After Becoming a Cute Girl, She Was Blocked by the Sinister Heroine Feng Aotian.

The storyline is very good, each character has their own personality and shortcomings. The plot is compact and leads the way without being brainless. The story is very full, which makes the heroines together become more natural and real, and will not appear abrupt. Especially the emotional drama of the heroines is very exciting, and the Ye family's parents love the heroine. Although Mrs. Ye seems to have some shortcomings, there is a reason why Mrs. Ye is like this. The author also said that the Ye family's parents loved her. At that time, I was thinking about how uncomfortable the Ye family's parents were when she died in the original story.

I stumbled through this book. I rarely read this kind of light romance novel, but when I picked up this book, I felt like I couldn't put it down. Every time I read the chapters updated by the author, it's very interesting. I also like the characters of the two heroines. They are not perfect, but they are very plump. The sweet daily life in the early stage, the stomach-ache knife in the middle stage, and the love story of the two together in the later stage are really well written. I don't know what adjectives to use to describe this kind of love. It just pokes fun at me. But I feel that the later love plot is a bit rushed and ends unexpectedly. I don't know how to describe this feeling. There are obviously many holes that have not been filled, such as the egg. Will Ye Zhen and Ye Fuli have a beautiful daughter? Will there be a beautiful wedding scene? Will there be a happy married life? Really, I even thought about the name of their daughter, and it suddenly ended. I really can't accept it. I hope the author will update the extra chapter in the future. Oh my god, I really like this couple, and the sudden appearance of Ms. Zhao and her wife? It's like a perfect plot. The unexpected ending obviously still has a lot of daily life to write. I hope that the subsequent extra chapters can make up for it. Oh my god, I really hope to see Ye Zhen's happiness in the extra story. I hope this cute girl (bushi) can have a happy ending.

The storyline has ups and downs, the setting is reasonable, and the rhythm is relaxed and relaxed. The language is lively and appropriate, and the author is particularly good at revealing the psychological activities of the characters, creating a distinct image of the characters. The novel essentially tells a story of control and being controlled. It explores the meaning of freedom through the activities of the protagonist Ye Zhen. On the one hand, he guides us to think about the difference between the value of extravagance and the yearning for freedom. On the other hand, he guides us to think about the relationship between our own wishes and expectations and the will of others. The peach is young, its leaves are Zhenzhen; the author creates a time traveler who dares to pursue freedom and is brave and resourceful. As the name suggests, he is full of yearning for beauty. Opposite of this is a reborn person who is extremely controlling. Because he does not understand love, conflicts are caused and expanded, thus unfolding an exquisite story.

It's very interesting to read. Different from the always systematic cool novels, the abilities given by the system in this book are not too outrageous (you can still achieve it if you work hard, and supplies and medicines are common things in life). Ye Fuli's emotional changes are written very realistically. Although the two heroines are both time travellers, their personalities are worlds apart. Ye Fuli is a classic strong woman who can do anything and at the same time she has a strong desire to control. Ye Zhen, on the other hand, is a little loli who is a bit sinister and wants to be a salty fish. With the power of time travel, Ye Fuli thought she could control everything. She was accustomed to the harshness of the world in her previous life and was determined to take revenge on all the people she hated. However, the reincarnated Ye Zhen changed Ye Fuli with her sincerity. The strength between the two of them will continue to change (referring to the game of strength and wisdom), which is also the most attractive part of this book. One smooth event continues the novel after another. The author's writing and conception must be very powerful. While updating the story intensively, he also tells the story so movingly. The main characters in the book are well-shaped and distinct. Ye's father has undergone a huge transformation, from an irresponsible image to a true fatherly love for Ye Zhen. Ye Fuli also changed a lot. She at least showed unusual emotions towards Ye Zhen. Although she just wanted to treat the protagonist as a canary in a cage, this was her only sincerity in the world. Finally, the author should update it quickly. This novel is so good. I read the breaking point all morning. There was no peeing point in the whole process. I didn't want to skip it at all. I have never read the Lily novel before. According to the author's Lily novel, it should open a new door for me. [Sending Hearts]

Author, just by persisting and finishing the book, you have surpassed many authors. At least you are very responsible, and of course the plot is also very good. Mainly, I personally prefer the plot of Ye Fuli bullying Ye Zhen, haha ​​[laughing] Of course, this kind of daily sweet story is also very good, overall it is very good

1. The author vividly describes the inner conflicts and struggles of the protagonist, allowing readers to deeply feel the complexity and fragility of human nature. 2. The plots are intertwined, like a steep mountain road that gradually descends into an abyss. The readers follow the footsteps of the protagonist as they bump along the way and are frightened. 10 Sentences praising a well-written novel 3. Every character in this novel has a distinct personality and full of emotions. The author involves their fates together and builds a shocking life trajectory. 4. The author uses delicate description to express the inner world of the protagonist. Readers not only see his appearance, but also have a deeper understanding of his growth process and life experience. 5. The plot of this novel is ups and downs, sometimes full of suspense, sometimes magnificent. The readers follow the protagonist's footsteps and experience love, hatred, and all kinds of life. 6. With his keen insight and extraordinary writing style, the author depicts a world full of vitality and energy, making readers feel as if they are actually there. 7. The language in this novel is beautiful and moving, full of poetry and philosophy. Readers will find their own resonance points whether they appreciate it from a literary or human perspective. 10 Sentences praising a well-written novel 8. The author has dealt with a group of vivid characters in the novel. They have their own joys, sorrows, loves and hatreds. Each character has his own story, but they are intertwined with each other. 9. The theme of this novel is profound and vivid. The author uses the plot of the novel to express his thoughts and reflections on social reality and human destiny. 10. The author's writing style is delicate and subtle yet lively, allowing readers to feel the power and charm of the text, as if they themselves have become a member of the novel. 11. The structure of this novel is rigorous and full of tension. The author has made great efforts in advancing the plot and shaping the characters, making the readers deeply immersed in it and unable to extricate themselves. 12. The author explores many issues worth pondering in the novel, such as love, family, friendship, human nature, etc., Allowing readers to accept a complex and real baptism of life. 10 Sentences praising a well-written novel 13. The language of this novel is concise and powerful, making the characters vivid and the plot vivid and real. The readers feel as if they are immersed in the novel, and are attracted to keep moving forward. 14. The author explores the human heart with a unique perspective and profound thinking, allowing readers to see some of their own shortcomings and deficiencies, and inspiring readers to pursue their own inner world. 15. This novel is full of imagination and creativity. The author shows the diversity and complexity of the world in his own unique way, allowing people to find novelty and excitement in it.

A very good book with a lot of ideas It's a bit sadistic but the subject matter is novel to me. At least before the first climax, it gave me a lot of motivation to pursue the book. The writing is generally not of high quality, but the quality is adequate. The theme is about a cute boy turning into a lolita, and Feng Aotian chasing his wife in the crematorium. It's very novel, and I'm still motivated to pursue the book. I can't comment on the plot without seeing its first strong point. Hopefully not like individual authors. Chapter 3 split into 9 chapters. And the follow-up is weak, creating something out of nothing, and too many updates are weak. I have seen many authors write a single book very well, but then give up due to lack of updates after multiple releases and it is difficult to guarantee the quality. I'm looking forward to the follow-up plot, and I hope there's an outline to follow. Don't write wherever you think, which will affect your reading experience. It's too sweet and not suitable for my girlish heart. Let me chase you from 11pm to 3:30am. [Eating melon] I have to say, the little loli is so good! I am a lolicon! Long live loli!

Good, really good. From the words of the author in the first chapter, I thought it was another mess, but I was wise. From the first chapter to the present, I haven't skipped a chapter. I don't even believe it. The author successfully brought me in. No matter where the book ends, it is considered a success, whether it has a tragic ending or a happy ending for the whole family. Similarly, the author also successfully reminded me of another author, Ming Xiaoxi. "There will be angels loving you for me", "Rose on the First Night". There are some unreasonable things in the book, but they are necessary for the sake of the entire worldview, and they have already surpassed most online books. Maybe it also has something to do with the lesbian romance novels I read. This lesbian novel was my first. Sometimes I feel that a book that advertises romance should focus on the romance part like this book, instead of talking about a lot of bullshit and messing up the entire narrative structure, so that it makes me wonder whether what I am reading is a romance, an urban novel, or a sad story. There may be others, but so far I think this one is more in line with my joy and tear points. I haven't read "The 26-Year-Old Female Tenant" and "The Record of the Goddess Qiongming" yet. There are a lot of people on the Internet who say they don't want to read them. After seeing the present, I feel that the author has been creating an opportunity for Ye Zhenzhen and Ye Fuli to get back together. The former mother and roommate are now Jiang Nini. Have they changed something or have they not changed? The only person who may have changed is Ye Fuli. When her soul penetrated Ye Zhenzhen, her original inner self was gone, so Ye Fuli still failed to change her previous life. Look, it's acceptable if Ye Zhenzhen doesn't turn into a man in the future. After all, I haven't read the Lily novel yet, so the system can still be there or not. It's originally a story about love and killing, so there's no need to make the system too outstanding.

It's a very interesting novel. I was initially drawn to it because of the yandere theme in the introduction. The plot inside made me feel like Cheng Tao next door. Xiao Cheng used a near-death and death in exchange for the possession of Tao, and Ye Zhen used a near-death and death in exchange for Ye Fuli to put down her paranoia and love with her heart. I feel a little better than Zhao Xi. I haven't finished reading Zhao Xi. After reading nearly 200 chapters, I found that Xi has never let go of her paranoia to treat Zhao as an equal. She wants to keep Zhao trapped by her side so that she can only rely on herself. And here, Ye Fuli finally let go of her control over Ye Zhen. All in all, it is a good novel about bringing back a sick girl [laughing]

It's finally the climax. I think the heroine is Ye Fuli, and the protagonist is a weak character. Anyway, I just want these two to be together, although I don't know why many people don't want to. After reading more than 30 chapters, I read it all at once. My opinion is that it is absolutely impossible to live without Ye Fuli. The few chapters where the protagonist just escaped are really boring to read. I even read a little bit and stopped reading every time. I really ran out of books to read and then came back. Then after 3-4 chapters, Ye Fuli came, and I felt that the fun suddenly came up. I saw the latest chapter at once. I am the kind of person who can accept bad endings and good endings, but I really can't leave out Ye Fuli.

This book is worth it. After following it for a month or two, I felt a little unfinished after reading it, but the ending was not abrupt. It was very peaceful and beautiful, and it passed by like the evening breeze caressing my cheek. This is indeed the best ending in my mind, but... I want to see more of the sweet daily life of Ye Zhen and Ye Fuli. Qiuqiu author, please give me more! ! ! (Twisting) (Wriggling) (Darkly crawling) (Melting a roar of unknown meaning) (٩(๑`ȏ´๑)۶) (Crawling violently)

It's a very good novel. I read it in one sitting during this vacation. It was very unpleasant to look at the knife late at night, but the ending was sweet and really sweet. Ye Zhen and Ye Fuli redeemed each other (that's what I thought). Finally, I highly recommend it.

There are really not many high-quality systematic articles like this. Systematic but not invincible, this feeling of stomachache is great! The character of Ye Zhen (real) is very immersive, and it is easy for me to bring characters from other works into Ye Zhen.

The concept is very novel, although the middle is very poisonous. The hole in the book is not filled in, and there is not enough sugar [crying] A protagonist who yearns for freedom and life and an extreme and stubborn person like Feng Aotian finally reconcile and come together. This really makes people feel relieved.

It's so beautiful. It would be great if I could fill in the unfinished holes a little more. The previous plot was really painful to watch. Ye Fuli and her family were too paranoid. It was a bit unbearable to watch it from a God's perspective, let alone Ye Zhen's own feelings. When I saw this, I almost gave up and continued reading. The author said something to comfort the readers in the comment area, plus Thanks to the entry on Chasing the Wife's Crematorium, fortunately I insisted on continuing to read it. The middle plot was about Ye Fuli's regret. When I watched this part, I felt relieved and tearful (a small part of me sympathized with Ye Fuli), and I had hope that Ye Fuli would change her paranoia and be with Ye Zhen again. The latter part of the plot was the most shocking to me, and it was also my favorite part of the mutual redemption. It did not make Ye Zhen mindlessly accept Ye Fuli, and did not let Ye Fuli's character collapse. It also completed this part of the plot very well. When I saw the end of the story, the two of them finally got together as they wished. Maybe I felt happier, tearful, and relieved than the two of them in the book (although the later romance part was obviously a bit rushed and the ending was a bit hasty). There are quite a lot of funny parts in the plot, such as the narcissistic Huang Li and the former mercenary Zhao Mengde. The relationship between the two female protagonists is really indispensable for the simple and straightforward assistance of this bodyguard. Ye Zhen's dream of traveling around is also completed with Ye Fuli's company, but there are some holes that have not been filled in. I feel that I could have written 10 more chapters to fill in the holes, but it ended inexplicably. Apart from these, I feel that overall it is great, really good-looking.

I read the first Lily article on Tomato. After reading it, I felt a little more motivated, so I read other Lily articles. I don't really want to criticize it, I can only say that there are shadows of this film everywhere, but every aspect is worse than this one. This is truly a classic work. The setting of the protagonist of this article is very interesting. The male protagonist was ill for ten years before time traveling, which well explains his desire for freedom and lack of social experience (naiveness) after time traveling. Generally speaking, I would prefer to write about lily instead of becoming a hundred, because some books have a hard time dealing with the incongruity of a male soul acting like a little lolita. In this book, because of the setting of the male protagonist, this feeling of dissonance is much smaller. The sense of disobedience is reduced, but it adds a layer of seasoning to the novel. The setting of the heroine's rebirth also explains the reason why she is a bit of a yandere mentally. After reading the whole story, the characters almost didn't feel like they were in a drama. The rhythm and plot arrangement were also very appropriate. It successfully made me completely immersed in it.

...(I don't want to read a lot, just read to the end) This book is the most amazing one I have read about lilies. From the beginning, it seemed very normal, until the second heroine imprisoned the heroine, the kind of forced and perverted love the heroine had for the heroine was very suffocating and depressing. Then the way the heroine exits is really amazing (if you don't understand, you can think that it's the turning point that is amazing). Secondly, the story line is also well arranged. Whether it's the pursuit of the wife in the back, or the rewards in the front, or even the loss of memory in the back, it won't make people feel ugly. This is the most surprising thing, and it is also what I think makes this article a level up. In addition, the character settings are also relatively full. For example, why the second female lead became a "yandere" because of lack of love. Even if she is abused again after reincarnation, she will definitely be very disappointed. Finally, I actually think the only bad thing about this book is that it is hard to understand: Why is the second female protagonist so perverted towards the female protagonist? My understanding is that there is a lack of love. Some people have never experienced the feeling of lacking love and being loved at the same time, and it is normal not to understand. But in fact, even the people around me have experienced it, and I understand that feeling (although the second female lead in the article did not behave very well, but the author wrote her to have amnesia), so I think there is no problem with the character creation, but some people may not understand it well. Finally, here is a summary: If you don't like it, don't criticize it, the writing is okay, the characters are well created, and the yandere attributes are full. I would like to thank the author for giving readers such a good work. Keep up the good work [learned][learned][learned][learned]

It's a very good book. It always leaves me with a lingering feeling after reading it. The emotional aspect is also well described. It's a bit sadistic but also very sweet at the end (a little spoiler: the most important turning point must be from chapter 115 [laughing]) But overall, maybe the protagonist can still yearn for freedom under the somewhat perverted control and training of the heroine. If it were me, maybe I would be made ❤ angry (o´ω`o) (but this may be because I am too perverted [smile]) Finally: a very good book, which made me deeply involved in it (it felt a bit like writing about reading comprehension [learned])

The same template, but only the writing style. Other novels with the same template that I read before could only read a dozen chapters, but the look and feel of this book is really comfortable. It has everything I want to read, so I must give it a good review. [Praise]

It's so beautiful, and the emotions are captured just right. Many people say that the heroine is too perverted, but only the sadistic scenes can contrast the sweetness behind it. I really hope that Ye Zhen and Ye Fuli can be happily together in the end. All the pain is to pave the way for a better future. Don't let it end badly.

First of all, I have to say that I agree with his plot. Secondly, in addition to his good plot, he also has a high degree of control over the entire story. For example, the story between the two female protagonists. For example, Ye Zhen may have been set to have an object travel through time for ten years, and this ten years of illness is exactly what I call it. It weakened some of his important thoughts on the concept of men and women and increased his desire for freedom, so the subsequent story came into being. Another setting for the heroine Ye Fuli is to be reborn, but the entire story of this world is relatively depressing as a whole, because how can I put it? Ah, there is a big wave of control in it, and Ye Zhen can escape from this story with systematic help. Therefore, in this novel as a whole, the characters' feelings and emotional tone are very complete. In fact, the personalities of the characters and the process of change are very excessive, not sudden. This is a very good book for this book.

A useless system, the original villain, the real and fake daughter, It has all the elements, Green Book, Cat Book, I haven't read it for a long time, now I've filled in the missing parts. True daughter, Ye Mu's mental state is worrying. It's still difficult to reach the ending. I hope the transition can be smooth.

Finish spreading flowers I didn't expect that the book I had been chasing for so long would be finished. When I look back, all the memories of staying up late chasing books in the past are vivid and touching. As the book says, there is no feast that lasts forever. Starting from the meeting of Ye Zhen and Ye Fuli, the story begins. It has been joyful, sinking, painful, and touching. Finally, on a calm day, Ye Zhen and Ye Fuli held hands and walked away from our eyes. The story also came to an end here. Will we meet again? Probably not, but we are lucky enough to have met each other. In the past, we accompanied them to cry heartbrokenly in the cold rain, and accompanied them to laugh loudly in the warm sunshine. Today's separation is no longer overly sad. Goodbye, Ye Zhen, Ye Fuli, thank you for accompanying me on this journey.

Having read the entire book, I can say that this book is well written, but it does have flaws. He also said that the writing was not good, but in fact there was basically nothing wrong with the principles and general direction. First of all, let me talk about some of the better points. That is, the story line of the article is relatively smooth, without jumping around. It's the heroine and the second heroine. After the heroine was heartbroken by the second heroine and locked in a small dark room by the second heroine, the heroine relied on the ability given by the system to recreate the plot. The second heroine began to pursue the plot of the crematorium, and then finally chased the heroine and gave out some candy in the last few pictures. It is a very old-fashioned, but it can be regarded as a relatively classic storyline. It can be said that articles written in this way will basically not go wrong. In the article, I have to praise the system for matching the heroine. This is the best system I have ever written in a Lily novel, possibly one of the best. Not only did he give the readers a very strong sense of presence, take care of the heroine's mood, and promote the main plot, which is the role of other female novel systems, but it can also be seen that it is actually very powerful, and in the final part, which is the end, he also wrote that the system also has a CP, which we can guess, and it is very good to him. So I think this is the best thing written in this novel. Next I will talk about some bad aspects. If you can't accept it, don't read the next few paragraphs. First, let's talk about the early stage. The early plot is nothing more than the heroine being reborn into the world of this comic novel, and then getting to know the second heroine who is reincarnated into the second life. Then the second female lead had a sense of insecurity due to various things in her previous life, and used various means to get the female protagonist to be by his side, such as wearing shackles and a dog ring, and a series of actions that frustrated the female protagonist. I can understand that the author wants to use this method to make the second female character pursue the heroine in the crematorium, but I actually think that this is not just the second female lead's fault. The heroine actually has problems. The first and more important point is that although the heroine has traveled through time, her feelings at that time were completely based on the feeling that she wanted to live in this world for a while longer, and make money to fly high. I didn't feel that he had any other feelings for the heroine and wanted to have a lot of relationships with her, so when I saw the author in the later part of the article writing about the heroine saying that the heroine also wanted to develop a relationship with the second heroine in the early stage, I didn't understand it. Because when you were preparing to chase your wife to the crematorium in the early stage, I only saw that the heroine kept giving in and retreating under the pressure of the second heroine, until she fell to her death while riding the cable car. This does not reflect well that your heroine has very deep feelings for the second heroine and wants to develop a relationship with her. I only saw a person who had traveled through time. He just wanted to make some money, stay away from the second female lead as much as possible, and live his own life. Under the pressure of the second female lead, he couldn't bear the burden and jumped off the cable car. He died and was fished back by the system. This is just an objective fact. So what I still want to say is that if you want to write the first part of the crematorium well, you need to give the heroine a deeper feeling for the second heroine. This will not only further arouse readers' yearning for chasing his wife in the crematorium and then giving her candy in the end, but more importantly, it can make some of the language charm of the article more powerful. There is another point I want to make, which is the problems in the last few chapters. First of all, there is indeed sugar at the end, which is a relatively simple and easy-to-use ending. It's nothing more than a scene of confirming the relationship and getting married, and then liquidating all the previous enemies. It's an old-fashioned thing, but it's useful. But what I don't know is that it is very short. I don't know whether the author is unskilled or for other reasons, so it seems to me that the candy is not finished. For example, in the penultimate picture, you only wrote that after confirming the relationship, you would choose a wedding dress. Then during the last picture, we chatted a few words and talked about the system or other things. There is a feeling of an abrupt stop, the kind where the sugar is sent out halfway and then suddenly breaks, which is very uncomfortable to watch. It is clear that I have written more than 100 pictures of Chasing My Wife in the Crematorium and it is already unbearable. However, at the end, I only get this point. In fact, it is difficult for readers to relax. But in the end, I give this book a certain amount of recognition. First of all, one of the things I like about it is that it has written a very good system. But I think the author still needs to think carefully about the preliminary preparation of the article and the final sweetening process. For example, in the early stage, you can make the relationship between the heroine and the second heroine more difficult to separate, and in the later stage, don't just write two or three pictures, but write more, right?

Before: Meow, Fengshen, Fengshen, it made me so happy when I confessed to jump into the river. Medium: Now I'm back after watching the second part, and comment on how the plot is not cliche (it came out early after all), the connections are reasonable, and it's pure sugar without a knife, so you can eat it with confidence. After: I'm back again, the emotional line is delicate, not a love brain, the emotions change gradually, which is fascinating. According to the words of the "Poached Eggs and Oyster Sauce" guy in the comments, "One of these two people doesn't understand love, one has no love, one only knows how to rob, and the other just wants to wander around the world." Record 156, I don't understand, it's weird, I just want to remember it. Very good, I finally finished reading it. I didn't drink a sip of water or eat a meal the whole day. I have endured it until now. Everyone can eat it with confidence. There is no knife in the whole process and it is sweet. With great reluctance, I ended up scattering flowers.

I've watched a lot, so let's write something (no spoilers) In fact, what moved me most about this book was not the yandere, the heroine, or the plot (the plot is actually quite abstract), but that the author really succeeded in shaping the tragedy of each character. Ye Zhen is tragic, Ye Fuli is undoubtedly tragic, and his parents are even more tragic. Tragedy always gives people a special kind of sympathy and expressive tension, which makes me feel that this book is particularly penetrating! Ps: I originally came here for Lily and Tiantian's love, but nmd got on the wrong bus, but it turned out to be unexpectedly good-looking!

This is my first time watching Lily, and it's surprisingly beautiful. The plot can't be said to be very suspenseful, but at least it's unpredictable and the plot progression is reasonable. The characters are also more three-dimensional. But based on the progress I've seen so far, I still hate the mother and daughter of the Ye family. Although they are right to do this, they are too rational and lack some of the human touch that ordinary people should have. Many times, I will doubt whether they have a heart or not. The concept of profit first is cruel but realistic. Overall, it's pretty good, so five stars is very reasonable.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I can't stand it anymore, it's such a knife-edge, but I really wanted to watch it, so I watched it for 16 hours straight! If my phone hadn't been turned off, I wouldn't have left this comment. In the middle part, when Ye Zhen was being abused, I really felt so uncomfortable. I almost wanted to cry when I saw the plot that usually made my aunt laugh when I saw it in other novels. Later, when Ye Fuli changed, I wanted to put these two silly heads together and kiss! Good review! Although I'm not very used to this kind of yandere writing, the author's writing style is really good. I just endured the pain of being stabbed and finished reading it! Why are the comments 6 hours after reading... I saw it from 17:00 to 7:00...

It looks good, but I wish it was a little more flammable. I think it would be more attractive if there were some real car accidents or cliffs or similar plots. When I saw that there was just a simple escape, I thought it was a high-spirited person at first, but in the end, it was just an ordinary escape. Then he was caught without incident. Overall it's still very good.

Reading this novel is like putting the underwear that the brother on the bottom bunk prepared to wash in your mouth and chewing it like chewing gum. It is really comfortable. Brother, please give me one more episode. I can't see my head is exploding.