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The protagonist's system is very ordinary. The protagonist's choice has always been following the public, but he will also have his own ideas. Although the system is useless, it will always accompany the protagonist [Blowing Kiss] There is a knife in the sweetness, and the knife is sweet again. The protagonist will not always be ordinary, but he will always be an ordinary person [I understand] Although the new article still has some flaws, the plot is worth reading [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Awesome, it's rare to see such a simple Bungou Stray Dog

It's really good to watch. I don't want the other protagonists to be too bold, but it's the real situation of an ordinary person who became Bungou Stray Dogs. Ordinary life and ordinary people are mixed with something extraordinary. The weak are in that kind of environment, that kind of erratic situation where they may lose their lives at any time, but they are powerless. The emotional line is relatively obscure (although all veterans here can see it), but the scene where Dazai takes a shower at the protagonist still feels a bit stiff and could use more work. But can you please give me more? The child really has nothing to eat [Petrochemical] In summary: This book is unique among a group of Goldfinger books. Family members who are tired of reading Goldfinger can read it.

It's super good-looking. The protagonist is really heart-wrenching, but it also feels so real. He obviously doesn't have the super powerful golden finger like other novels. I just really like reading it and watching the protagonist grow up little by little. I will be very happy every time he makes a little progress. Until the end, he will be the protagonist I have always liked.

Very nice! It's also quite real. The protagonist's real-life background is very similar to mine, and I can empathize with it! Big cheers for the author! Update faster! Too slow The content is very interesting\(//∇//)\But who is Dazai and Mo Yan? ? ? I'm almost dying of curiosity! @LQTXY

It's really good to read, very exciting. I haven't read the original novel, but I read it to read this one. It's a very different novel! Especially the more you read, the better it gets! The writing is not embarrassing at all. This is the second special novel among the many books I have read on Tomato. The protagonist is really heart-wrenching [Crying] His father doesn't care for his mother and he really gets mad when he sees his mother treating him [angry]. Even if his uncle's death was not caused by him, it casts a shadow on the protagonist. I really want to say you are not a monster!! ! Because you have been a child who has not been loved or favored since birth, even the person who created you wrote it with hatred and resentment [crying] [crying] I really can't imagine how much grievance and pain he has experienced, whether it is his world or this world [almost crying] Let the protagonist and Dazai Osamu redeem each other! The author must keep writing! Even if the water update is slow, I don't mind. I really want to accompany Mo Yan and finish the journey with him. The last novel that suited my taste was too late because there were too few people and the economy was slow. After reading about 50 chapters, the ending of "Eunuch" was very rushed. I really cried to death! I originally wanted to write a few simple sentences, but I wrote a long paragraph (I am really a talkative person). Anyway, I give you five stars. Come on.

Very nice! This book is the most realistic I have ever seen. It describes the real situation of ordinary people traveling to "Bungou Stray Dogs". I like it very much. Like some other protagonists, they start out just like Long Aotian, looking like running water. The writing is great, waiting for you to update it every day! O(^o^)oCome on! (Preferably more per day!)

I like it, it's super beautiful, I highly recommend it, I would like to call it the "Tomato Bunno Lifetime Series"

Super pretty, really The reality is described in a plain tone, and the writing is very good. It is the kind that makes my eyes sore when I read the sentences describing the scenery. The ending is good, but I still can't help but feel sad. There is a peaceful feeling that becomes a sashimi/paralysis It tortured me to death! ! But I can actually call him he! Incomprehensible! ! Ah, I really can't forget it after reading it. I originally read the fanfic to soothe my inner pain, but Mo Yan became another heartache in my heart... Even when I was watching the anime, the theme song played, and when I saw the characters flashing before my eyes, I would still think: Huh? Where is Mo Yan/It's really sad... However, I feel that the relationship between Mo Yan and Dazai Osamu is worse than no relationship at all. It's really strange, super strange and awkward... Fortunately, it's just a little bit intimate... Well, because I think Mo Yan and Dazai Osamu have a friendship that goes beyond love!

It's really good to watch. It depicts the real Bungou Stray Dogs. Even for people with strong empathy, it may feel very depressing, like me. Okay, okay, great, great, how should he choose? On one side is Mo Yan, who has never been happy in his life, and on the other side is Mo Yan, who has parents and friends living a happy life. How does he choose? He couldn't choose. Okay, okay, the knife is dead [crying] [crying]

The description of the psychological activities of the protagonist is very real, and the plot is also very realistic. For a growing protagonist, the emotional line feels like it should be slower 🙈🙈🙈 Because the communication between the protagonist and Dazai and the description of the events they experienced together are a bit sparse, it may be strange if the relationship is too fast (ꈍꈍ๑✿)

It's very beautiful, let me tell you my feelings. I think the character creation is pretty good, and the character design is not broken. But I really feel sorry for the protagonist. I feel that he has never been unswervingly chosen. Dazai is very good, but I still think that the protagonist has been unswervingly chosen to only choose him and only him. It is too painful for him. Of course this is my feeling, Dazai is also great, and the writing is also very good.

Well, how should I put it, I read it all at once. I left the bedroom intermittently and looked at the sky several times in one night. The stories of the original world in those chapters gave me a sense of déjà vu. Whenever I went there, I couldn't help but think of myself. I think the most unique thing about this article is that it doesn't mention us in a word, but it seems that every word is talking about us, people like us who have discordant families. I don't feel sorry for myself because I am lucky enough. Then I thought of Mo Yan. I thought, Mo Yan is the most typical one, right? He really doesn't look like a protagonist anymore. Generally speaking, protagonists have their own shining points, such as Paul, Mr. Fujino, Fan Ainong... But when I think of Kong Yiji, Oba Yezang... He is indeed a protagonist. Life is ordinary, but in this life that only you know, you are your own protagonist. Whether they are relatives, friends or something more, they cannot fully participate in your life. Finally, I hope that Mo Yan can always be happy after all the stories; I hope that everyone who reads this book review will create their own memories; I also hope that the author will get better and better, and the stories will become more and more exciting.

Hey, it's an unexpected ending. It's so cruel. There are really a lot of knives, and what is revealed and what is hidden is really worrying. What is revealed between the lines needs to be tasted by oneself. I got it in all aspects, and it was really uncomfortable. I really can't describe the feeling. They obviously love each other, but they can't be together, so they can only choose to forget the memories between them. I love him and want to give him happiness and joy, so when I saw him living a carefree and happy life, I gave up the idea of ​​taking him away because I loved him. Do you know the difference between liking and loving? It's probably because someone who likes you will stay up all night with you, while someone who loves you will let you go to bed early, so he didn't choose to take him away. Their ending really fits a sentence: "In the end, the tired bird returns to its roost, you and I have a beginning but no end." I think this book may have left me with a lot of grief, the kind that makes me shed tears every time I think about it. It is like the light of salvation and the falling ashes. The story between Mo Yan and Dazai Osamu is over, but the story between Mo Yan and Dazai is not over yet, so I wish you all happiness.

To be honest, it's not cruel, and it does deserve the sweetness the author calls it. It's just that I prefer to see things that are more sadistic... Anyway, the current things are not sadistic. It should be said that they can be more sadistic. The current kind of cruelty can only be said to be like plain boiled water. I know that the protagonist is miserable, but it is not miserable to my heart. There are many points that can make it more sadistic, but the author did not use it. Well, if possible, I hope to be more abusive... But I don't like that kind of misunderstood abuse... The writing is pretty good, not too OOC, and overall it's a sweet cookie. I always feel like I have to suffer a lot when I am with Dazai... Only through trepidation can we gain happiness and usher in the rainbow🌈

Super pretty! It's just a bit abusive... (つд⊂) Come on, the author is awesome (✿＞◡❛)

It looks good, the characters are very realistic, and the plot is well written. The protagonist's character in this novel is closer to reality and easier to resonate with readers. He is kind, sinful, strong, and cowardly. He is just a human being. 'What is born from the land will eventually return to the land'

This book is different from other fan fiction. The difference is that the protagonist is a very ordinary person, and the system is also a very ordinary system. There are many resonances in the whole book, allowing people to break away from the fantasy of time travel and clearly realize what will happen when an ordinary person, a person like himself, goes to the comics he likes. Anyway, I was deceived so much that I cried [almost cried] [almost cried], and his ending also touched me very much. Maybe there is regret, maybe this is not the most perfect ending, but it is the most suitable ending. I cannot accept that after Mo Yan has experienced so much, he is with Dazai. Everyone is doing well and has a bright future, including Mo Yan, although they have forgotten that each other is not together either [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

This is one of those books that I rarely follow from beginning to end, so let me briefly review it. I think the plot from the beginning to Osamu Dazai's defection is very interesting. My favorite part is the one where I gave him candy when we first met. The plot before the time travel was also good, but after Mo Yan became mute, it suddenly turned down the road. I felt confused and didn't know what I was reading. In fact, I would be happy for a long time when I saw the author updated a chapter. After that, I put the book away for a while, then started reading it from the beginning again, and now I have finished it. I think the ending is pretty good. When I saw the author saying that this book was going to be, I was stunned. I was really sad, but I didn't expect it to be written like this. It exceeded my expectations. Talking about the characters, Mo Yan and Osamu Dazai were both very good in the early stage. I especially liked the plot in the early stage where Mo Yan was cautious in trying to please Osamu Dazai and was worried (can this be said), but I felt that Mo Yan had a slight breakdown after he became mute, and then came back. Overall, this is my favorite of the literary novels I have read so far. (I would also like to add that Mo Yan looked crazy when he first came here, which really poked at me.) Four stars, good work, author! 😋

To be honest, I think be is the best ending. He has been suffering for so long, so he should be sweet, right?

For them, this may be the best ending. Although the whole text is filled with sugar, who would have thought that what the readers would eat tastes like broken glass? Haha. The character of the protagonist is awkward everywhere, from being partially changed by the system to later revealing subtle differences that are inconsistent with the personality that has been emphasized. For example, the original character of the real individual "Mo Yan" under the character that was forcibly given to the protagonist was suppressed at the deepest level. Occasionally, a slight difference will emerge, and after forgetting everything, he will get rid of the programmed protagonist and become his true self. Compared with this, the progress of the protagonist's emotional line is a bit abrupt, but the protagonist himself does not understand emotions, and he can't figure it out (ε=(´ο｀*))) Alas). Thinking about it this way, these two do not regard each other as the most important thing, but they need someone who loves them wholeheartedly to be together. It is really bad, so it is really disappointing. The sad and happy ending is the best ending. The most important light is living happily. One forgets all the pain and has a new happy life. The other knows that the other person is living a good life and is relieved and completely forgets that he forgot that feeling and lives his own life. The traces of existence disappear from the world and are not remembered by anyone. Happy The ending is simply, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

It's really good-looking, it's really a big knife, the protagonist, well, how should I say it? He is also a sad character, just a normal ordinary person. He can be said to be the most ordinary protagonist I have ever seen. Really, the overall tone feels very dull, and the protagonist automatically feels alienated from them, which is quite relatable. Big boost for the author😄💪^ω^ I replayed it again after two years, and I feel that I have some new feelings. I think there is no problem with the character design of the protagonist as mentioned by the author. No matter who encounters some very serious things, his personality will change, and he is not an unchanging robot. The love between Dazai and the protagonist can be said to be the truest and best outcome for an ordinary person with a purpose. 😁In the end, it can be said that everyone is happy, the real TE ending. Dazai's choice of Odasaku is the most normal thing, just like the protagonist would choose that girl if he had a choice. ⊙ω⊙Because it is salvation. Their most important person.

It also feels more suitable for Mo Yan. Zai and Mo Yan are so similar. They are two people who are lonely, confused and separated from this world. They can only struggle to get some comfort from each other. But as Mo Yan said, it was too late for him for such a dazzling and warm existence as Zhongya.

Like the idea, it's such an interesting idea, and the writing is also good, otherwise I would have run away halfway through the movie. When I saw that they were not together but went on different paths in life, I was a little overwhelmed at that moment, but it makes sense when I think about it. I would like to give a five-star review to support the author's big idea and writing style.

Mo Yan is a very good person. Although he and Dazai were quite abusive, I am still happy for his final outcome. He is no longer the person who was rejected by the world. He will also be loved and loved by others. The system is one of my favorites. Anyway, the teacher's writing is very good and you can get into the trap.

Thank you to the author for [sending heart][blowing kiss][admiration]. What's so cute about me is that ordinary people are the protagonists. It's a redemption text. Oda Sakunosuke, Nakajima Atsushi, Akutagawa Ryunosuke, so sweet. Atsushi Nakajima is Mo Yan's good son. Actually, brothers are more suitable. They are about the same age, but my father always finds it strange. Mo Yan is so virtuous, so just marry Dazai Osamu. Mo Yan is not a bad person, nor is he selfish.

It's very interesting, thank you. I don't want to read novels in my life after reading it [smile] The ending of this TE is so uncomfortable for me [smile]

It's beautiful, I chased it all in one go

To be honest, I regret reading it. It was so cruel. Although the final result is good, it is hard to reconcile. The author, do you still remember that you said this is a sweet book? [Smile]o(TヘTo) But the author's writing in big letters looks good

Come on, I hope it won't be discontinued. There are no other requirements. The protagonist is very special and more in line with ordinary people in reality. He is different from other protagonists with golden fingers (it's not that protagonists with golden fingers are bad). The author has indeed written about the difficulties of ordinary people entering the world of Wenye. Anyway, the writing is good, keep up the good work.