The End of the World: I Become a Frail Lolita

Virtual is the utopia of reality, the Internet is the base of the soul, and this book is the gathering area for stupid lolita [Sending Hearts]

@Xuan (have read Chapter 78) First of all, the author still has good writing skills, and the book is naturally written and can be written well. Okay, enough with the compliments, let's get down to business. After reading the whole book, the main problem is that the plot is very compact. When I read the whole book, except for the first few chapters and the daily life at the military base (not much better), the rest of the content gave me a strong sense of suffocation, that is, there was no chance to breathe. The male protagonist was playing confrontation throughout the whole process (convinced), so I suggest that the author can slow down the plot [Thinking] Secondly, the whole book feels a bit messy, that is, some chapters are unclear and inexplicable. I can't say that this kind of mess is good or bad. If I sort it out carefully, I think it is good to write it this way, because the author's writing made me miss a lot of details when reading the content, and I successfully confused myself when thinking about the plot. Of course, there are also chaos in the real sense. For example, there is no prompt at all when entering the memory. After reading it, I realize, ah? The paragraph just now was a memory??? Anyway, it is very unpleasant [smile] Then, starting from the plot of "Face and Heart", the author has definitely confused all readers (no one will understand it after reading it once), and what follows may contain spoilers? When I first watched the plot of the male protagonist fighting the female protagonist, I always thought that it was not the real female protagonist, after all, her name was in double quotes, but When I read the latest chapter with a confused face and reviewed the plot, I came to a conclusion that shocked me, that is, the heroine should be herself. After all, the author also said that face and center affect people's consciousness through hallucinations, causing confusion, and the hero beat the heroine violently in this situation (I feel sorry for the heroine, the author is looking at the knife! [Angry]) Anyway, there are still a lot of mysteries in this book, such as who Bai Xia is, why he is helping the male protagonist, whether he is cooperating with the show, or he is here to help. After all, the white flower may also indicate that things are not simple. Alas, it's all the author's fault. He didn't want to use his brain at first, but as a result, he immediately grew a brain. No... His brain seemed to be gone. Finally, the author advised me to change my marriage. After all, this is the main purpose of reading this book, and it is also the wish of many readers. And I don't want the male protagonist and the female protagonist to be separated. And I remember you said that if you become crazy, you will not change your marriage. Don't tell me that the male protagonist and the female protagonist are what you call crazy [smile] I haven't written this long for a long time. I hope the author will adopt it (mandatory requirement).

Serious evaluation: This article uses the "actions" of a large number of characters (referring to who did what?) To show an animation-like picture. The description of the environment fills the blank spaces around the characters in the picture, which is wonderful from different perspectives. The rich plot has ups and downs, and is very vivid and vivid in this special background♂♀.

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I added this book to my bookshelf when there were about 100 copies. At that time, I was also tricked into reading it by the title "Brothers of the End of the World Raised Me as My Wife". At that time, I thought that the subject matter was quite novel and very interesting, so I wanted to read something sweet about the end of the world. When I first clicked on this novel, I really enjoyed it. The excellent writing and the plot I wanted made me rush to catch up on the novel. But the further I read, the more strange it becomes. There are a lot of foreshadowings. The plot is similar to "The Fairy God" and the long-term torture made me breathless. I knew this was not what I wanted, but the more this plot attracted me, maybe it was because I wanted to see how the male and female protagonists' emotional lines would develop later on, or maybe it was the completely unexpected plot that caught my attention, but I still continued watching. When I clicked further, I found that many of the pitfalls that had been buried had been filled in. For a moment, I felt as satisfied and comfortable as if the originally messy room had been cleaned bit by bit and made spotless. I was stunned when I saw about 300 pictures. A girl who looks weak but is also strong and a male protagonist who looks tough but has a fragile heart have already left a strong impression on my mind. This kind of plot that is different from my expectations is the best way to portray the characters. From the perspective of a novel, this novel is very successful. Not only did this novel have a profound impact on me, but the author of this novel is also very admirable. Although this novel was not very popular and did not make much money, he still vowed to never let this novel end. In the end, my evaluation is that the novel is very interesting. The plot is not cookie-cutter, nor can you tell the subsequent development at a glance. The writing style is also very beautiful. I hope the author will fulfill his promise and give the entire novel the ending it deserves! The titles of some of the novels I read have changed.

It's a story about changing marriages, and the non-daily plot and writing are also okay. The additional point is not only as a marriage change, but also as a kind of apocalyptic novel (not mainly about dark zombies and the like). It is also quite good. There is a kind of apocalyptic despair, the kind of killing with rivers of blood. It is terrible, and the cheapness of human life does not reflect the image and character shaping of the male and female protagonists. The various abilities and monsters in it, as well as the performance of strong abilities and high-end combat power, really reflect the author's rich imagination, but I don't know how the author can complete the reason for this apocalypse? I would like to make a suggestion. Now I see that there are a little too many high-end combat forces. On the contrary, there are not many middle-level ones such as mid-low level and slightly mid-to-high level. It is recommended to add more. Also, as I said before, there are too few humans. Judging from the current main supporting characters, it is okay. I don't want to comment too much. There are also few official appearances. So can the author add some human plots in the later cities? Of course, if you are not good at writing interpersonal plots, you can also reduce them appropriately. After all, this kind of now can also show a kind of Xiao Ran. Finally, in view of the plot of Mian Xin and the various Mian characters that may appear later, I think this book can also be used as a Taoist novel. Believe me, it is definitely better than the original text. The original text does not let you understand how confused Xin Su is and how painful Li Huowang is. This book is definitely It can make you understand ([laughing]) that the plot of the face is not very clear, so some readers can't understand it. For this kind of story, I suggest you read it quickly, and you will understand it slowly after reading it. The author has said that her plan is to have about 500 pictures, so don't worry about it being too short. Finally, I still want to say whether Mian Xin can die? Why did he lie dead after being dead for a while?

Hmm, hmm..., I finished reading the first volume, the writing is very good, I also like Changing Marriage There are a lot of foreshadowings and doubts in the plot (it depends on how the author manages to round it off). The plot of [Mian Xin] is quite long (it's a bit convoluted, and it almost confused me. I can't tell the difference! I really can't tell the difference!). [Mian Xin] should be completely dead. Will there be other Mianzi infected bodies appearing in the future? (I'm more curious [face and foot] [sneer smile]) There are many foreshadowings and doubts, such as the identity of the male and female protagonists, supporting roles, rebirths, numbered infected bodies, "gods", etc. I am really looking forward to it more and more! I finished reading... The face is not dead, and it made me feel a little uncomfortable. I hope the author can end this plot quickly. There are more doubts and foreshadowings. What happened to Bai Yue, [Mother] [Dayun], and now another [epileptic pendant] pops up. The experiences of the two protagonists made me feel a little distressed. [Facial Heart] is too evil. This is also the point of dissuading people from reading this book. Many people are confused by reading it and cannot understand it, so they may just quit it.

Okay, okay, just change and get married.

Awesome, love watching Changing Marriage

Hey hey hey it's OK [love]

He likes to torture the male and female protagonists, a double blow to the body and spirit. A passing dog took one look at it and lost half of its life. The male and female protagonists were targeted by monsters as they passed by, resulting in three days of minor injuries and five days of serious injuries. As for the mental side, the male protagonist was hallucinating and beat the female protagonist. The author switches back and forth between several characters. The male and female protagonists are divided into fantasy and reality. From time to time, he also mentions a small background story. This book becomes more and more complicated as it goes on. My brain is no longer full and I don't know where it is? (I don't know if it's because of me) The author is also very powerful. My current knowledge reserve is completely insufficient. I have to go to elementary school to further my studies, otherwise I'm afraid I won't be able to understand it.

Very good, very good. There is a plot in the front that looks a bit confusing, or should be confusing, but you can probably understand it in Chapter 78. What the hell is this rating system? There are only one or two bad reviews, so why is it only a few points? I hope the author will work hard

It's so funny. I've lost my brain after reading Tomato for so long. Suddenly, I read a book that requires me to use my brain.

It's nice to read, and it's easy to clarify things. If you don't understand something, you'll read it briefly, but you'll understand it later. Good luck, author😊 Just think of this as a trick. Emotions are just condiments. The real focus is on the plot. In this way, it is really good to watch.

Seeing that there is no one in the next 400 chapters [crying]

It's a very good book. It has character descriptions, apocalyptic environment descriptions, and all kinds of weird monsters. [Like] Give it a five-star review and wait and see.

Will this book have a voiceover like some other books? [Thinking][Thinking] I'm looking forward to it

It's okay. I hope it's single or hundreds. Married is also ok.

Everything is pretty good, but the ratings are too low and the readers are too few.

I heard there are cows, so I came here because of their reputation. It looks so good, why isn't it popular?

It's pretty good-looking, even if it's not exciting, lacks passion, and is boring.

The sweetness after abuse... Deeply trapped in it It looks good, please come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

Well written, but a bit difficult to stretch

I'm going crazy, it's so cruel.

Fill in all the holes, how proud you are

Fortunately, I have some IQ, otherwise the truth would still be unclear.

The rating of your work is: A. Even the works of the ring masters are not far behind.

It's great, but the rating is not worthy of this novel.

I feel like my CPU is going to burn to ashes after reading this book. Now I've just read chapter 90 and my CPU is already running low [face covering]

There is a strange and fairy feeling above