Is It Reasonable for Senior Brother to Be so Weak?

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It's good for a new author to write like this. It feels like something I've read online for many years, but the plot transfer and paragraph succession are a bit stiff. However, the writing style is quite concise and the plot is well developed. The ideas in the recent chapters may not be very good, so you can settle them down.

When it comes to the emotional line, the matching CP given by Tiandao should be Senior Sister Su Yingzhou, and then the writing behind it becomes a harem story, but it can also be understood as a deviation caused by the "cultural pollution" behavior of various time-travelers of the male protagonist. After all, there were originally some characters, including Shang Yun who "went astray" after reading the male protagonist's storybook, Jingyin who accidentally saw the male protagonist's past life memories that Tiandao did not allow to be leaked due to seizing the body, Yurou who was gradually involved because of Jingyin's existence, and Mengjiao who became yandere because of Yurou (and she can be regarded as the male protagonist's fate changed by modern thinking)... Speaking of senior sisters, it is reasonable for every time-traveling man who has never been in love in his previous life to be involved too much due to emotional intelligence reasons, and at the same time to force the female character's behavior to step on the III threshold. Looking at it from another angle, maybe the pure love of Destiny's Child has turned into a time-traveling harem story that no one, including the time-traveling male protagonist, knows about. The real original time-traveler should be the time-traveling girl from Tianyifang. It would also be nice to write an article from a female perspective in a previous life that was "funny + tomboyish (the character design can be convenient for the author to write)". It can even be said to be the experience of witnessing the collapse of the plot with your own eyes.

It's over, it's over. I really like the mission of Nine Days. Although it ends abruptly, it seems that there is not much to write in advancing the story line. However, the writing style is indeed very good. I hope the author can write some extra chapters [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

After all, this is the author's debut novel, and it's very good to write it to this level.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a comfortable book. The rest of the book seems to be coming to an end, but that's not a big problem. And Jiutian can't really use my brother Lu's template, right? 🤔Although they are not exactly the same, they are similar in many places, such as the ethereal root that is like a history, the unconventional old master and his early development through wretchedness, and the sect atmosphere that is extremely harmonious compared to other novels.

It's very interesting. I really like the protagonist. Well, how can I put it? The character of a gentleman will not be hidden. I mean he will be close to you. There are many novels that like to hide a lot from close friends. I can't stand the same routine. I quite like this protagonist.

Again, five stars, five stars. What I want to see most now is the process of Kagamine's old aunt fairy slowly falling into decline. After all, the male protagonist is so strong, so off-kilter, and slowly attracted to her, and then watching Kagamine Fairy being extremely arrogant and causing trouble, it's pretty good, to be honest.

I finally finished reading it. Overall, it's pretty good. The characters and storylines are pretty good, but there are a few things that I think are weird. For example, at the end, half of the soul is taken away from the pig's trotters and goes to the fairy world, which gave me a weird feeling of who is stronger and who is the real body. There is also a lack of activity in the portrayal of the senior sister. For example, the protagonist burps twice and there is no big reaction [laughing], but I still have to say that the book is quite interesting.

Personally, I feel that it is well written and comfortable to read. I hope there will be more updates.

Author, don't think of yourself as a human being, 20 a day is not a dream, come on, believe in yourself.

Very interesting, keep up the good work [top post]

The plot is good, and I also like the heroine Luo Yurou and Jiutian, but the author may have arranged for these two couples. So give it four stars. Although the title of the book is about Brother So Weak, Xiao Mengjiao doesn't have many roles. She is my second favorite character in the book. The senior sister feels fresh to me, but maybe I don't particularly like the cold character setting. Dongfang Shangyun's emotional scenes were very sudden, and it was love at first sight.

I am so touched that the author is not a pigeon

I can only say that I can read it. After all, there are not so many requirements to read a free novel. If I can accept it, I'll give it a five-star rating. If I can't accept it, I won't say anything.

It's a good daily article. Except for the slowness of Jiutian Realm, the heroines are very fast. The elders have not upgraded much. Just wait and see the map at the end.

The protagonist is quite interesting, but the author's writing skills need to be improved.

The plot is attractive, and I also like the characters. It looks very leisurely and relaxing, and the emotional processing is okay. I can accept it. Good luck to the author. I feel that the author writes very well about daily life and fighting, but I feel that I don't feel well when writing emotional dramas such as tragedy. For example, when writing about Jiutian's parents, I always feel that it is inexplicable, there is no foreshadowing, and it feels a bit awkward. The author can refer to Reo0's way of writing the protagonist's burst of emotions, which makes people feel sad and distressed.

Why is the rating so low?

Okay, pretty good-looking

What's the use of reading? Just read this story and you will understand

I think it's very good and interesting

I didn't expect it to end so soon. I hope the author can surpass himself and get better and better in the future.

The score could be higher. There are not many fairy tales written in this humorous style in Tomato. It seems to make people feel happy, and it has a different feeling from refreshing articles.

I have read more than two hundred chapters, and there are some shadows, but that doesn't stop me from liking it.

It's a good daily article to pass the time! !

I think the early and middle stages are very well written, and the later stages are also good! I hope the author can keep up the good work! Publish better books

This is one of the few books that I can read on Tomato, and a few chapters are a bit slow. But good

I think the writing is okay. At least I think the characters have their own characteristics. Maybe you have different opinions on me. I quite like it. Waiting for the next one

The writing style and overall framework are not enough, but the characters are very likable. Although it is a harem novel, it is very comfortable to read. The protagonist is very likable. Keep up the good work [Blow kiss] I originally gave it four stars based on my objective opinion, but after thinking about it, I decided to give it five stars. After all, there aren't many novels on Tomato that I can read in one go, so I'd better give it some encouragement [laughs]