Xia Xingyue, an ordinary girl in the 20th century, traveled to the 1950s and grew up as a baby. She was short of food and clothing, and life was difficult. She was about to experience three years of famine, and the next 10 years of revolutionary turmoil. I was not afraid. I had a lot of space materials, and I took my family to eat well. I also fed the little bamboo horses, waiting for the opportunity to make a lot of money, and have a good harvest of family and love.
This is my first time writing a very ordinary story. Please give me your advice.
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Just don't use the first person pronoun of me, me, me.
Personally, I feel that the author's writing is very good, and it is very realistic and realistic. Maybe I am also born in the 50s! But some of the protagonists were female. At that time, especially if there were elderly people at home, the patriarchal mentality was too serious, and there were too many things that girls couldn't do easily!
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Just don't use the first person pronoun of me, me, me.
Personally, I feel that the author's writing is very good, and it is very realistic and realistic. Maybe I am also born in the 50s! But some of the protagonists were female. At that time, especially if there were elderly people at home, the patriarchal mentality was too serious, and there were too many things that girls couldn't do easily!
Not bad! The group's favorite
Very nice and humane [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love] [Love]
Looks good, okay?