The First Book by Feng Yin Xue Luo

It's really not easy to find a fanfic of Jianlai, and I don't want to be picky, but let's sum it up: first, there are many typos, often with fewer words and more words, which affects the perception; secondly, at the beginning of the book, there is really a feeling of seeing Jianlai, but since the breakage of the Great Li Cave Sky, it has become a bit difficult. It may also be to omit the original plot, but it is obvious that the author did not handle it well; thirdly, it is a fan after all, so naturally The protagonist has a much stronger sense of existence, no longer like Jian Lai, and the supporting characters also take a long and detailed description to increase the connection and sense of the article; well, having said this, I still hope that the author will work hard, after all, it is too difficult to find a fan of Jian Lai, and my favorite Xiu Xiu is the heroine, I must support it. Of course, I also recognize the author's writing style 👍😄👍

Come on, author, it's rare to see the same text about Jianlai I'm going to be in my senior year of high school. I hope the author can write down the same text about Jian Lai when I go to college.

The writing is okay, but the second shopkeeper's state of mind later is not easy to write. It is recommended to prepare the plot of the battle between water and fire in advance. My suggestion is that Xiu Xiu stays and Li Liu ascends to heaven. I quite like the pairing of Xiu Xiu and the male protagonist. As a Jian Lai fan, Xiu Xiu is indeed a pity. I hope you can write well and don't let me down.

Good, great good. When the sword came, there was a sword, but now there is a honglu. Watch the sword again, and then take advantage of the scenery!

This is the most similar book written by Jian Lai that I have read since Jian Lai. I have found the feeling of savoring the book carefully as I read it in the first place. Good luck, author.

I have never seen a Kenlai fan work before, and ordinary people can't write it. Without that skill, the author's writing is really good, the characters are integrated smoothly, and the high-quality feeling of the original work has not been reduced much. When I saw the title of the book, I didn't expect much, but I didn't expect it to be a surprise. I personally feel that a good fanfic should be integrated into the original work but different from the original work, and show greater excitement based on the original work. I hope the author can polish it carefully, stay away from clichés, ensure quality, and maybe become a god.

Although the ending was not satisfactory in the end, everyone was happy in the process, right? In fact, reading the Jianlai fanfic is to make up for Jianlai's various regrets. The regrets in the hearts of all Taoist friends can be seen that the author does not want to end it. This book is finished, but the world of all Taoist friends is not over. I wish all Taoist friends that their families are in harmony, their hearts are peaceful, and all seasons are like spring. I hope you can all find your own Ning Yao, and that you can love each other, never leave, and stay with the girl you like for eternity. All gentlemen, encourage each other!

This book is really good... Come on, author! Please [salute]

After reading it, what should I say? After all, it is a sword, and the world is far away, so fellow Taoists cherish it. Don't feel like you're unfinished or anything, because that's Jianlai, Jianlai in our hearts, and we all have a common destination, Hanging Mountain.

It's really strong. It reminds me of when I was watching Jian Lai. Halfway through, I felt so angry that I wanted to write a novel like Jian Lai, but I always dared to think about it but didn't dare to do it. I am still self-aware of myself, and my writing skills are really not good enough. I still admire the author for doing things that I dare to think about but dare not do. I also support the author very much.