paranoia to learning to love, their love has gone through many battles and has become indestructible.

It's an indescribable feeling. The setting is very good and the writing is good. When I watched it, I couldn't control my expression. Sometimes I laughed like a stone, and sometimes I twisted into a ball. It can arouse my emotions. I will be sad because of the death and encounter of the characters, and I will also be happy because of the progress of the protagonist group! The teacher is good at writing! Tomato is not good enough for a teacher qwq

It's pretty good to watch, but it's a bit rough in the middle and later stages. I just feel like the reconciliation in the back compares to the knife in the front that's a bit sloppy (no malice, just personal opinion)

Well, this book gave me a very warm feeling in the later stages. There was a misunderstanding between the two people. Fortunately, this misunderstanding was resolved. It made me feel like I was a secret admirer. In the end, I couldn't love you. Then I used the wrong method to make the person I like farther and farther away from me. I just changed it later. The plot was quite good, but the ending was so fast. I didn't even realize that he ended at the end.

It's very interesting (✧∇✧). It took me four hours to read it. To be honest, it was so cruel first and then so sweet that I almost felt like I was on the rooftop＼(`Δ')/, but in the end it was still very sweet. I will always support the author (๑♡ω♡๑)

Hmm... I like it very much. The characters are vivid and concrete, the plot is reasonable, and the love-hate relationship between Bai Xingyuan and Xiao Chuwan is quite attractive. It would be better if the ending was more complete. However, overall it is still good, recommended ~

The plot goes by very quickly and is very comfortable to watch. The subsequent plot development is also very smooth. There is no unfinished rhythm. This is a direct bonus. The characters' personalities are also displayed very well. The plot is also very easy to understand. Full marks recommended.

1. Short in length and compact in plot 2. The character creation is in place, and there are few teacher-student stories where the characters are not broken. 3. The writing style has room for expansion and details can be polished and polished. In general: to the appetite [admiration] [admiration]