The protagonist traveled to the elf world, started as an orphan, climbed up step by step, and used the resources in his hands to achieve his own goals. The three brothers who started from the orphanage together showed their talents in their respective fields and finally destroyed their opponents. The protagonist has no golden fingers. From being naive in the beginning, to being calm in the middle, to strategizing in the later stages, what happened in the middle? Let us follow the protagonist's perspective, grow step by step, and finally stand out from the crowd!
Reader comments
The writing is really good. It is very rare to find a Pokémon novel like this in today's Tomato. The plot is very tight with ups and downs, and there is no inexplicable feeling. The development of the plot can also be found in the previous chapters. The author has put enough effort into the characterization of the characters and the impact of the plot on the readers. The first few chapters can be regarded as the transformation process of the protagonist as a little kid, such as meeting the big boy. The blood-sucking bat makes the protagonist feel betrayed by the elves for the first time. The plot of the villain and the death of Nido are enough for the protagonist to complete the transformation and lose his childishness. Personally, I feel that the death of Nido is the turning point and the finishing touch in the early stage of this book. I hope the author will not leave it unfinished later. At the same time, I would like to remind the author that this book has recommended more chapters in the past few days to capture this wave of traffic.
It's good to watch, but it's a pity that the male protagonist Nidoking died trying to save the male protagonist.
The writing is good, the story has ups and downs, and there is no irritation. The portrayal of the protagonist and the characters are also lifelike. The plot of the story is not chaotic, but arranged in an orderly manner. In this era when everyone likes to read refreshing articles, the author has not followed the trend of the times like the author. This novel is simply a breath of fresh air in this era. I hope the author can continue to work hard, come on! ! !
The writing is getting better and better [Like], and the emotions between the protagonists are well described [Adoration]. I am looking forward to the upcoming storyline more and more [Please update]
I feel it's very well written. A very strange feeling. Just like the novel written by Sister Quan in Tokyo Meals. It's obviously very violent and bloody. But I think it looks good. I cried especially for the two pictures of "The Death of the Extreme King". Very immersive, highly recommended.
Beautiful, very exciting
Author, you are so short and thin.
Not bad. In fact, I think you can give Xiaozhi the fighting skills when meeting trainers in the wild. When you meet Team Rocket, in addition to the elf battle, let Xiaozhi defeat them directly, so that the battle can be resolved quickly.
Really well written
If you like Pokémon, you can come to the taptap platform to support our studio game, the first chapter of the Legend of the National Beast. Thank you.
It's really beautiful. It's a pity that Nidoking is dead. Can Nidoking be turned into a ghost elf in the future?
This book is definitely worth reading. It rejects the formulaic process of traditional elf novels. The plot is rich and the battles are exciting and will not make people feel bored (some spicy elf novels are full of competitions, here and there, 80% of the content of the whole book is competition. The elf world is colorful and not just about fighting). Moreover, the characters have their own growth experience and are not perfect from the beginning, so that an ordinary person can have a better sense of involvement. I still hope that more people will read this book and get a different feeling from the clichéd elf writing.
It's well written and opens up a new story for elf fans. Keep up the good work! [Praise]
Come on, it's very exciting and there is still a lot of room for improvement.
Although this book is short, most of the plot is not broken, and there are some truths about life. This book is a quick read and takes less than a day to read. Overall, it is worth reading. Some things in it are quite good. The protagonist's step-by-step transformation is not as good as I imagined, but it is still readable!
? Another Pokémon Star ⭐
Don't be a eunuch, I'm chasing it
The author's evaluation of your books is very good, but I have a question. When he and Kodora, well, it should be the evolutionary battle, why did it suddenly disappear? Grandma's. Author, I advise you to work hard and continue writing, otherwise hehehehehe [angry]
Before I read it, give it a five-star review.
I like this very much
It's beautiful and written very realistically.
It was well written, but a bit short. When the second elf of the protagonist died, I was surprised. I will continue writing and look forward to your follow-up.
This is the best Pokémon I've ever seen
Tomato's rare painless elf writing is like watching a scroll unfold slowly, without any rush or delay. The plot progresses. Come on, author!
Come on, it's different from the Pokémon stories I've read before [Love]
Come on! Come on
This book is not recommended. I feel like I won't live much longer.
The twists and turns of the plot are too real. It is different from other Pokémon novels. It can only be said that it varies from person to person. I didn't find the part about driving away the Big Mouth Bat to be poisonous.
Come on author, I am very optimistic about you
Okay, okay
It is worth recommending. It is a rare good book among a bunch of bad books. The only shortcoming is that the ending is too hasty, but it is handled well and is acceptable.
It looks good and the experience is very realistic.
No, is it over so soon?
The writing is really good. It is very rare to find a Pokémon novel like this in today's Tomato. The plot is very tight with ups and downs, and there is no inexplicable feeling. The development of the plot can also be found in the previous chapters. The author has put enough effort into the characterization of the characters and the impact of the plot on the readers. The first few chapters can be regarded as the transformation process of the protagonist as a little kid, such as meeting the big boy. The blood-sucking bat makes the protagonist feel betrayed by the elves for the first time. The plot of the villain and the death of Nido are enough for the protagonist to complete the transformation and lose his childishness. Personally, I feel that the death of Nido is the turning point and the finishing touch in the early stage of this book. I hope the author will not leave it unfinished later. At the same time, I would like to remind the author that this book has recommended more chapters in the past few days to capture this wave of traffic.
It's good to watch, but it's a pity that the male protagonist Nidoking died trying to save the male protagonist.
The writing is good, the story has ups and downs, and there is no irritation. The portrayal of the protagonist and the characters are also lifelike. The plot of the story is not chaotic, but arranged in an orderly manner. In this era when everyone likes to read refreshing articles, the author has not followed the trend of the times like the author. This novel is simply a breath of fresh air in this era. I hope the author can continue to work hard, come on! ! ! The writing is getting better and better [Like], and the emotions between the protagonists are well described [Adoration]. I am looking forward to the upcoming storyline more and more [Please update]
I feel it's very well written. A very strange feeling. Just like the novel written by Sister Quan in Tokyo Meals. It's obviously very violent and bloody. But I think it looks good. I cried especially for the two pictures of "The Death of the Extreme King". Very immersive, highly recommended.
Beautiful, very exciting
Author, you are so short and thin.
Not bad. In fact, I think you can give Xiaozhi the fighting skills when meeting trainers in the wild. When you meet Team Rocket, in addition to the elf battle, let Xiaozhi defeat them directly, so that the battle can be resolved quickly.
Really well written
If you like Pokémon, you can come to the taptap platform to support our studio game, the first chapter of the Legend of the National Beast. Thank you.
It's really beautiful. It's a pity that Nidoking is dead. Can Nidoking be turned into a ghost elf in the future?
This book is definitely worth reading. It rejects the formulaic process of traditional elf novels. The plot is rich and the battles are exciting and will not make people feel bored (some spicy elf novels are full of competitions, here and there, 80% of the content of the whole book is competition. The elf world is colorful and not just about fighting). Moreover, the characters have their own growth experience and are not perfect from the beginning, so that an ordinary person can have a better sense of involvement. I still hope that more people will read this book and get a different feeling from the clichéd elf writing.
It's well written and opens up a new story for elf fans. Keep up the good work! [Praise]
Come on, it's very exciting and there is still a lot of room for improvement.
Although this book is short, most of the plot is not broken, and there are some truths about life. This book is a quick read and takes less than a day to read. Overall, it is worth reading. Some things in it are quite good. The protagonist's step-by-step transformation is not as good as I imagined, but it is still readable!
? Another Pokémon Star ⭐
Don't be a eunuch, I'm chasing it
The author's evaluation of your books is very good, but I have a question. When he and Kodora, well, it should be the evolutionary battle, why did it suddenly disappear? Grandma's. Author, I advise you to work hard and continue writing, otherwise hehehehehe [angry]
Before I read it, give it a five-star review.
I like this very much
It's beautiful and written very realistically.
It was well written, but a bit short. When the second elf of the protagonist died, I was surprised. I will continue writing and look forward to your follow-up.
This is the best Pokémon I've ever seen
Tomato's rare painless elf writing is like watching a scroll unfold slowly, without any rush or delay. The plot progresses. Come on, author!
Come on, it's different from the Pokémon stories I've read before [Love] Come on! Come on
This book is not recommended. I feel like I won't live much longer. The twists and turns of the plot are too real. It is different from other Pokémon novels. It can only be said that it varies from person to person. I didn't find the part about driving away the Big Mouth Bat to be poisonous.
Come on author, I am very optimistic about you
Okay, okay
It is worth recommending. It is a rare good book among a bunch of bad books. The only shortcoming is that the ending is too hasty, but it is handled well and is acceptable.
It looks good and the experience is very realistic. No, is it over so soon?
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