The Immortal with Troubled Luck: Starting from Qualification Correction

Overall, it's pretty good. I gave it four stars because of the allocation of the Ice Firebird. To be honest, although the author said it (and it makes sense), it just doesn't feel right. He wanted to express the close relationship between the sect and the family. But how to put it, it's like you got a set of fashions (male and female) for each clan. Yes, it's symbolic, but one for your wife and one for your cousin? Moreover, the book also assumes that the Ice Fire Bird is a companion and will never leave. To tell the truth, when other cultivators see this situation, they think that the senior sister and cousin are a pair, just like the meaning of couple's clothing. There are completely other ways to express the close relationship between the clans. I still feel uncomfortable. Couple clothes are worn by my wife and cousin. Is there no other ice-based spiritual pets in the world of cultivation? Don't talk about how you have a good relationship with your cousin and talk about how difficult it is for your cousin. Then do you respect the Taoist couple by doing this?

Very nice. (I don't think this alchemy waste has any meaning, and it's not popular now for heroines to have dark cooking talents) [Thinking]

Very good, suitable for Buddhists like me

The plot is comfortable, the three views are good, and it is quite comfortable to listen to the book. But I guess it's not suitable for tomatoes. The author also needs to improve his vocabulary and stop using words randomly. I gave it five stars because I hope it doesn't break again.

The protagonist's outlook on life is very upright, and he does not act deliberately when he fishes. The plot is very enjoyable to watch.

It's so fucking good. I originally wanted to keep it up, but I can't keep it up at all. I'm really looking forward to the next one. I hope the author will update more quickly. Two updates a day can't satisfy me. ฅ՞•ﻌ•՞ฅ It's good, but I won't continue pursuing it. I can't accept 211.

Yes, overall it looks very comfortable. I must give you five stars. ? ? What's going on with Taoyue? I'll give you two stars. I can't stand this. Also, it's too ink-stained. Can't you hurry up and upgrade yourself if you help me with this and that every day?

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: Starting today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night.

There are too many descriptions of the first girl I met in this book, as well as embarrassing names, which made me feel like I have returned to the novel 10 years ago (I feel like this paragraph can dissuade 50% of book lovers)

You can't see the protagonist's own emotions, he can't be angry, he can't share joy, and he can't share sorrow. It seems that he regards everyone as a tool, as if he has abandoned the whole world. But it's quite right for the protagonist to do this as a time traveler.

Cheers to 5⭐! There is nothing wrong with the book. Bring a salted fish and there will be a lottery. I can't say how good it is. It's still the old way for mortals to cultivate immortality. Nothing else new. Books with a maximum of 80 points. But this is the most important thing, to be lost to all sentient beings. In the end, he drowned. There are just too many books. So written. In fact, you can be bolder. The foundation is currently established. Add puppetry again. You can add a little more. You can add a little something including natal weapon writing. The problem lies in our lottery. Right. Let's talk about this natal weapon. Can I get it on Douluo's martial spirit? Or move the Zanpakutō. Change it. Integrate a brand new system. It's still a salty fish system, just take advantage of everything. If you compress part of your strength into your natal weapon, it will make you look slow. Cultivation is not that fast. This is the puppet that I will write about soon. Can make a combination of rows and decomposition rows. A little more diversification. Otherwise, this little lottery draw will be in vain. Come on finally! Hope it can be better. Be more innovative. Integrate more things.

Overall it's pretty good. I think it's okay. I'll add a physical training book to the protagonist to make him a hexagonal warrior. I hope the monster girl can be written down to death, which is a bit green tea, I feel.

The writing is quite good. Except for the emphasis on the protagonist's mentality and tendency to talk nonsense in the early stage, there are no problems. It gets better and better as I read later. As for why I only gave it four stars, it was because the update was interrupted. I originally read it after seeing the end. After reading four-fifths of it, I found that the protagonist was in the middle stage of the golden elixir. I skipped to the last chapter and it turned out to be a eunuch. I can only say that it is a pity. Such a good book can definitely be written with a thousand chapters and a high score. Let's see how the author's new book goes.

What do you say? All I can say is that the protagonist is very stable. Especially the protagonist's realm does not jump too fast And the protagonist is very stable You follow Gou Dao Not a dog track very comfortable It suits my taste very well If you are a book lover who is steady about the protagonist, you can read it Very good

Oh, what a good book, slow and steady, single woman, micro-group portrait The author is very aware that the protagonist will have nothing to do if he advances too quickly, so he has always grasped the pace of the advancement of the realm very well. Coupled with the protagonist's steady but meticulous character and behavior, it is quite comfortable to read. It's a pity... It's a pity... The author was in a bad state and couldn't persevere. The golden elixir was completed. Otherwise, the subsequent Nascent Soul, Transformation of Gods, Refining the Void, and even the Earth Immortal would take seven to eight hundred or even a thousand chapters. Wouldn't it be fun to read?

It might be a little bit toxic in the early stages around chapter 50, the protagonist looks like a villain, and Son of Luck was a little brainless at that period, but after that it's still pretty good, the writing is fluent, and it's food and above.

It's okay. It's a passable read. It's 400,000 words. There are no ups and downs in the plot. It's just very stable. The protagonist never reveals his strength. Maybe I'm not suitable for this type of book. In my mind, it's about three stars.

This is a quite nice book. The protagonist is a calm, happy-go-lucky person, and it is also because his trump card is too strong. Only one [Eternal Fish Monster] can raise his qualifications to an upper-middle level. Coupled with a good or above level of understanding and a temperament that knows when to work hard, Fang Shi's strength is reasonable and surpasses everyone of the same era. The plot is also well written, from the Tianyun Sect and the Fang family, to the Son of Heaven and Destiny, to the Su Kingdom, there is no matryoshka doll, nor does it feel like a washout. But one big shortcoming is that there is no ending. I thought that at least the author would write that Fang Shi broke through to the top of Ningzheng Realm before the story came to an end. Unexpectedly, he decided to make the story end abruptly. It didn't even end with Fang Shi achieving Nascent Soul, but ended with an inexplicable moment like meeting the ancestor and suffering a natural disaster. It's a pity.

However, cultivating immortality cannot be done quickly, and haste makes waste. I can take good care of my body first, and then write the novel, and it will be like this book again, right? [Laughing evilly], I will also read the next one. You can continue to use this world view, and then create a novel to read. Thank you, you can write about Fang Shi ascending to immortality hundreds of years later [Thinking][Thinking] That's all I have to say, body is the most important thing

The author is great, you have CP, this is a bit important to me, I prefer those without CP [almost crying]

Pretty good, just what I wanted. The speed of advancement is not particularly fast, but gradual in cycles A cool article step by step. The protagonist follows the way of dogs, not the ways of dogs. Principled and popular. He handles relationships with other Destiny Sons relatively well.

It's actually very nice. Although the pace may be a little slow, I like the protagonist's step-by-step and steady-footed style. The training system is classic, the historical mysteries are interesting, but the eunuch. What I didn't notice before watching it () is that the eunuch is a pity, deducting one star.

Jiang Ling is the heroine! At least I saw that the current protagonist had sex with her, and it was quite innocent! I forgot which chapter I started, but Let me tell you a secret: "Chapter 251 has a little bit of detailed description! Although not much."

It's okay, but it's just too much introduction. I have to break out everything and make notes.

It's not bad. The protagonist has a good outlook on life and is very comfortable to watch. However, the protagonist has a little more inner drama, so there's no need to highlight every aspect.

It's a pretty good subject matter. It's a world of peace and tranquility. It doesn't mess with the layout when things happen. The logic is clear. It's a good fairy tale. It should be better than many nine-point novels. There are too many tomatoes and it's so cool that it's no brainer.

There are many contradictions in the book, such as the balance between fishing and hard work, and the protagonist's attitude towards cultivation. However, if you don't go into it deeply, it is very good as a light-hearted article for entertainment. The pace is neither urgent nor slow, relaxed and relaxed, and not too brainless. The key points are well grasped, and the focus is basically on the protagonist. The Son of Destiny is just used to advance the plot.

After looking at the author's homepage, there are two more books, and I finished them in my 30s and 40s. Unlike the previous two books, this one is short and weak! ! Give you a five-star encouragement

It's a very comfortable and carefree fairy tale. It's been a long time since I've seen such a harmonious world of immortality. It's finally not all about intrigues. It's great. I used to read only tense, abstract, utilitarian and dark fairy tales. It was so tiring. Although I don't like emotional scenes, these scenes are so rare that I can ignore them.

It's about average, my personal thoughts after reading it, and the storyline is okay. The heroine's role is small, so she doesn't need to. Just watch a few protagonists and her own growth process. Why does your younger brother look more and more like Xiaonan Niang later on? Goldfinger is also good, and it's pretty good.