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Average, lots of glaring errors

Let me give you a piece of advice, it's best to find a way to create a plot to make modern daily life as round as possible and concentrate on writing history, or just stop updating it. I have seen two books similar to yours before, with live broadcast history and literature mixed with a lot of modern daily life. One was criticized as a dog, and the other was full of scolding comments. Those who are interested in history are those who are interested in history. If you mix daily life with live broadcast, history is almost like writing a catalog. If you are not happy watching daily life, you will not be happy watching live broadcast either. Not human inside or outside

Jump to see the Ming God of War. Once you see that the author has been whitewashing the Demon Queen Sun and treating the TV series as official history for several chapters, you will know what level the author is. It does not require how good the writer is. At the very least, he should read more historical materials before writing. Instead of treating the TV series as history, which is really confusing, and just abandon the article.

There are too many mistakes. Learn more about Wei Qing and Huo Qubing. Li Guang is good but not as good as Wei Huo. Bad review.

A lot of history has been read too lightly, or in other words, too many marketing posts have been read.

I'll give you two stars. Just for the sake of the First Emperor's sake, he said at the beginning that women in the Song Dynasty were miserable, but then there was no more, and then it was all nonsense. How can there be so much love in history?

Why do all the historical figures in your book speak in the third person?

Very speechless! Check the information and write!

Very dry, and lots and lots of mistakes!

My personal point of view is so strong that the plot in the TV series was actually mentioned and considered to be real history. The score is still 8.1. Among all the historical articles I have read, this is the most disgusting one.

Generally. Writing historical content lacks interest. When I was writing a historical cp, I felt like the story between them was not told clearly and it ended. The personalities of historical figures don't feel very fitting. There are too many daily content about the protagonist, I don't like to read it.

No wonder the score is low, there is a live broadcast, pig trotters, her mother and best friends keep appearing, and people who watch it are disgusted

This book is all about gender opposition, it's all told in the third person, and there are many obvious historical errors.

Lack of interest, poor reading experience, no sense of immersion, lack of understanding of official history in the historical part, a bit meaningless, and loose plot to the point where there is basically no plot. Or ask the author to write it directly as a brainless piece of fun, and then continue with the serious nonsense after marking it! Either ask the author to overhaul your outline immediately, consult a large number of official historical materials, improve your command of writing, and then overhaul the entire text and start over.

Not bad! !

This book is dry

I originally thought it was rare to find a historical inventory with such a novel topic, but I was completely wrong. Disappointed😔

A little history and the First Emperor

The low rating is justified,,,

I hope to write about the title of Bodyguard and Zhenhun

I feel like I said a lot. No important point was mentioned. Many things are not made clear. Vaguely. Everything said is superficial and passed off in one stroke.

What about the history and documents of boxing? If you want to take stock of the literature, you would be useless if you didn't take stock of the historical documents.

There are some errors that don't quite suit my taste

You don't even know who Zhang Jun was, who killed Yue Fei. What kind of book are you writing? This Zhang Jun is not that Zhang Jun, and the one who harmed Yue Fei was not Zhang Jun, one of the four famous generals of ZTE. If you are a noob in history, please stop writing books to harm others.

I really don't understand why Zhang 106 has such a good temper towards them.

The writing is too superficial and contains many errors.

Well enough. . .

It's too subjective. If I had checked more, I wouldn't have just followed my own example.

Let's warm up with two chapters first, and then rush through half a chapter.

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