The Yandere Evil God Teases You Gently, Be Careful with Your Wife's Kitchen Knife

It feels really good to look at the car really well

Just a quick comment. A typical two-male protagonist with unlimited flow. Currently seeing the second copy. First of all, it can be seen from the chapter list that the dungeons in this book are very fast-paced, and most of the dungeons only have less than 10 chapters. Readers who like long, slow-paced plots may not like it. Then there is the emotional line, which can be said to be the fastest book I have seen so far. The first chapter was put together. Because I haven't read many chapters, from my perspective, it's love at first sight for Shou, and it's a reunion after a long absence for Gong. I personally don't think this is a spoiler, because I only saw this after reading 10 chapters. Then the biggest problem of this article is actually the writing style, which seems more and more immature. Rule-based infinite flow is inherently difficult to write, so it is normal to not be able to apply every rule well. The rules in the author's article do not seem to be very useful at present, and they are not much different from ordinary infinite flows. And because of the immature writing style, the emotional and plot lines appear less mature. But I quite like this fast-paced emotional line, and there are a lot of intimate scenes, haha. Then I think the character design of Shou may also need to be slightly improved. You wrote that he was a gangster who was betrayed. Logically speaking, as a gangster, the first character I can think of is either cold-blooded and ruthless, or a smiling tiger. In addition, being betrayed should make it even harder to trust others. But none of this seemed to show up. Shou seemed relatively naive from the beginning, and fell in love from the beginning, which seemed to be OOC with his own personality. But after all, writing is not easy, and every author's hard work should be respected. Anyway, if I were asked to write it, I definitely wouldn't be able to write it, so the author is already very good at this aspect. Keep up the good work! ! ! ! Still give it five stars.

Whoever waits for me to like it after watching it for ten minutes is the best! ! Author, please don't stop updating, I really love it

Good looking [Admiration] Come on! ! !

It's very beautiful [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration], the author cheers [blowing kiss]

It's really beautiful, highly recommended

Why! Why have you stopped updating for so long? Not allowed! ! ! Ahhhhhhh

Super beautiful, I like it very much

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

It looks good. Although the car is not obvious, there are quite a lot of cars! Recommended [Adored]

Good looking, good author, come on, come on [love][love][love]

I've only read six chapters and now I'm writing a review. It's really great (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It's so sweet. The progress is fast. I have a car, but there is no process.