Gathering the Smoke and Fire

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good! Recommend everyone to see it!

The writing is very good, the plot has ups and downs, and is very interesting. The characters' personalities are outstanding and distinct, and it's nice to watch!

It looks good, the writing is very good, the plot is ups and downs, and the protagonist's character is also quite outstanding. I really like reading it. It's well written. Come on.

The plot of the story is delicate and intriguing. The story is relatively delicate, interlocking and not superficial. I like Song Changming more than the protagonist. He is particularly handsome.

The content is rich and colorful, I like the description of the male protagonist very much, the details are well described, the author will give it a thumbs up.

It felt a bit rushed in the early stage, but I slowly corrected it in the later stage. I don't know how much I can write, and it feels a bit like a snake's head but a tiger's tail.

I think the writing style is pretty good, but for fantasy and immortality, you still have to wait for a long word count before anyone is willing to read it.

I want to write the feeling of "Sword Comes", but I can't seem to write it. It's like the protagonist who was born as a slave. He understands hard, hates understanding, and understands badly. He just doesn't understand what a young man should be like. Please forgive me for the dregs.