HP: by the Lake of Snake Garden, Flowers Bloom on the Other Side

Unknowingly, I have been following the update for such a long time. As one of the oldest fans of this book, I want to say: five stars is the limit of Tomato, not the limit of my rating! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] First of all, in terms of character, the heroine is not a good person in the same sense. She has her own ambitions, goals, and plans for them. She is calm and self-possessed, thoughtful and rules-abiding, so she is a qualified Slytherin. This is exactly why the heroine's design impresses me: a chaotic good guy is far more terrifying than a lawful bad guy. [Learned] Secondly, in terms of plot, this novel lays down a lot of foreshadowing, which can well mobilize our enthusiasm as readers to discuss the plot. Moreover, as far as the known plots are concerned, the plots of this book are interlocking. At the same time, the narrative rhythm is also very reasonable, and the rhythm is relaxed and relaxed. This greatly improves the reading experience of readers. [Learned] Then, in terms of writing style, this book is more drama-oriented, but it is not heavy, because it also intersperses enough daily life in time to make the plot advance unconsciously. This is also the reason why I strongly recommend this book. [Learned] Finally! This book is updated on time! The author will respond to comments carefully! For those who follow the update, this is not true! Often! Great! [Learned][Learned][Learned] In short, this book satisfies the understanding of fan fiction in all aspects: without departing from the structure, background, and concepts of the original work, it also understands, supplements, and extends it, and finally forms its own story. It not only contains the essence of the original work, but also does not fall into the mold of the original work! [Learned][Learned][Learned]

Finally, there was a book that allowed me to see the characteristics of ordinary time-traveling heroines. She did not have a superior mentality, thinking that she was surrounded by paper people and could control everything. There was also no kind of time-traveling where the IQ changed with the changes in the body, and the intelligence did not decrease because the body became smaller. Let me see the most basic qualities of a social animal [laughing and crying]: know what to do, talk and wink without being too flattering, and do not rule out threesomes or turning into dog lickers based on the prophetic plot.

Update it quickly, it looks good. I'm especially looking forward to the way the heroine will become a politician's defense professor after the war. Also, the heroine will look like when she ascends the throne during the war. It's so handsome. Don't stop updating it. [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

Very good character creation. The heroine struggled alone in a patriarchal family in her previous life, almost like an orphan. Because of a magical bracelet, she became smaller and entered the HP world. He is very capable in assessing the situation, has stable emotions and strong action ability. On the basis of knowing the plot, he can change the plot in subtle ways to seek the greatest benefit. He also has the charm of a master in language. He appears gentle and polite to the outside world, but in fact he is ambitious and very enterprising. What he sees in the Mirror of Erised is the scene of his enthronement. Emotionally, he is relatively wooden, but he is very tolerant and caring towards his own people. The family line is that he and Professor Snape are father and daughter. The two lonely people have the harbor of family, first testing, and then protecting. The emotional line is with Draco, the brother-sister CP, the big devil and the little prince. The male protagonist is eaten to death by the female protagonist.

Let me give you a rating. Judging from the chapters that the author has updated so far, I really, really like this kind of plot setting. For the general content of this book, please refer to the table of contents. Everyone is discussing the design of the heroine, but I think there is really no problem. Only when you have seen what society is like, will you feel that everything the heroine does is in line with life. The heroine is real and three-dimensional and can come out of the book. The heroine just wants to survive and live a better life. Everyone can imagine those perfect Madonna-like heroines, but every author cannot be required to portray them according to this template. This kind of dictation is very fragile, and the character image will be broken at a touch. Regarding the development of the heroine's love line, I very much agree with the author's idea. Don't describe it at a particularly young age like first or second grade, just let it take its own course. In addition to the reason of age, the heroine is still in a situation where she is treading the plot carefully and trying her best to find loopholes in the plot. More importantly, the heroine's life is not a very stable period. No matter how the seasoning of love is added, it will appear deliberate and embarrassing. I am very much looking forward to the author's next creations. I hope the author will be inspired and update ten chapters a day. (This is the point!!)

Seeing that now, although there are only more than thirty chapters, I think it is time to give a review. Overall, the heroine's image has been successfully created so far. The goal is clear, definite, and ambitious, but he also knows how to assess the situation, knows how to lie dormant, and will do whatever it takes to achieve his ultimate goal. However, the most important and core part of the heroine's personality is that she has a bottom line and is a lawful "bad guy". She will do whatever it takes to achieve her goals, but she will do her best to protect her relatives and friends. This has nothing to do with ambition, value, or anything else. If we say that the shaping of the heroine's image and her inner sparkle are an important reason why I like this book (people who are kind but ignore the rules are more terrifying than the dark lawful ones). Another reason is that as a fanfic, so far, this novel has been practicing the same practice. While not deviating from the world view of the original book, it also draws from the original work and creates a new framework to form its own story. In the book, the current depictions of the Iron Triangle of Saviors, Sijiao, Theodore, and Draco are all characters whose souls have not departed from the original work, but some behaviors and thoughts have really gradually jumped out of the framework of the original work. So, to sum up, this is why I like and read this book now. ([Understand][Understand][Understand] [Ask for attention][Ask for attention][Ask for attention] [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss])

I'm really looking forward to the next story. It's not watery at all. I love the character of the heroine so much. I started reading the heroine's lines when I was happy. Then I pretended to be Pansy and had some interactions. I didn't leave Tomato all day. I kept reading this novel. The idea is very exciting and it is a relatively in-depth article. There are many articles in HP, but I can't read them. My problem is that I don't have a beautiful soul and look like a daddy in everything. I generally can't write reviews. I'm really lazy, but! But! ! I must praise this article and read it! Tomato people, come and eat something good. The heroine's character is so adorable. The Slytherin friendship is real. I cried to death. I like it very much. Ron wants to crush the Gryffindor trio. Harry's character and thoughts give me the same feeling as in the movie. I still love Hermione. I can't say anything else. Read this book! I saw the author saying that I don't feel well, so take a good rest! Otherwise, be careful with the book! ! !

This is one of my HP books that I think is the most exciting. The heroine is super rational, very smart, ambitious, and knows how to control people's hearts. These make this book the most exciting book in my HP novel. I originally created a new book accidentally, but ended up publishing such a super nice book. I highly recommend reading this. Whether it's the early or late stages, it's really beautiful. The heroine is just like a replica of Tom. I really like it. Except for the small number of words, everything else is very good. I hope the author can work hard! Work hard to update the article, so that more people will read it and share this beautiful article with everyone. The author must not abandon the article. If it continues like this, it will definitely be another nine-point article. But try not to exceed eight or nine points. Anyway, come on, author, don't abandon the article, [note] the content is super exciting!

It's better than many HP fics I've seen. The heroine is ambitious and has a plan. It just feels a little tender, and of course it's quite reasonable. After becoming Professor Snape's goddaughter and having feelings for her, getting along well with Hermione, and motivating Pansy to try to win over the head of the family. It looks good, but it's a little different from the general impression of Slytherin. Maybe it's the feeling of chaos but order. Personally, I prefer the more extreme Slytherin heroine, the kind who is ambitious yet very elegant, less gentle and more cold. Well, the female version of Tom is my favorite, and this article is also very good.

I really like the heroine design. I personally hope that the CP will be double strong or multiple CP. I feel that the heroine will not let love affect her career.

I really, really like this book. The heroine has a great character. She is a very typical Slytherin, but she is not completely cold-hearted. Moreover, she is really calm, strong and independent from beginning to end! And the original character designs are not broken! There are very few fics that don't break the character! Overall, there aren't any surprises, it's just that there are too few! Highly recommended!

Very, very good fandom! ! The heroine has such a handsome personality! ! Xiaolong is also very delicate(?)

The novel is very good. This is the longest HP fan fiction I have ever read. The heroine is very ambitious, smart, resourceful, approachable and a very charming person. And there are also a lot of foreshadowings buried in the article, which makes people interested in reading it. Rico is really smart and can discover the truth through small details, which is very admirable. And the love between Xiaolong, the friendship with Pansinot, and the family relationship with Sri Lanka are all very good. In particular, the heroine tries to change the plot again and again, which is particularly charming. I have seen them graduate and work after the war. Previous novels are usually almost finished after Voldemort dies, and the rest may be extras. This is my first time watching the events after the war, so it's okay. Rico is a great guiding lover. Xiaolong is a very beautiful idiot beauty. Si teaches a very good father.

I like it very much. The heroine's character, work style, and behavior are all great. The most unforgettable thing for me is the heroine's appearance in the mirror. I hope that the heroine can complete her ascension to the throne in the end.

It's great. I like the character of the heroine and the interaction with the professor. I really like this kind of description between relatives! I hope the author writes more! !

It's really good. I came in by chance. I forgot why I didn't watch it several times. Maybe it's because of the serialization? It's very good-looking, but it's not easy. I met a heroine who doesn't have a golden finger and whose personality I really like. She's so good-looking and good-looking. The heroine's determination to overcome her fear of heights step by step is really... So brave Finally, cheers to the author! Great writing! [Like][Like][Like] The stock price is high and still docile; that afternoon has not yet arrived. Gold is poured into the broken line, climbing towards the eternal high ground. I threw myself into everything and went into this storm alone.

Because of the ratings and introduction (I always thought that the names and personalities of the characters were listed one by one in the introduction, which is only done in ancient Chinese literature), I didn't want to open it, but I scanned the comments with my peripheral vision, and I had a close relationship with the professor, so I clicked in! Really! Anyone who takes this bite is not a bad person! I like the heroine's character very much, the author's narrative is logical, and her relationship with the professor doesn't break her character. It's great! I really love it! ! !

It's very interesting. So far (60 chapters) it's very interesting. The heroine doesn't drag herself out and has any entanglements. Her purpose is very clear [like][like] and she's very smart and doesn't have any unrealistic fantasies. I still don't know who the CP is, and I don't know if there is a CP, but I personally think it's a good idea [thinking]

The vivid image of the character creation shows us a heroine who is like a little fox. The heroine has a brain. This is really good. I like this book very much.

There was a loud sound in the sky, and the old fan made a shining appearance✨ Hey, hey, hey, here I come, I'm here with this long comment on my trumpet! ! ! [Laughing] Uh-huh! First of all, as a veteran fan of this book, I have been following the updates from about ten or twenty chapters of this article to the present, and have never missed it. This book is really rare. The article that touches my heart like this makes me diligently follow up and make comments. So, now let's talk about the advantages of this article. [Note][Note][Note] 1. Reasonability. As a hp fan, the author is extremely reasonable when dealing with the original plot, especially many of the foreshadowings in the previous chapters can be verified later. For example, the previous Siren Blessing, such as the previous Secret Chamber Basilisk. 2. Innovation, as a fanfic based on HP's original work. While keeping the overall framework of the original work and the basic worldview basically unchanged, the author was able to stay out of the box and not be constrained by the plot of the original work, and was able to write content that fit the story. I think this is particularly valuable. 3. Okay! [Laughs] Those are the two points. The trumpet size doesn't have the same flow of literary thoughts as the large size size. It's really that the talent is at its limit!

I think this book is really excellent. The author is also very talented. The heroine is Licoris Snape. She is very smart. She is really smart. She only does things that are good for herself. She is very charming. The author looks at things from different angles and has different opinions. It is very interesting. It also expanded my impression of some characters. No one is black and white. People are multi-faceted [note] Because I also first entered the magical world from the Muggle world, but I chose to accept your overtures. Starting from an encounter with a young master from a pure-blood family who is inexperienced in the world, you will be used as a window to peep into the situation in another world. It's like fate made them rivals, evenly matched. Standing high up, they can only look up. You have to go up step by step, overcome your instincts and overcome difficulties. The girl saw the shadow and thought of a passage she once read: The moment of encounter is a cursed time. All evil spirits and ghosts will appear in the sky at this time. But those who walk alone on the road will be confused and lose their souls. "What if one day I am no longer useful?" Lycoris looked up at the sky, her voice a little light, "It will also rain, wind, and fog." "It will rain and fog," the boy paused, and then said, "Dawn will always come after darkness. So, follow me!" The above are all my favorite sentences. They are all from the article. They are very touching. In fact, I originally wanted to save a few more. After all, it was a reprint. But when I exited to save, my hand slipped and it came out [almost crying] [grieved]

I've been following this for so long, and today I suddenly remembered to give a book review [blowing kiss] First of all, the heroine's character is very touching to me. This is the Slytherin heroine in my mind. Be cautious, have clear goals, clear plans, outstanding abilities, self-interest but not pure evil, have a purpose in doing things but will also lend a helping hand. Secondly, the father-daughter relationship between the heroine and Snape is also very well described. Snape was the first person whom the cold-hearted heroine accepted from the bottom of her heart, and he was also the first person the heroine wanted to change her destiny. The father and daughter join forces, love each other, and are full of warmth. Then, CP Draco has a tsundere and cute little spoiled look. He doesn't feel like a bad character. He is also one of the only two choices that the heroine chooses to take under her wings. There will no longer be a distressed version of Broken Dragon, which is very easy to beat. Finally, the writing style is also very good, with a lot of foreshadowing, and the editor is also very active. He will also guide you to relevant chapters in the writing. I just ask for more updates. [Ask for more updates]

So pretty! [Dark, twisted and happy crawling] [Dark looking up and laughing crazily] [Emitting a weird and weird laugh]

This novel is very popular with me. First of all, the characterization is three-dimensional and full. The heroine is sober, rational, far-sighted, powerful and resourceful. She is the heroine who best fits the image of a shrewd little snake I have seen in a series of HP fanfics. Of course, other characters in the book are also unique. The rich and detailed descriptions make the picture clearer and reflect the psychology of the characters. Secondly, the plot is smooth, the structure is tight, the logic is interlocking, and the transitions naturally add interest. The crises and dilemmas in the plot are nerve-wracking, but the emotional line acts as a seasoning to make people upset. Finally, the philosophy that permeates it is a major feature of this book, including sophistication, workplace etiquette, psychology, biology, human nature, logical thinking, etc. It not only analyzes what the characters do, but also allows readers to learn a lot from them. Therefore, I feel very relieved and order everyone who loves you to have a copy.

It's really beautiful, and the hostess set it up really well! A strong woman is a strong woman! There is no situation like other articles where it is clearly a female channel and the writing is the same as a male channel. If you ignore that it is a fanfic, I think it is pretty good among female stories. Profit comes first, and feelings will not be a stumbling block for the heroine. At the beginning, the heroine and Malfoy only had a mutually beneficial relationship. The heroine helped him make profits, and he acted as a favor and sent her to a successful career. But because of Malfoy's innocence, the heroine didn't guard against him, and gradually leaned toward him as they got along. The writing is not deliberate, as if the partiality gradually seeps into the text. At the same time, it paved the way for the heroine to discover her love for Draco later. That's nice, isn't it? In many romance novels I have read, the subject of love at first sight and sudden love is very perfunctory. At more than 300 chapters, it was probably the first time that the heroine discovered her love for Draco through the words of Pansy and Nott. Well, it's not as coy as in other stories, but neat. I made a list the first moment I noticed it, weighing the pros and cons, and further strengthening the heroine's character. But how do you know that weighing the pros and cons is not a kind of love? Pure love is not strong, not to mention the identities of the heroine and Draco. The part where the relationship is established is also well written. The heroine seduces Draco into discovering his own heart. But if that paragraph was written about the heroine confessing to Draco directly, Draco would avoid it because of his temperament. He always has to figure out some things by himself. After the heroine and Draco formally established their relationship, the heroine blatantly favored Draco, but at the same time she did not consider other considerations at all. While the heroine wanted to favor Draco, what were the benefits of doing so? This can not only get the benefits she wants, but also help Draco, killing two birds with one stone. When I read more than 600 chapters, I always felt that the heroine's character was very stable, so stable that I could follow the story through the character written by the author. There won't be any unexpected things that don't fit her character. The heroine has always had a balance in her heart. And the supporting characters are also well written, such as Pansy. Originally, she was a girl who wanted to join the Malfoy family, a very pure pure-blood family. But after the heroine enlightened her, Pansy, through her own efforts, gained the control of the head of the family within 5 years, gained rights, and was no longer limited to a small world. I can clearly feel that her vision has broadened. Pansy, she is a person who is lost in the fog. The heroine is her light that illuminates the way forward. She moves forward and shows her edge. She is not a weak girl. I can feel the author's thoughts, it's not just about the strong female protagonist, but the strong female protagonist. Women are not anyone's slaves, they are in their own hands.

I really like this book. The author's writing is very good. The author is actively updating! It's best to update more! The heroine's thinking is very clear, and she knows exactly how she should take every step. She is Professor Snape's goddaughter, and the way they get along is very fitting. The plot is not too descriptive. The heroine explains what true Slytherin is. Protect yourself wisely and put your interests first when the bottom line is not completely touched. (Many novel authors will write a strong male protagonist when writing about a strong female protagonist, and then the female protagonist will be dependent on the male protagonist. But this book will not do it. The female protagonist is strong because she has a brain, her intelligence matches her ambition, she can succeed alone, and for her, interests are the best way to maintain relationships.) Many plots and detailed descriptions of many characters make me feel that the people in it are real people, they really exist, and they have their own stories. Although there seems to be a love line now, I think the transition of the love line is very good! It won't make me feel so out of the ordinary that I, who is a double male protagonist, will feel uncomfortable. I rarely write long reviews, so I feel like I didn't express my love for this book. All I can say is that if the author hadn't finished it badly, I would have followed this book forever. Support the author! ! Support originality! !

I've only seen half of it, and the young couple is so sweet together [laughs] I think this could have been given a 9.5, But I deducted 0.5 Because I think the friendship line is dispensable. I don't think the heroine's female friends, Pansy and Hermione, are well portrayed. Hermione's best friend is Harry, not the heroine. Of course, our sister is not surprised either. Pansy, I think it's not as good as Hermione. As long as Hermione treats someone as a friend, it's really heart-breaking. Pansy has been stuck with her sister since the heroine mentioned her. I think she chose to play with her sister so that her sister can remind her often in the future. I can't feel her sincerity in being friends with her, but she always sticks with her, which makes me very unhappy. . The same goes for Nott. I don't understand why some people are knocking his sister. In my opinion, Nott is worse than Pansy as a friend. He always has to guess what his sister is thinking. This is really annoying. Why should others let you know what she is thinking? Why are you so confident? I think the other lines, love and family, are well written. Alas, the best thing about the writing is that I don't know how to express my inner feelings [face covering]

Rich characters, every character is very vivid. Interpretations from different perspectives provide a more thorough and clear understanding of the characters. I personally like the heroine Lycoris very much. She is smart, wise, and knows how to assess the situation and weigh the pros and cons, instead of being blindly reckless. It is really rare to see someone in the fan fiction who does not rely on the golden finger to open the game infinitely. People who are included in Licoris' circle of people are really happy. Whether it is Draco, Pansy, or her father, she is considerate and tolerant. I hope the author will update more frequently! ! Looking forward to more chapters! Feelings ❤️

The characters are really great, I like it very much so far, and the plot is pretty good too.

It's really good to read. I haven't read this kind of long article for many years, but the author's writing is super attractive. Without changing the original line, it perfectly portrays the image of the heroine Lycoris. This is the real heroine article in my heart. There are so many leather-covered articles now that it is really difficult to find such an article. The first time I read HP fanfic was more than ten years ago. It is undeniable that this article is definitely one of the best in my reading process. I can't believe that the author has updated it for almost three years. In the past three years, the character creation has not changed significantly, making it very enjoyable to read. I found this article last Friday. I had seen it recommended before, but I couldn't help but give up after seeing such a long article. And I have a bit of a personality as Snape's daughter. But if you really read it, you will find that the author's writing is really good. I have stayed up for several nights to read it, and even dreamed about the plot of the novel when I went to sleep. As the number of chapters to be read continued to decrease, I felt disappointed in my heart. I hope the author can keep updating, and I also look forward to the next article after the completion of this article. Come on, author!