After Awakening, I Kicked Long Aotian

It's really beautiful! [Laughs] I think the heroine has a bad temper, and sometimes she will do some unreasonable things to people she likes. Why are so many people scolding her? Anyway, I haven't seen anything uncharacteristic of the heroine so far. The heroine is very cute, but not completely vicious. I feel like some of you just have too many demands on women [face-covering], if you don't like watching it, don't watch it [face-covering], the author should not be disturbed by them [sending my heart] [sending my heart] Come on, come on [please update]

How should I put it? Generally speaking, the writing is okay in all aspects, but I always feel that there are many aspects of the plot that are not explained clearly. I don't mean that I have dug a hole but not filled it, but I just feel that the plot goes by a little too fast. Not only when the parents are saved later in the story, but also when the hero and heroine go to other places to carry out a series of events. More importantly, in fact, it is not said in the end whether the memory of the hero has been restored. And there are many places that should be more enjoyable, but I don't think they are. I talked about how the heroine's cultivation is so awesome that she is a genius, but later on, I met many people who could suppress her, but did not let him make good use of this cultivation to create an image of a particularly refreshing heroine. Of course, I'm not criticizing it for not being good-looking. Maybe this is just the author's own way of shaping the characters and plotting the plot. It's good-looking, but I personally feel it's a little bit unsatisfactory. And I think the characters are okay, not only the male and female protagonists but also the male and female supporting characters. It has the feeling of a group portrait, but it is not a special group portrait. The main plot is still on the male and female protagonists. It would be better if more of this group portrait feeling can be written. Moreover, the heroine's cultivation is said to be very impressive, but she really meets many people who cannot beat her. Moreover, I personally think that the heroine was born and raised by nature. Only the little jellyfish raised her, but everyone seems to give the credit for raising the heroine to that master! ! ! ! Even the master knew that it was not easy for the heroine to grow up, but the first thing he said was that you are: illiterate. I really don't like those people from the older generation. They seem to be the heroine's uncles and friends of the heroine's parents. However, I feel that they did not give them much substantial help. They even gave the heroine a lot of persecution at the beginning. They did not help him and even almost killed him.

Just a personal opinion, the male and female protagonists are not talkative, the female protagonist is strong but will be beaten and suppressed, the plot is quite smooth, and the author's writing is also very online. It's painful to watch, but what keeps me going is h

It's so good-looking, so good-looking, and it feels so good to be completely swayed towards my own protagonist. I feel a lot more energetic after leaving the struggle between good and evil. The male protagonist, um, I like it very much (ღ˘⌣˘ღ). The plot has ups and downs, and the description of the world of cultivating immortals also satisfied my fantasy. It's too good for my taste. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

It's pretty good-looking, not as... As the reviews say. The author's writing is very good, and the plot is novel and smooth. I'm glad that I started following this book when it was still new, otherwise I might have missed this book due to reviews. I think the male and female protagonists are just at odds with each other, and they don't have to talk too much. (I think as long as it doesn't affect anything, it can be solved within 2 chapters. But it's possible that I forgot because I followed it for a long time, but I didn't skip a chapter, so it shouldn't be a big problem if I follow it all the way) Is Stallion the original male protagonist? He is generally believed to be quite disgusting, but the plot where he was offline was quite good. The female protagonist was not the one to kill him, and he did not deserve to be killed by the female protagonist (it could also be said that the female protagonist killed him, I don't know how to put it). He was suicidal and asked for it. Anyway, his death was quite reasonable. If you like romance + group portraits, you can check it out. Although the heroine is not the strongest, she is not weak either. She is both strong and growth-oriented, growing on the basis of strength. (Os: Those who are directly invincible may be boring. Of course, there are also those who are not boring, but they are rarely boring) Yes, there are also super cute little jellyfish [laughs]

Super invincible and beautiful! This is my first book review! To be honest, I think it is better than many games with a score of 9 or above. There are fewer illogical aspects, but there is a slight contradiction in the heroine's supplementary system knowledge. Judging from the heroine's growth experience, she definitely has a lot of combat experience. The female-oriented thinking is also reflected very well in Yaoyao! It's been a long time since I've seen a novel that suits my taste like this! 🍅Hurry up and push the stream! ! I believe this rating will definitely rise to 9 as more people wait to see it! ! !

[Crying] It's been a long time since I've come across a book that suits my taste. The heroine's form is not procrastinating, she does what she says, and she returns with her previous life's cultivation. It's really cool! Hey hey hey, the male protagonist is also the kind of person I like with a wet love brain. He gives me a cheche every few pictures haha ​​I have never been so full [shy]

It's great to watch. I really like the egoism of the heroine. What's wrong with your little temper? The heroine has strength and looks, and it is the privilege of the strong to do whatever they want. And when the heroine led the demon tribe out of Zhongzhou, she was so handsome that I was so handsome that I carried the banner for the heroine. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Very well written! ! I never expected that she would be the one to kill Xiao Chengfeng in the end. From the early stage, we only heard that she was one month pregnant, and later she killed Xiao Chengfeng after being sacrificed. It was so surprising. This plot was so exciting to watch! The author's erotic descriptions are also very powerful, haha, so cool! I especially appreciate the decisiveness of the heroine. She kills her directly at the beginning, and then she chooses to hibernate when she really can't kill her. Overall, the killing is very refreshing. In addition, I particularly like the setting of the little jellyfish. The point equipment in the little jellyfish mall is also very well designed! Including the setting of the heroine's self-destruction in her previous life and the destruction of the world, I particularly like it. The description of the Bodhi tree is also very cute. At the end, the part about parents becoming numb to acting seems very real when I think about it carefully. I was completely carried away while reading the article, and the progress of the plot was very exciting! The author is really a good example of good writing and good detail. I hope the rating will increase. It's worth it.

I finished reading it in one go. It's really good. Can you please post some pictures of the heroine's parents? I really want to read it. This book is really good. I'll update it soon. [Exploration]

It's good-looking, at least it's not cowardly, and the male protagonist's sword spirit is very funny, while the female protagonist's sword spirit is a bit awkward.

The writing is delicate [laughing], and the story is eloquent [sending heartfelt]. The female protagonist and the male protagonist have known each other since they were young [salute], but were cut off by the fake male protagonist (a sweet potato [staring]). The writing is refreshing and refreshing, even better than the short drama. But it's different. The bad guys are not invincible. It's so good😆 It's really good-looking, [][][][][] I wanted to read it and leave a comment, but I couldn't hold it back in the middle and commented in advance. To summarize again, this article has no knife, no knife, no knife. The important thing is to say it three times. It is very logical and touching, and it all touches on what I like. ① People cannot be perfect, and the world also needs the conservation of yin and yang, so there must always be evil and good, which are opposite and restrictive of each other, so there will not be only good ones, and here it allows bad people to exist, but they are not completely bad people (taking advantage of a loophole, but everything is just right) ②Full text cough cough cough, you know, there are more ③There is no knife in the whole process, and it can always stop my tears. I love it so much [Sending my heart] I've already recommended it to my friends, go ahead 🥰

It's quite good to watch, the system is good, the female lead is good, the male lead is good, the teacher is good, and Gao Gao is good. The male and female protagonists may not quite understand each other's feelings, and there may be a slight conflict, but this small conflict will not have a big impact, because the male protagonist is willing to be a spare tire and a dog, and the female protagonist also likes the male protagonist very much (the time for conflicts is not as long as the time when I am in a real relationship). There are two obvious advantages. The first one is that there is a bit too much. The second is that the heroine wants to be the protagonist. During this period, the system tells her the evaluation of the heroine outside the book, which is equivalent to interacting with us. For example, the heroine is afraid that people outside the world will not like her, but the system responds that they all like her. The comments in this paragraph are also very friendly, and come from our real-life friends expressing their love for the heroine.

Yes, yes, good-looking [shy] The heroine is forced to love the hero. This marriage is good. Many of them have passed [shy]. In the early stage, both of them didn't open their mouths. They both liked each other😍 The heroine's highlights have not been robbed, and her strength is also strong. She is reborn with the strength she gained from her previous life. It's normal for the heroine to have sex [makes a face], it's very friendly to my breasts, and it feels good. But the heroine is also suffering [almost crying]. No one teaches her. The most popular thing is the AI jellyfish, but the teaching is limited. The heroine did it all on her own [almost crying] before she was reborn, she also did it without the little jellyfish [almost crying] (that stallion all depends on women [laughing awkwardly] In the end, she looked down on women in the end [awkward laughter]) Only after she was reborn could she have real elders to teach her [almost crying] There are some ma vocabulary words that some readers want to change to dad. The author will also change them. Very good [blowing kiss][blowing kiss] It turns out that stallion is quite disgusting and makes the female protagonist miserable. She works during the day and has to serve him and his little wives. She also has to warm his bed at night. She has no money and no time to exploit her [awkward laugh]. Of course, the system skipped the stallion plot that happened to the female protagonist [almost crying] Our little jellyfish system is also very good. I love the heroine and will be willing to cheat on her. She also has big elbows. Just like this, we feed our Yaoyao big with plates of elbows. And there are also readers' comments that go into the plot of the plot. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I know how my friend feels about chasing stars. I was so excited when I saw this. And these are comments from real readers. There is no such plot of obscenity about this and that. It is also from the perspective of a stallion. Even if it is not good, it is still the reaction of the young couple before. This is very good.

It's good-looking, very good-looking, everyone is watching it, hey, hey, hey, I can't bear to leave everyone, can you write another 5 million words of extras? Oh my god, rice, rice, hungry, [crying] [crying] [crying] I can't do it anymore, how can I be so good at writing, it's so good that it kills me [crying] [crying] [crying]

Looks good, looks good, looks good! ! ! ! I like the character of the heroine very much. She kills enemies cleanly and handsomely. I have already worshiped her. Ꮚ˘ ꈊ ˘ᏊThe interaction with the male protagonist is also very interesting. I like it! ! ! The author please give me a lot of encouragement, love you [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

I have been reading this book for a long time and have been following it. I can't say that the writing is particularly delicate, but I just feel like I am immersed in it. And it doesn't feel like a brainless thing. It's not that it's realistic to rely on the male protagonist and the female protagonist to be vulnerable.

Ahhhhhhhh! Super! ! Invincible! ! ! Nice book! ! ! ! Fine chaff, fine chaff! Yu Yao is really too motivated, too beautiful, and too hardworking! Her love with her Taoist companions and friends, and the power of the group portrait, are so beautiful! ! ! The little jellyfish is also very shocking and touching, and very protective! ! The adults who were rescued in the end were "very bad, very bad". They sacrificed their lives for the sake of the children. It was really great. The power of family love makes people cry! ! ! [Love] The author's writing style is so delicate, touching and good! Falling in love with this author is as easy as drinking water! ! !

It's super good, I really like this kind of plot [shy] It's just that the heroine's baby is a little awkward with the hero, I hope they can express their love boldly [laughing]

I asked why I love reading so much. It turns out that this author wrote a book. The teacher must write a hundred chapters a day! This book is also very good-looking, with a real sense of life. The heroine has a different personality than the previous one, but the same liveliness. I really like Yu Yao's little domineering character who does whatever she wants and doesn't care about other people's lives. The male protagonist is also an obedient and dank puppy like a machine. It's a good read and I love it. I hope it will be finished suddenly when I wake up tomorrow morning so that I can finish it!

The heroine is quite a powerful character, she fights and kills without any nonsense. It's not affected by the plot anymore, it's normal no matter how upset you are! Like this. (´-ω-`) Regarding the emotional line: It's all mandatory. The heroine should just say she likes it. After all, the hero has already liked her very much. Don't deliberately say something sarcastic to follow the plot •ᴗ•💧Please be generous, okay! ! ! Stop procrastinating and dragging your feelings, or just fight monsters and level up, and quickly deal with that Long Aotian🤬

The writing is very, very good, it just creates the kind of heroine who is very domineering, very charming, and sometimes very cute. Oh my god, this image really pokes me, Yaoyao, I love you.

It looks good and I like the character of the heroine. There is no internal friction. The scene where the original hero died was well designed. It was not the heroine who killed him, but a mortal who he had always looked down upon and ignored. Wang Ying is strong as a mother. Her character is a bit fuller and the heroine is also very strong. She has found a way for herself in the beginning of Tianbeng. The hero is also very good. He has always loved and believed in the heroine and is very good at self-guided strategies.

Sisters who came in, please read it, it's been a long time since I've seen a book that suits my taste. I also like the male and female protagonists, as well as the plot lines and emotional scenes. It's a pity that it's a serial. I saved it for many days and accidentally ended up crying again. Can the author learn from the production team and keep writing like a wheel rolling around?

Very beautiful\(//∇//)\! The heroine's baby is sometimes really cute, sometimes really super handsome! ! ! How did Long Aotian become the male lead? It's so shameless, so disgusting! The system is also very good! (*^@^*) Finally, I want to be a comment_ @ Southeast A Bridge

There is such a good-looking novel, why did I just pick it up now? I highly recommend it. It is so enjoyable to write. The female protagonist is really strong, not weaker than the male protagonist, and our male protagonist. The author is very good at writing competent male protagonists. The male protagonist really focuses on the female protagonist wholeheartedly, and the highlight is all on the female protagonist. I highly recommend this novel

It's so beautiful. The heroine needs to fight, kill, and save. The monsters she saves have almost become an army. Will there be a decisive battle later? The male protagonist is a boring gourd. In his previous life, he pretended to be forced to love her, but after the female protagonist left, he became a good husband. I learned green tea in this life🍵🍵🍵🍵🍵🍵🍵

The heroine is beautiful, sassy and ruthless, her beauty is maximal, she is decisive in killing, and she is very decisive in dealing with enemies. She often wants to lock up the hero by any means necessary to achieve her goals. The hero is hard-spoken and soft-hearted, and has a top love brain. She is in danger of going crazy and killing, mistakenly thinking that she likes others, and is willing to be a man's favorite. She is extremely possessive, and equally hates everything that catches her eye. The two of them get along, and their awkwardness is sweet, which is great! [After being slapped, Yan Wujin walked out the door, stood in the corridor and touched his stinging and numb cheek. The faint fragrance lingered on the tip of his nose. He seemed to be carefully savoring the pain the girl had given him. The next moment, the corners of his mouth curved up in a strange way, the kind that couldn't be seen without looking carefully. Fine. She was also willing to hit him. That means there is still room. He thought she would be so angry that she would kill him directly, or be so disgusted that she would never want to see him again. Yan Wujin, who had been hanging around for a whole day and night, finally felt relieved, and then frowned again. Yu Yao's hand would definitely hurt if he hit him so hard. It was all his fault.

How can I say that the heroine is beautiful, sassy and good-looking. Although she is vicious, she has principles. The evil in my heart is poisonous to my bones, and I feel warm and comfortable all over my body. The content of the book is very exciting, very [shy][shy][shy]. I suggest the author arrange more slap-in-the-face plots, because it is more enjoyable.

It's very interesting, with a pure and sultry male protagonist and a tsundere and coquettish female protagonist. I saw some reviews saying that the male and female protagonists don't open their mouths. After reading it, I actually felt that it was okay and I quickly talked about it. Maybe it was because I had read a book before that was more frustrating and had endless conflicts. In comparison, this one is really nothing.