Yaoshou***********

The needle doesn't poke, hehehe [laughing evilly] It feels so good, but this heroine is too strong

The heroine is very independent. To be honest, what I think of being strong is not being strong, but feeling that you are special, so it is not self-improvement but pride, and a disdain for others. Then give yourself one. An upright reason. So I especially like to see those strong people being suppressed until they finally collapse. Come on author, I look forward to the moment when the heroine breaks down. After all, isn't there some fun in this? Aha How is this self-improvement? The heroine has never suffered a loss. So don't be anxious, let the heroine suffer more, torture the heroine more, and she will naturally be obedient.

I suggest that instead of the heroine being manipulated unilaterally all the time, it should be more exciting to have back and forth. The male protagonist and the female protagonist should not always be at odds with each other.

After seeing the back, the woman still had a stern face, hoping to add a setting to transfer the soul. If she didn't cooperate, she would just run away and find another obedient one [grievance]

Partial control is a good theme, somewhat similar to strange beasts. However, Qishengmon's right hand is fixed, and this work can increase the number of controllable parts as time goes by. It is said that it is the ability of the right hand, but it is actually just one more privilege that the protagonist can forcibly control the right hand. Abilities consume the male protagonist's mental energy as cost, and are controlled by the male protagonist. There is no such thing as letting the female protagonist control some of her powers. As for the second ability (heavy) telepathy (telepathy), the left hand is a very failed design. It overlaps with the first metal telepathy. Moreover, the first ability is already high-consuming to kill. The second ability should be low-cost assistance. Gravity is a very high-cost ability, so it is not suitable for early appearance. The heroine who has already gained control of her right hand will be too passive if she loses her left hand. It would be better to use the left foot as the second control part, so that the male and female protagonists can each control half of it. Ba Ba is a nickname that is good for enemies only once or twice, but it doesn't feel good to use it for a long time when the heroine is a friend.

Personally, I feel good about it. The characters are quite distinct. It's not as bad as the reviews say. Except for the protagonist who directly reveals his identity at the beginning, the characters are quite consistent with the personality. I suggest you watch it yourself and don't be affected by the reviews.

666, All the books have been blocked, and the books on my bookshelf still show that they have been discontinued.

It's still pretty good, but it seems to be developing into a harem, so let's get there, keep up the good work, author.

The writing is great. Fortunately, it is not written crookedly. Although the author can write about controlling spaceships and the like. Using gravity and metal powers, he can build a spaceship and have a metal giant Titan to fight with. But I was attracted by the two souls in one body. I suggest the author write more plots like this. As for the confrontation with the survivor alliance, it can be postponed for a while [Like] [Like]

Nice, but too short

I really like this book [Sending my heart to you]

I've finished reading it, it's good, cheers, author [Like]

I can still rate it now.

When I didn't eat any good pork in 16 years, I was willing to read this kind of book. But now it's different. I'm crooked. I like to read about the domineering Big Big Wolf falling in love with the pretty sheep village chief.

This is called the cold school beauty. I'm afraid it's not the entire Arctic, it's really cold [smile]

Okay, okay, very good

I can watch it at will, okay?

The book is good, I read it in one sitting

Ness is my type

It's a good mistake, keep working hard

Drive! Take me one

It's okay hahaha

Why is the rating so low? It's obviously pretty good.

How could I, a serious person [laughing evilly], see this?

Author, you're not good at it. It's been a while since you've updated [smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's pretty good, but there's too little of it. If it weren't for the book shortage, I wouldn't have clicked in.

It's okay. It sounds okay.

As an invincible novelist, it really pleased me. Have you ever seen a god? I hope the author will continue to work hard [sending my heart]

It feels like it's no longer an apocalyptic novel. This is simply liberating nature.

Very exciting, no need to say more. Everyone understands.