Get Married Right from the Start? Something's Wrong, Something's so Wrong

I have to say that this book is quite enjoyable to read. There are very few emotional lines in Infinite Stream. I like to read this kind of book. Moreover, why are there so many weird stories in your book circle? And then, it seems that you only updated 4,000 words in one day, which seems a bit too little. Other authors only write 81,000 words in one day. I suggest you update more. [Laughing evilly] Come on, come on, come on

As usual, give yourself a five-star to encourage yourself. Readers, please forgive me for my poor writing.

The writing is okay, the relationship between the heroine and the hero is still very sweet, but the author is great, I already know the ending. The ending of your book must be that the hero dies, and Xie Wanci runs away with me, right?

It can be seen from the book that you, the author, must be a two-dimensional person [laughing evilly]. Generally speaking, this book is well written. I just want to know how beautiful the heroine's mother is to make the two brothers turn against each other. It's good to read, please give it a try. I don't want eunuchs. Come on, come on.

Come on, Su Shiwan, I just omitted it because you described this person as very annoying, but the behavior of the male protagonist is not worthy of his identity. No normal person would tolerate her like this, so he probably just ignored her (maybe it's because I am from God's perspective) If there are not many places in this world that have an impact on the subsequent plot, the description of this world can be less (a small suggestion, it may be narrower) Finally, I hope I can see Su Ji soon. After all, as a reader with a single/no female protagonist, it is actually very uncomfortable to watch the male protagonist engage in this kind of ambiguity. I am afraid that you, the author, will suddenly become ill and let them get involved. Finally, I would like to make a small suggestion. If you want to write another novel in the future, you'd better decide on several female protagonists at the beginning. Otherwise, the appearance of Su will be caused by your sudden change of writing a single female protagonist when you want to write a double female protagonist, which will dissuade many people (probably [laughing and crying])

I have read more than 1,600 hours on Tomato. I really think this book is very well written. The plot is smooth, the concept is novel, and the writing is really good. In fact, I first came here because I watched the single female protagonist. However, since I met the female protagonist in the first volume, there has been no follow-up, and there is no description of what happens to the female protagonist later. Instead, the male protagonist returns to reality. Later, I started to rewrite Su Yueli. I think it is outrageous that the heroine has disappeared for dozens of chapters, not to mention that this is a single female protagonist. I think the author can replace the plot development of the hero meeting Su Yueli in real life with the subsequent development of the heroine after the first volume. It can also be regarded as a two-way journey between the two. Isn't this better than writing about Su Yueli? And since the author said in the introduction that it is a single female protagonist, we are also here for the single female protagonist. Personal suggestion: Now we can write the development of the male and female protagonists in the game in two lines. This will make the future encounter between the female protagonist and the male protagonist less blunt. After they meet in real life, they can focus on the development of their relationship in the real world, or the story of their adventures together in the game world. I remember that the female protagonist was from the Republic of China period. I believe it is also very interesting to bring a person from the Republic of China period to modern times to fall in love. So this author's book really has potential. I'm optimistic about you!

You saw me in the middle of the night! Expressing a little fear

By the way, is the protagonist from the Republic of China or what? If the protagonist is a modern person, the inn and drinks should be from the Republic of China when he comes out. In other words, wouldn't the protagonist be surprised to find that the real world is not the Republic of China? It doesn't feel like the author is writing about the background of the Republic of China.

The marriage in the Xie Mansion was good. I prefer ghost marriages and weirdness. Most of the plot after the marriage was average and sweet. I didn't particularly like it, but I didn't hate it either. I thought it was okay. I'll give it a five-point rating.

It's very interesting. It's a pity that not many people have read it. I guess it's because they didn't take advantage of the opportunity when it was officially promoted. I suggest that next time the author writes a new book, it would be better to write more in the first few chapters to attract readers' desire to read on.

The writing style is average, but the plot is still okay. It can be seen that the author is still a newbie, but it is already very good to be able to write like this. Keep up the good work, come on [Blow kiss]

It has a weird aesthetic and a good theme. I really like the Chinese thriller in the first volume, but the protagonist's emotions are a bit slow, but his IQ is pretty good. I hope there can be more Chinese-style themes.

Not bad, author, I rarely see this kind of subject matter

So far it's good, very good, I like it very much

Four stars first. When the heroine comes back soon, I'll give it five stars [pinch]

It's great. Will Xie come to Mo's world in the third copy?

It's super pretty, whoever sees it will know

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It looks quite scary at night, but it's okay

It's pretty good, I just love it now

I give it five stars. The author will definitely write it well until the end. I beg you.

Not bad, it can be seen that the author has a good foundation

It's very good. I don't like to see this kind of weirdness. It's so boring to go through the level without thinking and to be invincible.

It's quite interesting, but the introduction seems to be just this one story. I'm still looking forward to what happens next.

Needless to say, the writing style doesn't sound like a newcomer at all, and the plot is a bit cliché, but I have the desire to read it, which can be regarded as a side reflection of the author's writing skills. Needless to say, it's top quality, edible, and slightly poisonous. After one and a half rolls, it didn't look good and was a bit watery, so I gave it up.

It's great. This is the best weird novel I've read in a while!

The content of the plot is very good👌. I hope the author will continue to keep it up and don't waste it after writing it. Big cheers for the author [awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

The writing is quite good. The protagonist's IQ is currently online. The heroine is not stupid now. Her IQ is online. As far as IQ is online, it deserves a five-star rating. I've read the third volume, and there's no place for wisdom. Why are so few people reading such a good book?

Isn't the author a single female protagonist? What's going on with this school beauty? Is it foreshadowing? It looks ok so far, looking forward to the follow-up.

Yossi, this writing is amazing,