Traveler

There is nothing toxic about the whole book so far, and the character of the protagonist does not arouse any disgust. But perhaps the setting given to the protagonist makes the protagonist relatively passive and has no way to affect the key plot, making the protagonist in the article seem to have done something or not done anything when dealing with things. (Perhaps the author wanted to write it this way) But this will make the protagonist less closely connected to the main line of each world. Although a lot of things will happen in each world, these plots are related to the protagonist corresponding to each world, and the reader is brought in from the perspective of the protagonist of the book, so it will cause the protagonist of the book to have a low sense of participation and the process to be dull. (I also said before that the plot of each world is related to the protagonist of the corresponding world but less related to the protagonist of the book). Perhaps the author can relax the restrictions on the protagonist and let the protagonist indirectly affect the plot in some other ways. For us readers, the protagonist of each world is the supporting character of the book. Although it is also important to enrich the supporting characters, the protagonist is an important role in the entire book, and we cannot put the cart before the horse. (Perhaps when writing the next chapter, you can write about a world where the protagonist recalls the past experience. Note: It is best for this world to have a major impact on the protagonist to enrich the role of the protagonist.) The above are my opinions and suggestions. As for whether to adopt the author's opinions or not, it is still based on my own subjective thoughts. I can't guarantee that my suggestions are better, after all, everyone has their own tastes. It's the first time the author has written a plot that doesn't have any poisonous points and the characters don't collapse. It's already very good. Take your time. So, give me a five-star review (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

I am very serious and responsible. After reading this novel by the author carefully, I really feel that it is very good. The author can observe life very carefully, has rich imagination, and the articles written are also thoughtful.

This book is really good. I can only describe it in two words: "Awesome"

Ahem, as an author, it's okay for me to give myself a five-star reward, [shy] Regarding the sense of participation, in fact, we have always participated. When we look at the stories of people in the world, this is not Luo's perspective, or we are all Luo. When the tragedy in the story happens, we all want to stop it, but we are not the people in the book, so we can't do anything. Luo's appearance is more like us entering the book to witness the development of the story more intuitively. As for why there are no fan chapters, it is because Luo's positioning in this book cannot Change the outcome of the story, so I feel like I won't write it anymore, because at least in my opinion, fanfics are created just because there are regrets in the original work that cannot be made up for, but since the protagonist cannot be changed, I don't think it's interesting to write it, so I won't plan to write a fanfic for the time being, but I can make a spin-off later to make up for the regrets. You can write down the original work, and the author will read the original work and think about it.

The setting is very interesting, and the author's imagination is also very rich, but maybe because of the setting of the protagonist, his sense of participation in the plot is a bit low, but the second volume did make changes, and it is still very interesting. Come on, author

Except that the protagonist's personality and behavior really don't look like he has traveled many worlds, other aspects are pretty good.

Not bad, add a little more, the plot of black tea and green tea is more interesting [smile] [smile] [smile], the taste of tea.

The topic of the novel is good, very attractive, and worth following up. I give you a 5-star review, keep it up. [Like][Like][Like][Like]

The system is refreshing, the author has profound thoughts, the plot is twists and turns, bizarre and moving, and contains a profound meaning. It makes you read it with relish and linger on!

It's pretty good to watch, but I feel like there aren't many people watching it. The writing technique is quite fresh

The plot is good, the content is rich, and the connection is smooth. It is a good book and deserves five stars.

This type of subject matter is novel and I like it, but there are very few novels of this type nowadays, so please give it a try! I also suggest that the author improves his writing style!

This is the world of travel I want to see. The protagonist is involved, but does not interfere too much with the development of the world. Like a passer-by, witnessing the development of each story

A pretty good book.

Not bad, it suits my taste. I just suggest that the author insert less personal narration in the middle of the chapter.