Arknights: the Yanderes Are Chasing After Me

At present, I feel that there are only two problems. One is that Lin Bai is included in the main plot, and the second is that the transition is too sudden. I suggest putting the 1st Aalto and the 2nd Lin Bai into extra chapters, and then the transition (I'm a novice and don't know what to do, I'll wait for the boss to add) Now, there is a very serious poisonous point: the male protagonist is a time traveler, but the subsequent plot has forgotten this point. Since knowing that every "doctor" is "him", the male protagonist is described as if he is a native of Terra. Then the body of the male protagonist can be used at any time, giving me a kind of tool man prepared by the male protagonist just to follow the plan of the first "Doctor" (The above are all personal opinions. If you want to argue, you don't need to argue. Everyone has their own preferences for carrots and cabbage)

A very nice fan work with great potential. I hope the author can persevere and make this story complete from beginning to end [Note]

Very good, it made me unable to face the early morning movie after staying up late to watch it [Love]

The concept and ideas are very good, but I still don't understand how the plot should develop next.

Ah, so excited, Shura Field, I love watching it, the yandere is crazy and sick, I'm so excited, everyone [sneaky laugh] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile]

The subject matter is novel. So far, it seems that there is no poison, and the writing is not bad, so I must give it full marks.

The protagonist's abilities are quite in line with the game

Don't stop updating, brother, you are my brother, you are my brother! Don't stop updating. It's not easy to find a book that suits my heart so well. If you break up, my heart will be empty for a few days.

In the early stage, the protagonist died for a few chapters and was resurrected. The first yandere was Amiya. Later on, the sister appeared with the same style and different eyes as the protagonist, and the second yandere, Tallulah, was very exciting [laughter]

At present, it seems that the potential of this book is still very high. It depends on how the author fills in the holes in the later stage. However, sometimes the interspersed narrative is indeed a bit messy. Come on [laughter]

Well written, keep it up

Good work, author. I really think this book is super good. It has many different settings compared to other Ark books I have read. It is very good. I give it five stars [sending my heart]

It's been almost half a fucking year, why haven't you come yet?

Very well written, cheers author

I just don't understand the relationship between the protagonist's souls.

It's above average, even though the content is a bit messy, but the syllabus is quite new and pretty.

To be honest, although it's a bit messy, the plot doesn't have to be explained, and it doesn't feel twisted, and it's also explained later, so it's really good to watch. However, the traffic of the boat is too little, so the update is very slow. I just need to keep updating, and I can add a few chapters as soon as I remember.

That Lin Bai feels a bit like Brother Shaohao to me.

Very beautiful, come on

Ahhhhhhhhh, author, how can I survive if you don't update?

I can't understand it a bit, but please come on, author

Dear author, you don't want me to give up. If you don't want to, then you have to update it quickly.

The subject matter is quite novel, I hope the author can continue writing it

Give more, you will become addicted!

Don't be a eunuch, it's very beautiful [crying]

It looks good, I love watching it (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on

Stories always have an ending... Getting ready for school

It's pretty well written, but I don't know why not many people

It's okay. It's common to be betrayed by plotters. Just get used to it. You still have many colleagues who were betrayed working here. Just change it slowly.

It's all good, but the portion is too small, and when can I see Tallulah?