Immortality*****

As an author, five stars is not too much, right?

Yes, I have read a lot of longevity articles, and this one is pretty good. I just don't know why the rating is so low. It's a bit of a watery chapter so far

Wonderful! Of course it's impossible [shy]. In the early stage, the protagonist is an ordinary person who has immortality. His cultivation of immortality depends entirely on his liver. It's more realistic. I call it the era of plug-ins 1.0. Later, when he arrived at the sect, the sect felt that the protagonist was a genius among geniuses and had high expectations for the protagonist. The protagonist's combat prowess at this period was only average or above due to his lack of background. If the protagonist wanted to continue practicing without revealing his secrets, he had to find a way to strengthen himself, so he went out on an adventure, encountered disaster, survived a catastrophe, fell into a valley, and obtained a treasure. From then on, the 🔛Cultivation of Immortality 2.0 Era began [angry] The current score is 8.4, Which is gratifying, gratifying🎉. The protagonist needs to work harder in the 2.0 Era of plug-ins. When he becomes a Nascent Soul monk, he can go anywhere in the world!

It's been a long time since I've seen a pure Gou Daoliu novel. I hope that no matter what level I reach in the future, I can keep it. Gou Dao. Another thing I like is that it's not sloppy. It's very simple and easy to understand. Unlike some books that write a lot of words of praise for a female character and it's troublesome to read. I like it very much. You only need to briefly describe what it is like, and each plot is not so lengthy. It only tells the main story of the matter. This is truly consistent with longevity. But in the future, it's better not to use other lags. The acceleration time is already incredible. Changsheng plus an acceleration time of 100 times is still a little bit out of line, but this little episode doesn't affect it.

More than ten years of experience tells you that this book is good. Anyway, if you live forever and can survive without taking risks, it is very good. It is not an exaggeration.

It's a pretty good novel about cultivating immortals. It's relatively peaceful. There aren't many descriptions of fighting or killing. What makes me tired of watching the upgraded version of fighting monsters all the way is that the description of the early life is not deep enough. I still remember clearly the part where I once watched the Immortal Reverse and now turns into a mortal, and I have forgotten all the other plots. Come on, author.

It's really good-looking, it's definitely a masterpiece of Tomato Cultivation. The protagonists are basically Gou, unlike other novels where they are said to be Gou, but they are ridiculous. It's just that I'm not used to seeing the protagonist's clone. I made a puppet clone. I guess it's because I don't know how to write the main character. The subject of clones is generally difficult to write about, and the audience is generally relatively small. Novels about cultivating immortals rarely write about clones.

The writing is very good, it feels like immortality, 5 stars, good luck to the author Come on, author, this is the second tactile immortality novel I have read. The boringness of cultivation, the passing of time, slowly getting better, and the writing is very good. This is your famous work, write well!

I have read more than a dozen chapters and I think it is very interesting. Come on, author!

There are new ideas, at least more creative than other longevity articles, good grass

It's pretty good among the longevity articles I've read. Although sometimes the writing is confusing, I'm from Taoist Chen Xun, so be less aggressive. It's free after all. Come on, author, keep working hard. I look forward to your performance when you come back next time during the holiday [Blow kiss]

This is the real immortality. The supporting characters in this book are also living individuals. You can also learn how the supporting characters grow, how the protagonist treats them, and the growth of your own mind.

Looks good, to my liking! Your longevity essay looks really good! Hahaha! I hope you won't be a flash in the pan, and only by perseverance will you be able to gain something! In addition, the author should just write according to his own heart, and don't pay too much attention to the comments of some extreme readers! I quite like your writing style! [Understood][Understood][Understood]

It's really good, but it's never been so good. I watched Li Changsheng come step by step. Now that the elixir formation in Xiaoyao Valley is complete, the memories of the past seem to emerge. I hope Li Changsheng will continue to take Xiaoqing! The immortal cultivator only looks at the ordinary and the clouds and smoke of the past, don't end it easily! Author! I will keep chasing [please update]

It's quite comfortable to watch, but it's a bit lacking.

If my brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother with the readers? It seems that the readers are being sentimental. My brother's body is weak and he just needs to rest. It's the readers who are urging me so much. It hurts my brother's body, and it also makes people feel bad. It's a pity that I pity my brother. What does it matter to the readers whether my brother is injured or not? The readers wish that my brother would update 10 chapters a day. I am different from the readers. I can send the manuscripts and outlines to others so that they can help me check my standards and find out the mistakes.

It's very interesting, but it's not the protagonist's aura. I think immortal people should witness all kinds of things in the world as a traveler, and the protagonists who witness all kinds of different destinies, rather than the kind of seclusion, slap in the face, seclusion, slap in the face. Observing the different destinies of different people from the perspective of a traveler is a good writing angle.

The writing is good, but the casual cultivator I want to read is one that is truly not involved in the great cause and effect. The cause and effect of your breakthrough into a god is a bit awkward. Moreover, after reading the comment section, it seems that there is some Western fantasy content. I don't like it very much and don't want to read it. So bye bye to the author.

Author, have you been using AI recently? Can you please stop using AI?

Not bad, but the talent of the protagonist is too low. Give him a boost. It's 5 stars for now. Don't get carried away.

It's a good read, with a moderate pace. I felt very emotional after reading it and it made me calm down. It's better than a fast-paced novel. This novel is suitable for reading in this fast-food era. It makes you calm down and realize that immortals are also human beings and that there are colorful lives. It's not just about fighting and killing. You can grow up in the quietness of the years. How wonderful it is to live forever! It is enviable that you can sit back and watch other people's lives, the vicissitudes of life, and the ideals pursued by people with all kinds of emotions and desires. You don't have to be afraid of growing old by doing nothing, and you can slowly learn all kinds of things you like.

Keep writing at this pace, I like it very much.

Good! It can be seen that the author has put great care into it! It's also more comfortable to watch!

It's good to keep updating. I hope there will be a chat group for the protagonist in the future. I feel that this would be meaningless after going to Zhongzhou. The routines of the three places have developed in the same way. Going to Zhongzhou is nothing more than cultivating to the immortal ending.

I took a look and found it to be okay, but I don't know if there is a female protagonist in the back. Does anyone know? If the author is here, please answer. I said, why did I stop looking at it before? I'm really convinced. No wonder I gave up before, but now I gave up when I saw the turtle is female from the beginning. Alas [crying][crying]. It's a pity that I don't like longevity novels with female protagonists or harems. I have tolerated the ones about the head of the family like Li, but now, oh, it's depressing. It's hard to find an article that thinks there is no female protagonist or harem. Chang Sheng Wen, the result is [cover face] [cover face] (I feel that the following plot may be that the heroine transforms into the male protagonist to do this and that, and is very annoying, and then they are together again and I do this and that [vomit]) Really, I can't get over this hurdle, let me vent [face cover] [face cover] [face cover] [face cover] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] (I don't like it)

I came to comment after seeing Chapter 57. This is the first time I have read a running account, composition, and longevity essay. What I feel now is Gou. It took several hundred years for Gou to naturally build the foundation during the Qi training period. His strength is equivalent to the later stage of foundation building. Then say something bad. Cultivation of Immortality on a Single Computer is a composition that talks to oneself, and there is no use of commas. Basically no communication with others. As a result, I suddenly felt a little tired after changing the map before commenting. It gives readers the feeling that we are here to read an essay, not a novel, and we are tired of reading it. I will look at it again later and add comments I haven't read it since I reached chapter 60. I'm tired of reading it. [Pauses face] It's a pity that it's over two million words long. I went to brush the Undead Emperor Master three times again, it smells so good

Really highly recommended. Let's not talk about the quality of this novel. Every time we read other novels, someone else leads the team to the secret realm. This novel, Pig's Knuckle Leads the Team, and the Sect Recruits People, feels like it is really written with the flavor of reincarnation.

This book is pretty good, why is it rated so low? Many so-called high-scoring essays are not as good as the writing style of this book. The only shortcoming: it's too short. Please update it to ensure quality and quantity! ! ! ! ! !

The plot is very good, it's all about the skills, moves, and Taoism. This is not reflected. When I saw the Avatar, I thought. Reality and gray fog space are so long. I should be able to understand something, but unfortunately I didn't. What kind of trump card is the past, present, future future [laughing]

The pacing from childhood to adulthood is quite good, and it can be seen that the author has an outline. A small mountain village slowly transitions into an international city, with intention. I believe the author will optimize the details later. Come on