Crossing the Star Iron: Star Twins at the Beginning

It's very good, especially the kissing scene between the stars [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

I like the super rare two protagonists "Xing" and "Qiong" in Bengtie. I hope the author will work hard and not give up on this book. 😘

₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑ This is my first official fanfic. I am better at writing about daily life, with a rough plot and main line, but I will fill in and modify a lot of the middle plot, including the ending. After finishing the writing, Belloberg will first expand a paragraph based on the adventure he described before getting on the train on March 7 (because there are more people on the train, the carriage needs to be expanded, so it makes sense to help people run errands). If you like it, you can add a bookshelf, and if you find it interesting, you can give it a good review. (It should not be OOC. If it is, you can boldly encourage us and we will try to figure it out!)

Nice. At the time, I didn't have high expectations because it was recommended by the author, but after reading it, I found that it was quite to my liking, the plot was innovative (fun), and the characters of the supporting characters were well described, and there was nothing OOC about it. It's just too slow to update. I finished reading it all at once. The author will update it quickly (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The author writes fluently and has his own opinions on character portrayal Those who are short on books can give it a try, it's a good Iron Man fanfic!

Originally I was holding a casual I originally took a look at it casually, but I didn't expect it to be very popular with me. The setting of the two protagonists at the beginning is very good, and the change of the main plot without deviating from the track gave me a familiar and strange feeling. It is really amazing |･ω･｀) I have to give you five stars just for not having the sword Cocolia (ω< )★ Halfway through reading, I immediately felt that the Star Dome Railway in my hand no longer smells good. I hope the author can keep updating (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ[Love] (Also looking forward to the plot of Pinoconi)

If the author sees my comment, I hope you can listen to my suggestions: The current plot is quite interesting, abstract and humorous, but your content is gradually deviating from the main line, and the content of Beng 3 and the original is a bit too much. I hope the author will think about it and post the main line [face covering]

It looks great, please update soon! The emotional line is slow, I hope it's just a slow one and not a eunuch male protagonist. Since there are so many heroines written, don't just choose one! Overall very good, no knife. Great work from the author. This book is not a eunuch! ! ! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's very interesting to watch. The plot is coherent and OOC-free. The style is more daily, but the battle plot is well described and captivating. The only problem is that one chapter a day is not enough (｀Δ´)! Please update

Very good, very good. It retains the characteristics of the characters and is not OOC, but also adds a lot of the author's own understanding. The plot does not rely on the original plot of the game. It is very interesting. It's just that the updates are a little slow.

Four stars, sometimes the main character and the plot are quite inexplicable. She can beat someone with an eye patch, but she knows she can't beat someone who takes off the eye patch, so she still has to show off and let someone take it off. After taking it off, she wrote "hot" and ended up getting a flat A from the other side. After being beaten, she had to put it on again.

To be honest, there are not many novels that I can read again in the name of waiting for updates. The protagonist is a star on the surface, but in fact, he is not only the captain of Hyperion, but also a traveler from another world. He is also Qiong's brother, a fellow traveler on the train, Beloberg's savior, and the benefactor of the fairy boat. All the actions of the protagonist seem to be expected, but also seem to be unexpected. In short, if you have nothing to do and read it a few times, you will always find the clues that you have not discovered before. Thanks to the author for his great efforts in updating.

It's good to watch, but it seems to favor multiple female protagonists. Personally, I prefer single female protagonists or no female protagonists.

It's good to read. It's one of the better books I've read in Bengtie. The quality is very good. [Like] [Like] [Like]

Okay, okay, it suits my taste very well. I didn't like this book because of the name before, but today I accidentally clicked on it and read it for a while. It felt pretty good. Although the protagonist also has a golden finger, but his presence is not high, it is basically useless. It's okay. It's very good.

It's so good to watch, I hope I can keep writing it and it won't end unfinished, and it's not impossible to have more female protagonists in this series [shy]

I personally think it's very good, and I also want to see Star Dome CP!

This is the real Star Iron, turning this unhappy world into what you like! The knives are all gone haha, Yun Shang Wu Xiao's demon body has been cured, Ting Yun is not dead, Liu Ying's anentropy has been cured, this is the Star Iron I want

It's simple and clear. I think it looks very good, but it's a bit short and the star feels a bit weak. It feels like it's missing at critical moments. I suggest you strengthen the star.

It's pretty and has its own rhythm.

Very nice, don't let it suck

The plot is unusually good, but can there be a girl behind Qiong? . It always feels like a drama [exploration]

Although the language is fluent and not gorgeous, the reading is natural and free, and the emotions are vivid and rich. I will add it to my bookshelf when it is updated.

It's pretty good^ω^ Even though I watched it with a jump, Qiong Mei's and my characters are still a bit similar. My friends all said they were similar after watching it [Like]

Haokan [cool], I was recommended by the author when I was looking for a book. The plot is innovative, and it feels like a happy ending in the game. Also, we need to be considerate of the author. The original plot did not end like Honzo, which made it difficult for the author to continue writing. It is recommended that the author write more about daily [love] instead of water (personally, I feel that Edo Star is not as good-looking as the previous ones, and too many Genshin Impact and Honzo are mixed together to make it look bad)

The writing is very good, the personal setting is also good, the transition is perfect, the description is very appropriate, there are many heroines, the atmosphere is very ambiguous, the protagonist is Yang Wei [laughing and crying]

The writing is pretty good, and the originality is quite good.

I'm not good at words, so I give you five stars. I just hope the author can write more and not be too careful [eating melon] [eating melon] Damn it, after reading the comments, it immediately influenced me to read the plot of this book. The emotional scenes are indeed a bit inexplicable [face covering]

It's good-looking, it's my type, but it's a little lacking

It's great. If you like it, remember to catch the wild author in the comment area and make him update like crazy [laughing]