With All Due Respect, Dragon Ball and Human Novels Are No Longer Masterpieces. If You Don't Agree, Come and Argue!
With all due respect, Dragon Ball and human novels are no longer masterpieces. If you don't agree, come and argue!
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I don't want to read the second chapter anymore. It adds a huge cosmic organization that has never appeared in the original work. It gives me a stronger feeling than Frieza. The cosmic emperor is just bragging. Even if he only dominates the Northern Galaxy, other super powerful forces in this area want to enter. It's impossible to come. It's impossible to leave no trace. At least Frieza won't watch them come in and ignore them. There has to be a fight. Otherwise, you can write more directly. She directly traveled through time when she took the spaceship to the planet. If you write directly about the astronomy, it will be more reasonable than you think.
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