This book has a traditional slow pace and flows endlessly. It is neither invincible nor refreshing, so read with caution.
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The terrifying murderer who splits people in half at the beginning, the mysterious little girl who follows the guests in the apartment, the desperate and strange dark city, the high-end world that crushes Blue Star...
After picking up a red bead, Chen Ye was taken to strange worlds by the mysterious system. In order to survive, he could only complete the death tasks arranged by the system one by one.
During this period, he met other players who had the same experience, so they formed a team to survive together...
Reader comments
Dear readers:
Here, as a writer, I am deeply sorry. Because I find that my mind has stalled and I cannot continue to finish this article. I know this may be disappointing and disturbing to you, but please allow me to explain why.
First, I hit creative block. As creators, we all encounter this problem. Sometimes inspiration flows like a fountain, and sometimes it seems to disappear without a trace. During these times, I try to find new inspiration by resting, reading, and thinking, but sadly, that doesn't seem to be working this time.
Secondly, there were some changes in my life. In the past period of time, I have been facing some personal and family problems, which have caused a sudden increase in my mental stress. Although I work hard to adjust myself to these challenges, they still have a great impact on my creations.
Third, I realized that the depth and breadth of this article was beyond my capabilities. During the writing process, I gradually discovered that the topics and ideas involved in this article were very complex and required more in-depth research and thinking. And in the current situation, I can't ensure that I can fully explore these themes.
Although many factors prevented me from completing this article, I still value your support and attention. Please believe that I will do my best to overcome the current difficulties so as to bring you better works in the future.
I would like to apologize again and thank you for your patience and understanding. I hope you can continue to pay attention to and support my creation, and we will grow together in the days to come.
Sincerely
[Author first]
5 Points is okay. There are currently 3 dungeons. The first town novice dungeon introduces the protagonist's abilities and settings. It is fast-paced but exciting. The second apartment has cheats for the protagonist (Yan and A'er). What is a little uncomfortable is that the rich second generation is not dead. I hope it is just a foreshadowing. The third longest has not been completed yet. I hope there will be a review session later to complete the background story and events. The protagonist of this dungeon is currently relatively passive, and the other characters have a lot of highlights. I hope the protagonist will have a back-up plan later.
In addition, regarding the protagonist's combat power, it is not too outrageous at the moment but it is already a trend. (Low level but strong combat power) The pupil technique has great potential, and Ah Er cheats. I hope that the combat power will not collapse in the future, but it is best not to suppress the protagonist's level. The protagonist is still level 1. If it is too suppressed, other characters It is difficult to write about level 10 and level 20 abilities later on. This kind of novel is most afraid of reaching level 2.30, Which is the late stage. It is recommended to directly ignore the level in the future. For example, after reaching level 20, there will be no level, and it will become another title, such as super player, perfecter, etc., Who can stack realms.
The main plot should be to avenge the parents, and the heroine is not obvious. The character creation can refer to the title style. When introducing a person, introduce the title first, which is more memorable, or a unique online name.
I still hope the author will work hard!
Family members, leave some comments to warm up the comment area and lightly spray. [Love][love][love]
The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work
Five-star praise, please go to the author
Write ヽ(⌐■㉨■)ノ♪♬ well, it's pretty good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡
Come on! (ง, There's no big difference so far, it looks great, come on (ง ˙o˙)ว Great
It's okay, a pretty good horror unlimited stream.
Personal feeling is good
Give good reviews first, lest the author loses motivation. It feels okay
Why haven't you updated it? This book is very well written and the plot is also good.
Dear readers: Here, as a writer, I am deeply sorry. Because I find that my mind has stalled and I cannot continue to finish this article. I know this may be disappointing and disturbing to you, but please allow me to explain why. First, I hit creative block. As creators, we all encounter this problem. Sometimes inspiration flows like a fountain, and sometimes it seems to disappear without a trace. During these times, I try to find new inspiration by resting, reading, and thinking, but sadly, that doesn't seem to be working this time. Secondly, there were some changes in my life. In the past period of time, I have been facing some personal and family problems, which have caused a sudden increase in my mental stress. Although I work hard to adjust myself to these challenges, they still have a great impact on my creations. Third, I realized that the depth and breadth of this article was beyond my capabilities. During the writing process, I gradually discovered that the topics and ideas involved in this article were very complex and required more in-depth research and thinking. And in the current situation, I can't ensure that I can fully explore these themes. Although many factors prevented me from completing this article, I still value your support and attention. Please believe that I will do my best to overcome the current difficulties so as to bring you better works in the future. I would like to apologize again and thank you for your patience and understanding. I hope you can continue to pay attention to and support my creation, and we will grow together in the days to come. Sincerely [Author first]
5 Points is okay. There are currently 3 dungeons. The first town novice dungeon introduces the protagonist's abilities and settings. It is fast-paced but exciting. The second apartment has cheats for the protagonist (Yan and A'er). What is a little uncomfortable is that the rich second generation is not dead. I hope it is just a foreshadowing. The third longest has not been completed yet. I hope there will be a review session later to complete the background story and events. The protagonist of this dungeon is currently relatively passive, and the other characters have a lot of highlights. I hope the protagonist will have a back-up plan later. In addition, regarding the protagonist's combat power, it is not too outrageous at the moment but it is already a trend. (Low level but strong combat power) The pupil technique has great potential, and Ah Er cheats. I hope that the combat power will not collapse in the future, but it is best not to suppress the protagonist's level. The protagonist is still level 1. If it is too suppressed, other characters It is difficult to write about level 10 and level 20 abilities later on. This kind of novel is most afraid of reaching level 2.30, Which is the late stage. It is recommended to directly ignore the level in the future. For example, after reaching level 20, there will be no level, and it will become another title, such as super player, perfecter, etc., Who can stack realms. The main plot should be to avenge the parents, and the heroine is not obvious. The character creation can refer to the title style. When introducing a person, introduce the title first, which is more memorable, or a unique online name. I still hope the author will work hard!
Family members, leave some comments to warm up the comment area and lightly spray. [Love][love][love]
The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work
Five-star praise, please go to the author
Write ヽ(⌐■㉨■)ノ♪♬ well, it's pretty good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡
Come on! (ง, There's no big difference so far, it looks great, come on (ง ˙o˙)ว Great
It's okay, a pretty good horror unlimited stream.
Personal feeling is good
Give good reviews first, lest the author loses motivation. It feels okay
Why haven't you updated it? This book is very well written and the plot is also good.