Pick up Phoenix

It's really good-looking, I don't know why it's not popular? Such a good-looking Shuangnan beast-controlling novel, some of the settings really poked me. The gentle little angel and the sunny sportsman are really good (˘ ³˘)❤. The author's writing style is also very delicate. I almost missed this treasure article because the introduction was too wordy, did not reflect the key points, and did not match the title and cover of the book. I think the author can change it. Go to the book list to recommend it. Shuangnan in the beast-controlling novel is quite rare (.-ω-)Zzz[blowing kiss]

How should I put it? It was very painful to watch, and I felt sad. Most of the time I have watched it, the main character was wronged and wronged. The content is very good, but it is too frustrating. I feel that except for the main character, everyone else is doing well. I feel very sad. We don't want too many cool articles, but besides feeling aggrieved, it made my whole glass heart burst into pieces [face covering] I was so happy when I saw the pictures in the novel. Apart from feeling unwilling to accept the protagonist, this book was also very aggrieved [I almost cried] [I almost cried]

Although some parts may seem frustrating, they are very close to reality. But as someone outside the book, I really feel that Tangli is miserable. Now that he has finally turned dark, can we make him happier? [Crying]

To be honest, I think the author's writing is quite good, and I like it quite a lot. After all, the theme of beast-control novels + dual male protagonists is quite rare, and almost no one writes about it. First of all, the author, you are clearly writing a beast-control novel, but it feels more like a supernatural power novel to me. You have written dozens of chapters and have been writing about the talents and powers of the protagonist. Basically, you have not written much about beast-control. In my opinion, since you are writing a beast-control novel, you can write less about talents and powers. After all, the focus of the article is on beast-control and not the so-called superpowers. Of course, although the main force in the battle is the warcraft under his command, the person who controls the beast still has It requires some force points and self-preservation ability; secondly, the title of this article is "Villain Growth". I think the villain here is the protagonist Tangli (please don't worry if I guess wrong). The protagonist's experience has always been in line with the villain's "beautiful, strong and miserable" setting. If it were someone else, he might have retaliated against society and destroyed the world. I also hope that the protagonist can go dark and protect himself. The protagonist's experience is really a bit frustrating. Although Zhou Yuan, who loves the protagonist deeply, will protect Tangli in the future, I hope that Tangli can become strong enough to protect himself. (Personal opinion, because I jumped a bit when reading the article, I may not have read some chapters, and some expressions may not be appropriate)

I love you author so much, so awesome! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Please update, too few [I'm about to cry]

The writing is very good. I feel that the subject matter is still very new, but the updates are slow. From the comments, it seems that the author has not found a suitable job. Don't stop updating. Send me the payment code. Although I only have a little money, don't stop updating [cry][cry][cry]

The emotional line is okay, but it's too frustrating.

Like it! ! The exhausted body and broken heart really feel sorry for Xiao Li (😭) My heart was broken when I saw the blackened part. Looking at Xiao Yuan who didn't know anything, I really felt like I hated iron. (😡) I look forward to the following plots and hope that xql can still be as sweet as before. I am a native dog and I love watching it [almost crying] [almost crying], the author, please come on——👊💞💞

The book is a good book, and the author's writing is also very good. At least I was involved in it, so I felt like I had a myocardial infarction when I read it. It was so frustrating. In my opinion, there is a discrepancy between the introduction and the content of the book. The synopsis seems to be light-hearted, but the specific content seems to me to be about abuse. (I read the book before, probably last year, and after I added it to the bookshelf, I didn't pay much attention to it. When I read it, the synopsis was not what it is now, because it now indicates that it is about abuse, which was not the case before). The whole story begins with sadomasochism, which is also a self-inflicted torture. His character is such that anyone can step on it. Before I quit, I felt that the only sweet thing was to express my feelings and confirm the relationship. And what is the author's favorite thing to say? This is not a cool novel. It depends on the slow pace of the cool novel (this is probably what it means). Anyway, it is very strange. It seems that in his opinion, apart from the cool novel, there are no other types of novels like the sadistic novels he writes now. In my opinion, the author seemed to have previously defined this novel as bland (I don't know how to describe it), but the author seemed to write it as if he were writing a sadistic novel. However, the author has a very clear writing idea. At least the plot should be roughly arranged. Before the first volume was finished, he had already conceived part of the third volume (if I remember correctly), but the writing speed is a bit slow, but it is understandable. After all, I am not writing novels full-time. Finally, come on, author. Finally, you need to be careful when entering the pit. The author is a bit slow in coding, and you have to think clearly about whether you can accept the abuse. I didn't read it because I felt uncomfortable reading it before. Of course, another reason is also because it was tied at the time, but the author hasn't updated it for a while, and I didn't pay much attention to it in the future, so I stopped reading it. I thought of it today when I saw someone recommending the book, so I wrote a book review.

Why is it that the protagonist is surrounded by enemies and there are only a few good people? It might as well be that the protagonist is an orphan. It's so pitiful. Author, please save the child.

I feel like I can push the main plot while reminiscing about the killing (I don't really want to watch the memories, I just feel tortured). It's really painful to watch Shou's torture, but I'm also looking forward to the subsequent darkening and Gong-Shou's rebellion and reunion. It's just a bit slow, and Shou's psychological growth process is still a lot – in short, there will be more of Shou's psychological growth.

The author is great, what is his ending? Hope it is he. I saw that the part where the protagonist saves the monster was a little bit Madonna-esque and a little aggrieved. But the author also wrote it in the introduction. The other plots are also very interesting, so five stars.

It's very interesting. I wonder if the main character will cut off any relationship with his parents in the future. I think it will have to be cut off no matter what.

I really hope to see the male protagonist rise and become darker. What I saw before made me feel sad and aggrieved.

It's pretty good... But the current plot is a bit uncomfortable... I hope the author will update it soon [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

Come on, make it bigger and stronger. It is still a new book and not many people are normal. If the ending is Be, it can be split due to many reasons. Among them, I feel that "identity" or "forced" or "event" reasons are the main ones, and other reasons such as: position, ideas, contradictions, misunderstandings/misunderstandings, some details, some things done for some reasons (others don't know the reasons, just look at the surface), etc. Are secondary. There should be some scenes in this system, but I feel like there is something wrong with this system, because Long Aotian had one before. The mission is still a strategy mission. I don't know if these two are the same, and whether the mission will be the same. The little green bird feels that it can be set to a higher level so that it will not be ordinary. For the egg, shorten the hatching time and appear earlier. In terms of characters, new characters will serve to intersperse the main line and promote the plot.

Good-looking, but a little lacking So frustrating. .

It is a good book that needs to be read calmly and carefully. The author writes about a very small part. If you rely more on your own reasoning about the characters in the book, you will find that the actions are very, very correct and the details are appropriate. Everyone is the protagonist. Think more about the stories behind the characters. The writing is very friendly, the plot is delicate, and it is really sweet. Use a magnifying glass to knock on the CP. Smart people will already know how to find sweets by themselves.

It's really good to watch, and it gave me a realistic feeling. The protagonist is really brave and strong. I feel that he encountered a lot of difficulties, but he didn't give up easily. But one thing is the author. He may have been good when he wrote it. Well, I feel that what he wrote seems to be a little confusing, that is, Director Liu and Li Mu. Director Liu didn't want the protagonist to suffer, you, slander him at the beginning, and then Li Mu was particularly angry. Later, the protagonist was not angry. I don't know why, but it felt a little strange.

"Fantasy + City + Two Male Protagonists + Darkness" This novel is very real, be is life! There are too few subjects like tomatoes, let alone such excellent ones. The author must keep writing!

I think it's pretty good, and the reality is indeed like this. If others are better than you, you can only tolerate it temporarily. It's not the kind of game where you can just challenge strong people casually just for fun. I personally think it's pretty good. I didn't think the plot was too Madonna-esque, it was just okay for me, at least from what I've seen so far.

Chapter 37 is really good when I read it. The protagonist's character is very tough. He is also very helpless when living in a dark and helpless world. Fortunately, there are people who are kind and love him in this world [crying]. I hope the protagonist can counterattack quickly and slap them in the face. I also hope that Zhou Zhou will fall in love with him more and more in the future. I hope there will be no misunderstanding. The author hastily updated it. I want to watch Counterattack [Sending Hearts] As long as people are not dead, I will update it in the past. Come on! !

Emma, ​​I feel so sad when I see it.

Who knows? I couldn't sleep after watching it in the middle of the night [crying]

It can be said that the subject matter written by the author is quite novel. I also feel that the writing is not particularly bad. I just feel that the author is a bit too kind when describing the protagonist Tangli, and the author is a bit slow in advancing the plot. You can try to advance the plot faster. I hope the author can update it. There has been no update for three days o(*≧▽≦)ツ

[Love][Love][Love] I hope the author can do more

It feels pretty good, but I feel a little aggrieved watching it.

It's too little. It's not enough to read. The text written in big letters is the kind I want to read the most. Please update it as soon as possible [Send my heart] [Send my heart]

Poor little Chang Li

Can the author be kinder to Tangli? He is living in such a miserable life and it makes me feel so depressed [crying]