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The author should change his name, what the second generation official of the Siheyuan and Widow Qiao have to tell

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A young man likes a 30-year-old mother of three children. This is the protagonist. How much did the author drink?

The author is short and weak! ! !

A young man of 17 or 18 and a widow in her 30s or so in her 50s or 60s. The author really dares to think about the era! Young and old don't remember it

After seeing the ratings, I realized that Tomato's rating mechanism is a bit bad! Those with a rating of 8 or so can make people vomit, while those that can keep watching have low ratings. Of course, most of them have low ratings and are terrible! ! ! This book can be read, and it is still broad

The beginning is really unwatchable. The protagonist travels through Canada, and is actually close to the Widow and He Yuzhu. In modern society, even if the neighbors are familiar to each other, do you need to rush to make friends if you know the character of the people in the courtyard and your own identity?

Originally, you changed the world, the characters looked different from those in the show, the plot and story timeline were also different, and different people only had the same name, so forget it, at worst, it would be used as a fun article, but what you wrote was so uncomfortable! Either she is a virgin or a coward. She also specifically emphasizes that the protagonist is socially anxious, has an introverted and weak personality, and is not good at communicating with others. Just like that, he still uses his personality to get angry at the system! ! Moreover, you have set up the protagonist's character to be so awesome, how can you still let the protagonist have a harem? I just want to know why someone who is afraid of society, has a weak and introverted personality, and is not good at communicating keeps a harem! When you write a novel, you don't touch the main genre, so why are you wasting your little brains on it? Why did you sleep on Jia Zhang's bed and lick her to make her comfortable? Why don't you walk sideways in the courtyard? Isn't this more reasonable than the foreshadowing you came up with? ? ?

It is a rare good book with clear logic and a storyline that is in line with the reality of the time and is reasonable. The auxiliary function of the golden finger is not outrageous, and it will not make people feel that the system is too sci-fi or fantasy. It has been added to the bookshelf, please speed up the update.

The writing is pretty good, not as ugly as some readers said! After all, the protagonist is a greasy middle-aged otaku in his forties. Although his body is eighteen years old, his soul is in his forties. What's so strange about a mother who likes her third son? Ma Niu Niu is still about forty. Do you think there is a thirty year old who likes it?

The author will send your family away too

Haha, brother Hao, sister Ru, I am so embarrassed that I have cancer. You should write that I am Feng'er and you are Sha. As an author, you should write romance novels. Hahaha, you can fool everyone.

The first 34 chapters looked good, but why did it change in chapter 35? Two time-travelers were created. Do you have the writing skills to control it? Isn't this a hot topic? Why did I still want to write a historical masterpiece?

Yes, it's just that Qin Huairu has been the same in a few years, so why don't you make a fool of yourself? There was some intention in the past, but it was gone in the second chapter. There is also the reborn person. I always feel that the protagonist wants to rush to add more. It is unnecessary. Are you writing it for some spiritual water? It's not that the protagonist doesn't have a system. I don't think he will be worse than a reborn person if he signs in every day for a few years. Since the protagonist wants to be ordinary, he doesn't need to always get close to each other. He can just hug the girl and watch the reborn person fight against the idiots and the others.

I personally feel very bad about focusing on Da Qin.

Damn, the plot starts again [face-covering][face-covering][face-covering]

The author has read the chronicle of the female channel, and ended up writing it like this. I am so disappointed. Ever since I watched the female channel Nian Wen watching Siheyuan, one is in the sky and the other is in the underground. There is no comparison. I was lucky enough to read Siheyuan written by a female author. The protagonist slept with all the famous and good-looking women, but did not get Qin Huairu. Even the female author disliked it. How could the male author not get over this trap? Cao, bad luck!

It is the first time for two time travelers to see such a strange setting in a courtyard house. Two stars will be deducted. Yan Laosan stabbed you in the back. If you can forgive me, I will deduct 1 star from you. Not my cup of tea, I wish you good grades and say goodbye!

Not bad, come on, Saonian Ollie!

I don't understand why the author created a time traveler again? Is it specifically designed to disgust readers? The protagonist I wrote the year before last was awesome, but the sequel was so frustrating. Besides, the protagonist is not bad at all, either? Why do I always feel that I don't have any confidence when facing later time travellers? Author, what do you want to express?