The Origin of the Tribulation of the Universe: Earth Star

Overall, it's not bad, but the emotional drama progresses too fast. Can Tang Qianqian be resurrected? The article describes that one needs a reincarnation realm monk or a reincarnation eye, so isn't Tang Qianqian cool?

Twists and turns, the plot design is very good! Keep updating every day! It's definitely going to be popular! Many people should like this type of male videos!

A very good traditional fantasy about immortality, which combines elements of modern immortality and traditional sects to create this fantasy space. In terms of character portrayal, whether he was a genius disciple of a sect in heaven 3,300 years ago, or an ordinary young man in a modern city 3,300 years later, they are still relatively suitable. The development of the plot is also clear, and the reversal setting is reasonable. The only possibility is that the emotional line seems a bit dense. Personally, it is worth recommending it. The author will work hard on the writing!

The author has great literary talent and rich imagination. The plot of the story is compact and full of suspense. The psychological profile of the characters is vivid and expressive, the image is full of temperament, and the emotional lines are very reasonable and not blunt. Worth pursuing [like]

The structure is clear and the plot is reasonable. Good luck to the author💪

I have read it, and it is indeed an excellent work. The writing is smooth, the concept is clever, and the storyline is very exciting. It is worth learning. If you have time, you can also give me more advice on "Battle of Yuan Xing". [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Not bad, it's the type I like to watch [laughs evilly]

The inner strength is cultivated the day after tomorrow, and the innate golden elixir and the soul are cultivated to cultivate the true energy, so low-level monks are also called cultivators! You have explained why cultivating immortals is also called cultivating [smirk]

The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work

The specific content structure, writing style and writing style are all super good, very interesting and very interesting.

Systemless is great and worth recommending.

The writing is very good, from the fantasy world to the urban flow to nature👍

It turns out there is a difference between cultivating the truth and cultivating immortality. I thought they were the same [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Overall, it's good. The plot is compact and enjoyable. It's relaxing and decompressing.

Reincarnation reiterates that love and hatred cannot be avoided, the plot is not procrastinating, and the writing is good