The Vice-Captain Who Emerged from the Belly of the Offshore King

I wanted to be bad, so I chose a 2-13 captain. You know how to mess things up.

So far, it's okay. I like the setting of Goldfinger very much. It's very interesting. The description of the Straw Hats is also pretty good, but the male protagonist is a bit too powerful. However, it's a bit difficult to find a good pirate fanfic. So far, I can accept it. Although I prefer no CP, if it is confirmed that the single heroine Nami is written well, I will not be able to do it. Don't describe Nami so unfairly, she is not a weak little girl. I hope that the common male problem of greasy male videos will be reduced as much as possible. Respect women and appreciate them without being obscene.

Hmm, don't have multiple heroines, just one wife is enough. Well, my writing skills need to be improved. If there are multiple heroines, it's usually easy to end the work in the later stages. In my personal opinion, the ratings of a single heroine will be higher. After all, One Piece is a passionate anime, not a harem. Well, it's a stallion story. I hope the author can adopt it.

Author, you don't want one more bad review. (More speed)

It looks good, I love watching it. Recommended for Wall Crack! [Sending Hearts]

I found that many pirates and shipwrecks liked to fight Hawkeye in Barati. It was basically a draw, but they were all unscathed. Liu Suolong was miserable, and he was chopped countless times.

The plot is okay and the characters are solid, but I don't need a harem.

The author is great, I was very excited to read it, please speed up the update!

Hahaha, I really like that the main character has a normal outlook on life. It's a very good book in Chuanliu. It feels really good.

The subject matter is quite novel, but this transparent man's strength has improved too quickly. I hope he won't overwhelm his combat power.

It's very interesting. It's the free-spirited pirate in my mind [Blowing Kiss], but unfortunately it's a bit short. I couldn't bear to read it, for fear that I'd see the shitty yellow button on the next page.

It's very beautiful, but when will the author enhance the body of the protagonist?

It looks good and is free, so maybe it has some influence on the flow of boats. It seems that there is a struggle between having a heroine and not having a heroine. The author just writes it in a way that is a bit ambiguous, but it doesn't mean that there are boyfriends and girlfriends. It doesn't affect the direction of the plot, but it's just a bit jarring. It's interesting. I read it for fun.

Use your imagination, don't always play with your fighting power, exaggerate and have fun.

Yes, the plot is okay. It ranks among the top three One Piece books I have read. It's a bit lacking. Can you do it faster? [Read carefully]

The protagonist does not overshadow the main character, Luffy is the real captain, that's enough, you are in the trap, Jie Jie Jie Jie

Not many people read fan fiction. The slow pace of your plot is actually pretty good, so don't stop updating it.

If it is a prop, you can definitely have a soul-cutting sword, a Senbonzakura or something like that, and you can also have one in later Gundams, props similar to Susana's ability, and for the army, the whole summoning of water elements will have a miraculous effect in the pirate setting.

It's very interesting, but does this book have a CP?

You can watch it, but the author is careless. Who can read this [Chigua]

Is there a heroine? I want to know, there is no best, just like the boat flow, there shouldn't be a heroine to show love.

It's so funny. I haven't seen a book like this for a long time [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

One Piece is pretty good in the novel.

It's good to watch, the bond between the protagonist and Luffy is well written, and the fusion of jokes is also very clever.

It's well written, but I'm just wondering if there is a female protagonist?

You downstairs are gone.

If you can, keep working hard.

When are you going to update? It's already been 10 years. I don't know how to be a eunuch anymore.

It's a very good book. The rating shouldn't be so low.

I feel like the protagonist is like a nanny