HP: Dear Godfather, Welcome Home

It was very well written. I literally cried the whole time, crying for Celia, crying for Severus, and crying for Reha. Dear Celia, I cry for the fact that you have found a family and for your own happiness. Dear Severus, I cry for your happiness that you have a family and people who love you. Dear Reha, I cry for your loyalty, that you loved Celia so much, that you were happy that she could live one more day, that you were happy that she was happy, that you were sad that she didn't need you. I hope that in another world, Celia, her godfather Severus, and her elf Reha can be happy forever!

Ahhhhhh! Super pretty! What made me see a new article that could never be new again? The subject matter is new, the content is interesting, and the writing is excellent. Although it is slow to develop, the description is super delicate. The heroine is the goddaughter of Severus Snape. Her parents have been eaten by Voldemort or Death Eaters and Avatar since she was a child. Teleported to the orphanage by a portkey or something. After surviving for three years, he was found by his godfather Snape. Because the heroine's parents once helped Snape and even concluded a kinship contract. (Not sure if this is the name) So at the beginning, Snape just regarded the heroine as a responsibility. Then Snape gradually realized that the heroine should be a family member to him, and the content was warm. And the male protagonist is not the usual Harry, Draco, Cedric, Ron, etc. The original male protagonist and the female protagonist have been in love for a long time. (?) Or maybe it was love at first sight, and then love grew over time. Really, their relationship is like a trickle. It just... Feels like a secret love. Anyway, super pretty! ! ! Big cheers for the author! ! ! I read another chapter and really cried to death. The heroine went to the orphanage not because of the door key, but because of the heroine's mother's Apparition. Really, what kind of power can allow a person to Apparate someone with only one arm, forever breaking the defense of maternal love. One more thing, I'm really curious about how the heroine became blind. —————————————— Now I know.

It's a great HP fanfic, with original male and female protagonists, a lot of knives, but it also has funny plots, and it makes me laugh out loud every now and then. I've read half of it. It's more about daily life, including family, love and friendship. I can see the OOC, but I can still accept it. This kind of teaching is so attractive. She is a very tough and gentle heroine, with a good personality and everything. I didn't pay attention to it in the introduction. The heroine is a mermaid, 1/4 mixed race, she can be regarded as a golden finger. She is smart and powerful, with silver-blue hair and blue eyes. Although she is blind, I heard that her eyesight will be restored in the future. I look forward to it. This book does not follow the main protagonists of the original work. It is relatively brief, not much contact, and not very descriptive. Instead, Draco and the heroine have a good relationship. They are siblings. The heroine is three years older than them, and the hero is three years older than the heroine. The emotional drama is okay and worth reading. The setting and writing style are all very good, and I feel that my mood becomes very peaceful when I read it. However, there are some concepts in the article that are a bit jarring. The first point is that the heroine's ideal wish is to be able to focus on the family, not to mention being a housewife. Personal ideals are understandable. The more than 200 chapters are really not acted at all. Life is complete only after giving birth to children. Isn't it true that the author uses the heroine to express his own thoughts? It really makes everyone who watches it feel unhappy. There is also the sibling relationship line between the heroine and Draco. It originally looked very warm, but it turned out that it had to be shown at the wedding of the hero and heroine. Draco told the hero that he had a romantic relationship with the heroine. Although he said that it was gone later, he still frowned when he saw it. The sibling relationship was not enough and he had to mix it with this [face covering]. It was a big deduction. Moreover, the OOC in Sri Lanka's teaching in the later period is a bit serious, so I thought I'd finish reading it and read on. The ending is pretty good, although people still die, Dumbledore and Hedwig, but most people have a happy ending.

It's very beautiful, and the family-oriented hp is my favorite category. The author did not put too much emphasis on Harry's story, but continued it in another line. I like Sif very much, and the author's writing is also very delicate. Sif changes little by little under Celia's warmth, and the transformation process is not rigid. Richie in the original work is a very complex character, like the water of the Black Lake, which is silent and biting, yet gestating life. The tragic childhood, the tradition of Slytherin, and Dundodo's bias made Sif even more hungry for power and went towards Voldemort, so much so that he pushed Lily away with the word "Mudblood" and lived in regret forever. In another parallel universe, Sif has a daughter, a home, and new hope. She is really happy for him. Spider End Alley is no longer cold and filled with painful memories, and there will be people there waiting for Sif to return home. The descriptions of family affection in it are very touching, including Poppy and Mag's mother. Compared to Dumbledore, Professor McGonagall is more like a suitable principal, fair and tolerant. Deng Duoduo is too partial, maybe because of the current situation and needs support from others. I admit that Deng Duoduo is great, but of course I still don't like him. He is a very powerful schemer.

This is a salvation article, an article that brings the Sect back to the world from the abyss. Perhaps the characters in it are inconsistent with the original work, especially Professor Snape. From the beginning, he had low self-esteem, despair and helplessness, and buried himself with a harsh and cold appearance. Later, he began to learn to love himself, love others, and try to express himself. The author's writing style is very delicate, and the character creation is very rigorous. I think it is an extension of the original work. Whether it is Professor McGonagall, Mrs. Pomfrey, or even Professor Flitwick, their characters have been deeply explored based on the original work, plus some humorous storylines. It is wonderful! ! !

Congratulations on opening Golden Legend To be honest, it feels uncomfortable not to watch it for a day The heroine's character design is perfect, and the male protagonist is really my ideal type, gentle, partial, and I have a feeling of first love for you tomorrow, ah ah ah ah, I'm going crazy for help, I need to think, or I'm still a love brain [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [full]

It's so beautiful. This is the second HP novel that I've seen that's so beautiful. I really love the family relationship with Sijiao! Si Jiao and Celia are each other's salvation!

I used to be afraid to read fanfics about Sri Lanka (well, now CP still can't accept it). His love for Lily is too complicated, and in my eyes no one can replace it. This cb book is really good, the characters are all growing up, many difficult situations have good endings, and everyone is moving on. And the author's writing style is really good! I really like a lot of the descriptions! The emotional changes are also very delicate, and all the holes dug have been filled! The ending is also very warm, not the kind of inexplicable ending! This is the first HP book I have read in one sitting. I also like the extras. The author really loves every character (Little Angel Ruiha [crying] [crying] [crying]), and the little lovers are very sweet! But the knife comes out from time to time, and I keep crying😭😭😭 All in all, I really like this book, and it can definitely be ranked in the top three among my HP fans! (Personal preference) Everyone can rest assured about the ending. The children who watch late have food to eat and don't have to wait for updates. Hahaha (This is my first time writing a book review. The vocabulary in my brain filled with splendens is amazing. Don't dislike it [crying])

Rouse is good at describing www. He writes with great feeling. He describes the environment and the characters very well! After reading a few chapters, I couldn't help but come and comment (Shocked, am I the first to comment? Such a good article, maybe it was just published)

It's really, really good. It's one of the best-written novels I've seen in HP fan fiction. The author's description of emotions is really delicate, and the writing style is really good, and the family line is really good. It can be said that it is a redemption of religion, but it is better to say that it is the mutual redemption of two people. I just cried when I read the novel, and then I laughed because of some small interactions that were just funny, and I jumped like crazy. I am also very grateful to the author for giving Xiaolong a good growth, because according to the original work, Xiaolong has always been good at heart, but fate and identity led him to that path. The portrayal of the heroine is also very good, which makes people feel that she is flesh and blood. All I can say is that I really won't lose money by investing! ! ! ! ! ! ! Everyone, come and see me! ! ! ! !

It's really good to read. I hope the author will work harder and update it. I really love this book (●°u°●) "

In fact, it is 3.5. I am personally not used to the writing style of this book, which is more Chinese-style and childish (← neutral meaning, stack armor first). I prefer the style of the original book, and the wording will be based on what I am used to in the wizarding world. This book contains too many new words and emojis, so I can't put them into words properly. The interaction between Teacher Si and Mag was unexpectedly joyful, and Teacher Si was even a little rude, but logically speaking, Mag was his teacher, so he would not be so disrespectful to each other. I feel quite a lot about ooc, especially Professor McGonagall. I really didn't expect it to be her, because she has always been fair and just, and cares about students. As long as she holds on to these two distinct points, it is very easy to shape. This is the first ooc that I feel so obvious about her. Oc, the author has made unique innovations in these beautiful qualities. In cat form, she is simply a "pure" cat, she even has cat strips (not to mention where the cat strips come from), and she is unexpectedly lively in her thinking (she is suspected of being cute, which makes her very funny every time I watch it)

It's quite interesting. The setting of the heroine is very novel. She has a talent and identity, and with hard work, she is very strong and can change some results at critical moments. The heroine basically does not participate in the main plot of the original work, but because her fate is partly entangled with the main plot, she keeps improving her strength in order to save those around her and avenge her parents. The full text is a bit like the daily life and growth history of the heroine and the Sri Lankan religion. There are also many descriptions of family, friendship and love. The proportion of the male protagonist and the protagonist group is not very important (the Bisi religion). The writing is a mixture of light-hearted humor and realistic and heavy language. The overall writing style is good, with foreshadowing and recycling. Some bugs and "outrageous" OOC are not too obtrusive in the funny description. However, some settings seem a bit overkill, as if they have gone in a big circle and only done one thing. Also, the heroine's ability is very Schrödinger-like, she is obviously very strong but very weak, a bit like high attack, low defense and slow blood regeneration [face covering] In addition, in many unexpected places, you can see that the author has carefully checked the information and can learn English (bushi) [laughing]

This book is full of details. The author is really rigorous. There are detailed rationalizations about height, accent, and language, and there are also explanations for private spells. The writing is very delicate and gives people a very warm feeling. Moreover, the author will mark some places in the text in English, which makes it feel like you can also learn English. Really, in the teaching assistant's volume, everyone is obviously good, and everything has a good arrangement and outcome, but I cried in almost every picture. The author is really good at arousing people's emotions. Snape's writing was very funny when he woke up. I couldn't stop laughing at the beginning and suddenly started crying for no reason. It really felt like I was moved after a loss. Don't use the family knife to kill me! Finally, I would like to say the author, I love you [love]

Ahhhhhh! Super pretty! But she is beautiful and kind, the fish falls before the goose, the flowers are shy when the moon is closed, the country is beautiful, the country is beautiful and fragrant, and the clever author is great ~ can you Update soon~(*๓´╰╯`๓)♡ (Please please🙏🏻) I love you😘❤️🧡💛💚💙💜💕💞💓💗💖💝 Love this book! It is simply the Bai Yueguang in my HP article! O(*≧▽≦)ツ ~ ┴┴(.ˇε ˇ.)💖

I really like it, watching Celia grow from fragile to strong, from fearful to cheerful, from 7 years old to 40 years old, from child to mother. We have witnessed half of her life, and the story of the future is still being written.

The psychological descriptions of all the characters are very delicate, and everyone is very gentle. The heroine's feelings for Si Jiao are the resurgence after being redeemed, lifting her up to experience the world. Si Jiao's feelings for the heroine are the turbulent waves supported by kinship. Flying at the highest point, watching her fly to the blue sky, but they have already integrated into each other's flesh and blood. No matter what, they can't stop their belief in running towards each other. It's such a tearful father-daughter relationship [crying] [crying] They all rely on each other.

Ah ah ah, come on ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧, it's rare to see the family-oriented Severus and the original male protagonist, they are really super super super good-looking

First of all, I personally prefer Gryffindor... I mean... This one is really great! ! ! Everyone's spirits are normal and in line with their character, and there is no unreasonable love or disparagement... It's so touching! But remember to read the extra chapter carefully, haha, there is a knife, haha ​​(makes a sharp explosion sound)

It's good-looking. The relationship between the heroine and Sri Lankan teacher makes me feel warm. The emotional scenes are also very natural. In short, Invincible is very good-looking. The only shortcoming is that it is serialized, so the author needs to update it more.

Very healing, the author's writing is superb! The family relationship between Severus and Celia is so touching and touching. I don't know how to describe that feeling. It's so warm that it actually makes me wet (? A very strange description). The arrival of Celia gave Severus hope of life. He denied himself over and over again, but Celia affirmed him over and over again, telling him what a good person he was and not letting him give up on himself [crying] Severus is my favorite character, and I am really happy to see him be happy! ! "He never failed to promise her anything. For her, he will survive at all costs. Even if the body is bruised and bruised, even if it is broken into pieces, even if the body and soul are no longer complete. He also wants to live for her. He used all his strength to overcome the cold winter, waded through the steep streams full of ice floes in early spring, and passed through the noisy chirping of summer cicadas, and finally returned to her side when the sky was bright. "

There are still quite few family stories about Professor Snape, but the content is indeed very exciting, with mutual redemption and change, delicate love, sincere friendship, interesting and humorous professors. The only imperfection is that the early Professor Snape is not consistent with the original work, and the character is a little off, but the overall content is quite good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and update it.

This is really the best fanfic I have read recently. The characters are not OOC and they fit the original work very well. The author's writing is very good. The novel is interesting and the plot development is very reasonable. I am very satisfied with the ending.

I have to say that this book's character creation is particularly three-dimensional. For example, for Old Bee, what we see is a thoughtful and strategic old man, rather than the loving old man who paved the way for him in the eyes of Harry in the original book. And look at this description: "His life is like a hot dusk, passing by the brilliance, and he can only embrace the coming darkness." Www If my composition can reach 37, I will read this book QWQ

Hehehe~ looks good! Hehehe~ It's so beautiful! Hey hey hey! So pretty! Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

The writing is great, English always invades my brain in a despicable way (please update it quickly, ahhhhhhhhhhhh (twisted crawling + screaming))

It's really, really well written! Of course it doesn't change the fact that the papers I use to wipe my tears and snot are all piled up on my bedside table. How to say it? In fact, it is healing, but everyone should know the kind of feeling that you are not worthy of being loved, and then suddenly someone comes out and firmly chooses you and repeatedly tells you that you are a good and worthy person. It is this feeling, happy and sad at the same time, and you can't help but drop the little pearl! I really love Severus very much. He is obviously the most deserving person.

It's a very warm article. I really like the emojis in it. The author is so cute (/ω＼) and shy, and this article is about family affection to warm Si Jiao's heart. The writing style is brisk and the length is relatively short, which is very suitable for daily relaxation reading! This is a really good fanfic! [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Blowing Kisses]

Don't mention it, it's really super good-looking. The theme is not the same as following the trio of saviors. Instead, it adds new mermaid elements to the original world view. Any logical loopholes throughout the story have been filled in. The emotional descriptions and character details are all superb, and! ! It's HE! ! ! The perfect ending that is logical and not perfunctory made me burst into tears. Author, you deserve to enjoy the Ancestral Temple💗💗💗

It is a really delicate book. I was really touched by the family relationship between Celia and Professor Snape. I have cried many times while reading it. It is really easy to make people feel sour in their noses. Then the relationship with the male protagonist is very warm and flowing, very logical. I really like the female protagonist. I highly recommend it.