Zhuoxiu

The writing is pretty good, but the only downside is that it takes too long to get used to it? When it comes to letting the protagonist adapt to killing people, he has already embarked on the path of cultivating immortality. It is impossible without blood. How can he embark on the road to immortality without seeing blood? The heroine Li Yunchou

This rating is subjective. I read this book because of the yandere. It was okay in the early stage. I don't think there is anything wrong with the transformation of the heroine's character later on. It is well written. If you like watching battles, it is suitable for this book. But there are too few emotional scenes. I hope to see more of the male and female protagonists getting along. There are too many other plots. For example, I followed the master to practice. After returning, my strength did not improve much. It took me a long time to write the Taoist meeting, but the heroine's roles became less and less. There is nothing to watch... I skipped reading about 300 chapters. In fact, I really didn't have the intention to read the plot. It is a bit messy if I say it, but there is nothing poisonous about it. The subject matter of this book is quite good, and the potential is quite high. But the author is too busy recently and the updates are slow. I suggest the author speed up the decoupling. The current pace is too slow. I want to read the yandere every day...

It's good-looking, and the characters and the characters are vividly portrayed, but I just don't understand why a book that's so good-looking doesn't get much popularity. I'm afraid the author is still doing it out of love [face covering], and I hope to recommend it soon.

No, where can you find me a novel with such vivid characters, such exciting plot, such fresh writing, and a yandere heroine?

It's very interesting. I just want to make some suggestions. Can you separate what each person said? Can you add more words? I also hope that the author will update it quickly and write better and better.

Maybe there are two heroines, but their personalities are too different. But the emotional descriptions are really good, and I really like the personality of the first-timer. The last novel I read on Tomato, I unloaded it after reading it. Author update soon

The rhythm of the chapters is well controlled, and each chapter has a hook. The development of traditional fantasy novels is slower, and the character descriptions are also good. I have only seen half of it now, and I feel that there is nothing wrong with it, but there is not much traffic. Maybe few people have watched traditional fantasy. But I hope the author can work hard to finish it, take into account the development of the incident, and send more sweets.

The plot is compact and the chapters are quite large.

The psychological growth of the protagonist is well written, but it still lacks some decisiveness later on. Why does the protagonist suddenly become wise later? The protagonist's mind is not as good as when he first left the village. He still knew how to take precautions when he first left the village. But later, when others failed to snatch the treasure, he reconciled with the protagonist in just one sentence? It's really uncomfortable to forcibly reduce one's intelligence, and the protagonist just sighs and has no choice. Haven't you experienced so much and you haven't changed at all? You don't have any subjective consciousness. What do you think it is what others say? It's quite nice in the front, but the level drops off a cliff in the back.

Fortunately, I was a little surprised when the heroine became a yandere later on. Generally speaking - the male protagonist is too noble (he said it himself), and the female protagonist is too yandere (a kind of natural selfishness, which may come from her own life experience) (obviously). Looking forward to the next story. About this book: The characters are distinct and each has its own characteristics.

It's a good single heroine. The heroine is quite strong and a bit yandere. The world view is also quite interesting.

Treasure book. I like this kind of possessive article about two strong siblings. Come on, the author, don't cheat.

Yes, you can indeed see the growth of the protagonist. The book review mentioned that the protagonist Madonna is only in the early stage, and later she personally solves her enemies. However, the plot is a group portrait, and the names are confusing. The appearance is so fast that listening to the book will affect the plot experience. The rest is good.

It's okay, but it takes too long to get used to, and the content feels a bit lacking.

It's so beautiful, it's the kind of classic traditional text that I like [love][love]

Come on, author, it looks good. One thing to say, other books have less than 50 reviews and most of them are rated around 6.0, But this one is rated at 7.0. Come on, author, don't go to the palace.

Only you can tell whether you like it or not.

It's so beautiful. Hahaha. It's related to the title. The writing is so good.

Super good-looking, the heroine is yandere + fantasy + immortality, super bonus points, but the update seems to be unstable [smile] Author, please write me quickly [punch out] [punch out]

The subject matter is novel, the writing is excellent, and there are few flaws.

Looks good! If you like it, you can try it. The older sister is stronger and the younger brother is weaker. The heroine is very domineering! The plot is also good

The plot is very interesting. It's a pretty good book. It would be better if each person's words could be separated into separate paragraphs. Otherwise, the characters would appear to be a bit confusing.

The heroine doesn't feel yandere [what]

Very good article Fire Tongs Liu Ming

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I think it's very beautiful

New idea, a bit interesting

Come on, man, it looks good [Adoration]

Yes, overall settings

In my opinion this is a good book!