Hpan Ordinary Secret Love

It's really well written, the male protagonist is James, and he's an unpopular character but he's a masterpiece. To be honest, HP's CP is really difficult to dismantle, and some of the original heroine stories are really hard to read. Snape's dislike of Lily will lose the core of the character in the original work. Too many people have written Sirius the same thing a thousand times, Malfoy has been imagined by too many people, and Voldemort really can't bear to look at it in the later period. I would rather see a male protagonist with less description in the original novel. James' character is really likable, and his shortcomings are not ignored like other James novels. This article can make all the characters not flat, which is really rare. It reminds me of the Raiders in the Orange Light game, but this is most likely because he is too healing.

The author's writing style is really great, and James' character fits the character very well. Most importantly, it really fits the setting of a secret love! Sonia's Secret Love is really great, a very, very, very good story that combines plot and emotion! [The person I like is a pushy person. He is kind, passionate, just, reckless, and maybe biased, but this is the person I admire. I like best the moment when I stand on the edge of the crowd and watch people surround him and throw him up in the middle.] ["No, he steals the limelight every moment." Sonia said with a smile, but her eyes were fixed in his direction, "He is good at this."] [James, I am destined for disaster in my life. [Ah, I really like him, really. [The boy I like, he has magic power. Of course, he is a wizard, and his magic power is unmistakable. I mean, he has the kind of magic power that can make people happy together. [I like James Potter, I will always like him. ——Sonia

What a treasure! It's rare to see James x the original girl's article, there is a feeling of youthfulness, ignorance, and ambiguity and sweetness... James, you boy, hit the ball hard and hit the ball hard! ! When I saw Nia last night, who is of mixed Chinese and English descent but didn't particularly emphasize the Chinese elements, I really, really liked it! Then the Stranger Things party discovered the name Hope—Two Chefs went wild with ecstasy! ! Really delicious, so perfect that I ate 300 bowls of it in a row🥹🥹It's so delicious that I love to eat it in big mouthfuls🥹🥹🥹

Two words: beautiful! I was attracted to it at the beginning by the male protagonist (oh my god, I have never seen the male protagonist be James Potter! And he doesn't hate Lily). After reading it, I felt very moved. The author's writing style is very good, and he really wrote about the feeling of secret love... Sour and sweet at the same time. And the heroine is also very powerful (✪▽✪), sassy, ​​smart, and thoughtful. It must be well received! ! ! This book has been included in my reading list. Come on (ง ˙o˙)ว[][][]

In fact, I think when I see this, I always feel that the heroine and James are in love with each other, and they are interested in concubine. On Tomato, books like this (themed on secret love) are really rare. But it's really pretty. It's really a pity that I didn't have a secret love in my youth. I especially like watching this kind of thing recently. HP secret love book. But I found two copies on Tomato. There is also a book called "HP Plum Rain" in which the heroine is the sister of Cedric the Hufflepuff. The male protagonists are the Weasley twins. It should be sandwich cookies. It's just that the author is slow to update. But the secret love written by the author is really touching. Those who are interested can go search it out.

I read them all in one day. What a great secret love story. The little mentality of Nia's secret love is well described [Like][Like]

Real! Of! Roar! Roar! Look! The author describes the direct relationship between Nia and James very delicately. It's the kind of sweetness that makes the corners of the mouth curl up unconsciously when you look at it. It can be seen that the feeling between them is gradually increasing. From the beginning, Nia has a crush on James, to James starting to be interested in Nia, to slowly liking it, to confessing, step by step, it really makes the corners of my mouth fly to the sky. It's so sweet. The second point is reasoning! This is really a blast! Nia's political acumen comes from the influence of her family. Here are two more sweet spots! When do I think James started to like Nia? ! Have you guessed what I want to say? Everyone! It's a secret room incident! James saw another side of Nia there, and he should have been attracted to her at that time, kid. The second sweet spot is, have you discovered it? No matter what Nia says, James will listen carefully and respond! Help, I really like this kind of man! Give me one, Merlin! Going back to what I said about politics and reasoning, the charm of the character Nia itself! She is calm, protective, but emotionally stable! (This point is very important to me! Because I am emotionally unstable!) She is very capable and has a big picture view. She can deduce the general plot based on only some details. I have to say that if Harry had her, he would kill Voldemort alone (a bit exaggerated, sorry). Well, that's all for today. In short, it is worth recommending! Good friends, after the last comment, I began to look forward to the next one more and more, but not only for the sweet love between Nia and James, I began to wonder how the author would describe the pitfalls of Nia traveling through the black hole. Really, so curious, and beautiful. Now my evaluation of this book is not only good-looking, but among so many HP fans I have read, it is in the top three! I'm not kidding. An ordinary secret love, ah, the secret love is ordinary, but whether it is deducing Voldemort's Horcrux or the much older two-dimensional Nia that will be described next, it all seems not ordinary.

It's really super, super, super, super beautiful! The heroine's IQ online is really very smart, and the theoretical analysis is really unexpected and reasonable, and the description of every little detail of the heroine's crush on James is really mind-numbing. I have never had a crush on anyone, but I really feel like this is what a crush on someone else is like! ! [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]That's why when listening to books, I only read them offline. It's really not used to it. [Crying][Crying][Crying] I really didn't expect that there would be such a good-looking one. I really found a treasure. Now that I've watched it, I'm an old fan [Adored][Admired] Not enough, really not enough. When will the author release an update? I can't stand it anymore! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! It's really amazing👍[love][love]

It's particularly beautiful. The secret love is written very delicately and the emotional line is really beautiful. . . Watching Peter Pan made people's hearts sour. Jamie's assurance also made people's hearts tremble with sweetness. Sonia's plot setting was also very interesting. Every Sonia will fall in love with Jamie. The plot is also very attractive. . . I was shocked and loved by Sonia's intelligence and James was just as I imagined. . . I have been obsessed with it since I first saw it. This is the third time I plan to watch it again. . . No matter how many times I changed my account, I still remembered this divine article. In this cold pit, I had no choice but to persevere and read this book again and again. . . . Author, I beg you, please come back. . . . Can I give you a reward when you come back? I want to watch the rest of the plot. I feel like I am playing a big game. The setting is very interesting. I beg you, author, please come back, I beg you.

So beautiful! It's a rare James text! Great write up!

I know this won't be my last hp, nor my first, but its place will never be replaced. I already liked Sonia very much before I had a clear idea of ​​the so-called charm of the character. I replayed it every time - eight times so far! ——, There is a feeling of heart-filling satisfaction: Oh, it turns out that their lives can be like this, it turns out that this kind of thing can be solved in this way (I really wrote a lot about Sonia, I particularly like her way of dealing with things), it turns out that they are such people outside the original work, and their youth is not just a few words written by Rowling, but real, passionate, unparalleled, and can never be forgotten. Every person in the book is absolutely independent and completely real. This book is the one that really inspired me to fall in love with JP. Before this, all the James I saw had two sides, either a pure fool or a pure seer. Only in this book, James really gave me the feeling of, ah, this person is so interesting, I really want to get to know him. Brave, smart, has his own petty and evil intentions, has no reservations about his friends, is domineering (but maybe I have a filter like Nia, I think this kind of publicity is very cute and cute), and has another side that is difficult to get close to people I hate. What about pranks? Again, maybe I am always tolerant because I like James. Most of the shortcomings can be beautified by me into advantages or reasons for me to like him haha. But who says it can't be done? Those who like Snape can accept his oily head and oily nose as a Death Eater (I am not a character critic, this is the original content). What's wrong with me just doting on James... Besides, many of James' strengths are accompanied by shortcomings. Besides, I particularly like Mary. As a bystander, she sometimes seems a little thoughtless, but who can guarantee that she can think calmly like Nia when she is in this kind of situation? So Nia's personality charm is too strong. And it's really classy to like the Beatles, and it's also very cute to think about using Nia's photos to blackmail JP. The same goes for Lily. I really liked the story about about 20 chapters ago when James in the first grade tried to flick something to Lily but ended up in Nia's hand because Lily "couldn't bear to disturb others for her own sake." In the previous chapters, Lily privately asked Nia if she wanted her to accompany her to find Professor McGonagall. Little Angel Lily...🥺🥺I won't say much about Remus, but I really think this image is the best captured among all the HP fans I've seen on Tomato. The most important one, Sirius. Sirius's image is actually the one that HP has the hardest to grasp. I think he is not a complete Gryffindor, but he is not a typical Slytherin either. He grew up in an environment like the Black family. Even if he hates the Black family, he always has some of the characteristics of 'Black', even if it is a small part. This makes this person very complicated, and it is easy to deviate from his core charm when writing about him. It is this complexity and diversity that is the reason why I like him. And the ordinary secret love perfectly explains his person. He couldn't hate James just because he was with Nia. The word "hate" was even too strong. He couldn't even feel a little bit dissatisfied with James because he had experienced the beauty of James, so he knew that James was worth it. But he can't just calmly accept that the girl he likes is with his best brother. No one can be relieved in this situation, especially when these two people are very good. I can't let go. How can I talk about Sirius himself? This unique sourness of Sirius was so delicious. He was confident and perceptive, so he couldn't even say those four words, three words in English, that represented the courage of adolescent boys and girls when he noticed the difference between Nia and James. I just hate that this is not 1v2, but this is real. In short, everyone in Ordinary Secret Love deserves a good ending. I have never read a comprehensive series before, but this one is particularly good! And I personally think this is the most in-depth and thoughtful book on magic among the Tomato HP fanfics. It can look at the relationship between magic and wizards and Muggles from an angle I had never imagined. Thank you for starting a business and you will die. Will I be able to see another update in my lifetime? 🥺❤️❤️ It's like reading a diary of girlhood, secret love is sour.

It's so good-looking, so good-looking, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, it really expresses all the expressions of secret love in my heart. I have never seen an HP that suits me so well. I bet on my heart ~ Jamie and Nia are really super cute! The details are touching. Cupid's sword not only hit them, but also hit my heart. They tested each other, pulled to the extreme, a young, reckless, clumsy and cute secret love. Jamie is really lively and sunny, and also bold, with a blatant preference. I really fell in love with Liao when I put it in, and I almost broke the window paper. [Angry]

This secret love story is so well written! ? I even wonder if you, the author, have a secret crush. It's so beautiful! ! ! If I don't give the author a five-star rating, I would be sorry for the author's writing style⊙∀⊙! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The emotional line is very natural. Some fanfics describe falling in love out of nowhere. Some fanfics describe love at first sight and only describe the appearance of the heroine, making it seem like she was attracted by sex. There is no special plot to deepen their relationship. The feelings in this article are very natural, and they will not fall in love suddenly and inexplicably. It has been well received. Another thing I want to praise is the creation of the heroine. The most common type of heroine in fan fiction is the camera-type heroine. Her personality is only used as a cover to bring the audience into falling in love with the original character. The heroine in this article not only has her own personality, but her personality can also promote the development of the plot. Everything the heroine does is related to her personality. In some stories, the heroine is only allowed to do things that are not in line with the character just for the development of the plot. I highly recommend this article. There is not only a love line in this book, but also some reasoning lines. It is not as boring as a simple love line. I can only say that it is really very interesting. It is really a fine book.

Thai pants are hot! ! ! ! This book is truly a treasure! Although it is about a secret love, it is not physically or emotionally abusive as imagined, but rather sweet and poignant. The author's writing style is very good, and Nia's psychological description is very real, making people feel like they are immersed in the scene. Not only is Nia's character well developed, so are the others... All in all, this book is great! ! ! I hope the author will keep updating!

I like this kind of delicate writing, I hope this is HE [Blowing Kiss]

This is not my first HP fanfic, but it is already an unshakable top one in my heart. I came here for JP at first, but then I was completely attracted to Sonia. Sonia has also become my favorite original heroine. I am grateful to the author for creating her. She is brave, decisive, frank and humorous, kind but not brainless, and has her own temper and temper. The imperfect heroine perfectly constitutes a real Sonia Ramirez, which makes me feel that she is a real person with flesh and blood. She sheds tears, and I shed tears. She is happy, and I am also happy, as if I am really experiencing it with her in the book. Some people say that you like a person because he has something you lack. I think it is right. I envy Nia very much. I envy her unrestrained character and her happy and adventurous campus life. Just like Penny said in the article, she lives a happy life. I envy her family, friends and lovers who always support and trust her. I also felt sorry for her sourness when she had a secret love, her collapse when she saw her lover and friends die when she traveled through time and space, and her confusion when she was trying to figure out how to deal with Voldemort. I believe she will defeat the darkness in the end because she has the courage to move forward, because she has everyone behind her who will always support her, and because life is resilient. What makes me most regretful is that the author failed to give Nia an ending. I can feel that the author loves her Nia very much, because her portrayal is so profound and she appears so vivid under the description of love. However, it is also because of this reason that I cannot continue the story, which makes me feel sad. The other characters in the book, James, Sirius, Remus, Lily, etc., Can be found in fan fiction on many platforms, and they also have different endings, but Nia is unique and there will never be another one. She was so brave and tenacious, but she didn't get a happy ending for her in the end. I want to see the ending where everything ends and everyone lives well, and I want to see her get her wish and have a happy ending with her Jamie. I also believe that she will be happy, but she will be happy in a place that I can't see, because she deserves it. Although it is very regrettable, I am still very grateful to the author for creating this novel. It has spent a wonderful time with me. Every time I encounter troubles, I will click in and read it. When I see everyone in the book fighting and living their daily lives, I will feel very happy. Happiness can be passed on. I have read it several times now. I have read it many times when I was not logged in. Now I have logged in to rate and write reviews. I also want to let the author know that I really like an ordinary secret love, Nia, and everyone in the book (I don't know if I can see it). I will continue to read it in the future, so that their story will continue forever and never say goodbye. In the end, no matter what, I still wish the teacher three times a happy day! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Madam is so beautiful. It's the first time I read such a beautiful article about HP. It broke my impression of James Potter. The heroine is very cute and has a good personality. She is self-reliant and self-reliant. I look forward to continued updates.

The heroine's character is great, frank, sober, and a little bit funny; the family atmosphere is also very good, the relationships between the characters are reasonable and normal, and the story's logic is also smooth. The previous description of secret love is very detailed [Like. Jpg]; the story is not limited to the original plot. I personally feel that there are very few OOC places, almost none, haha. In short, it is reasonable. The running-in of the young couple in the later stage was also great, it was quite sweet! The contradictions and conflicts are all within a reasonable range and nothing mechanical. I like it very much! ! ! It was the first time I saw such a great HP secret love article. It was an article about My Generation and James Potter CP (I don't usually read it). I clicked on it and was fascinated by the author's writing. The more I read, the more I liked it😘! Come on, author! Be sure to keep updating to the end! Ps. The other line in the article is very reasonable! Super awesome! The pairing with Sirius is also great! Excited. Jpg

There are exciting parts, this is enough. I was too obsessed before, focusing on the happy ending, and didn't know what I wanted at all ⋅⋅⋅⋅⋅⋅ I feel delicate about myself, and maybe it's quite academic (?⋅⋅⋅Attention!!‼️Breaking reminder‼️There is a slight lack of perception. Seeing them together... It seems that many people like the heroine, and it is good to have a happy family.

The heroine's design feels very rich. Sonia is the only one chosen among multiple worlds. She has more courage to face her true feelings than herself in other worlds, so she can be with James, so we can see her story. I feel heartbroken when I see Sonia in other worlds in the extra. She will fall in love with James in all worlds without exception, but she is the only one who knows about this huge secret love that ends miserably. It's a really great story. James is also a relatively unpopular male protagonist among the many fanfics I have read, but it does not prevent the author from perfecting the boy who is so passionate that he melts like a hazelnut in winter. I really like this feeling. Every character should not be like other worlds to usher in a given life without reaping the good things. Sonia in this world did it, and tried her best to save the people around her with her courage and ability. The only shortcoming of this novel is that it has been discontinued. Damn it. Believe it or not, the author is trying to convince you with money, imprisoning your little brain so that it can continue to write the next story. Obviously their story is not over yet, and the foreshadowing of the prophecy of the Red Wedding has not been completed. Obviously I believe that these determined them can break the theory of fate. What I look forward to is that they will appear vividly on the paper and bring us a future beyond the original work itself. Author, do you know that your writing style is very good? After writing it, my mind was filled with this novel for several days. It also contains so many plots, knowledge, and perfect plot settings. I really like it. The book I gave you is one of my white moonlights, but please don't make it happen in my lifetime. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

It's super good-looking, Sonia and James really enjoy it. Sonia is completely my ideal heroine, sober and smart, the plot is coherent, and the writing is superb! Ahhhhhhhhh, it looks good. It really feels like a combination of daily life and adventure life. It's super good-looking! ! !

I stayed up all night to finish reading this book. The author continued to update it, and the ending must be he. When I first read it, I thought it was a story about a little girl's crush. Later, I felt that the heroine is not an ordinary person. She has an online IQ, a great mind, and is very good at perceiving people's hearts. It is rare for HP fans to write about the character James. Usually he is paired with Lily. What do I think about Lily? To put it bluntly, it is not suitable for James, who is very black and white and emotional (this can only represent my own point of view, don't criticize me). However, this heroine handles things calmly and is so smart. I give this book a five-star rating and say the last important thing three times. It must be he. Thank you! ! !

First of all, I want to say that the writing of this article is really delicate, real and reasonable, the characters are full and vivid, and the emotional description is also very accurate (it is reasonable to suspect that the psychological state of secret love is the author's real experience) 👉👈 Secondly, there are very few HP texts. They are either group darlings or the male protagonist is pursuing a career (ahhhhh, I have no intention of reading this kind of text), or they are single-group CPs of some popular characters. This article is eye-catching for me from all angles. I have a crush on James and so on. It is too eye-catching (face covering) If anything else, the author's own imagination is very strong, which can be seen in some of the statement of opinions in the article, but the plot development is also logical and reasonable. The fact that Nia can dream of the future is particularly magical. Anyway, it just poked me hard💦🌹 Finally, many of the articles in Tomato give me a feeling of boredom after reading half of them. Is this perhaps the general trend of Internet articles? But the level of this article makes me feel that I have returned to a normal state of mind. It is a great book. My evaluation is that it is of such quality that it can be published as a paper book👈👈👈So I strongly recommend this article, md. I can't stand it anymore. It's been a long time since I've seen such a good fanfic (wipe away tears) I wish the author will get better and better as he writes, more and more readers, higher and higher ratings, and a healthy and smooth life❤️❤️❤️

It's almost midnight. In fact, from my point of view, James did a lot of wrong things when he was a student. He was an arrogant and one-sided bully. He didn't change and become a hero of the Order of the Phoenix until he witnessed the cruelty of war around graduation. (This is also true). In addition, I think Zhan Li is a soul mate. If I don't tear them down, I will basically not read James' fanfic. But this one is different. The author is really good at writing. The sourness and psychology of secret love are so real. The young lovers are also very sweet, which is indescribable. I have read many fanfics over the years. This has always been a peak work in my heart. In fact, I think some of the characters are still OOC, at least James is OOC, but the author's writing style can really make people ignore these and read it again and again. When will updates resume?

Really well written! The writing is very delicate and true, and the description of the secret love in the early stage really hit me hard! The descriptions of those little actions and details of secret love really made me immerse myself in it! Ambiguity makes me scream in stages! After falling in love, it's so sweet that it bubbles up. I really love the author's writing style! Delicate yet realistic, the adaptation and promotion of the storyline based on the original work really attracted me. It really made me feel that this was a real story that happened to them. The background of the heroine Sonia is also very cool. Some of the added settings can be naturally integrated into the story. I am a little disappointed that it is not finished. I cannot read such a good-looking book in one go. But I am still looking forward to the following stories. I hope the author can update it soon! The final hope is that Jamie and Nia will live happily together forever and ever♾️ Forgot to say something! Currently my favorite HP fan! My top1 is dedicated to my little secret love😽😽😽 And I watched it for twelve hours! Why is my time record gone? It's true love! It's not just a review after the reading time is less than 30 minutes! Really recommend to everyone! It's really super pretty!

Generally speaking, it's okay. My personal feeling is that the heroine has a clear love mind, which is like a kind of inequality in a love relationship. When exploring Voldemort's identity, she doesn't care about the safety of her Muggle relatives. It gives me a feeling that although she is smart, she is very naive. The advantages of the heroine are also very clear. The emotions of the heroine written by the author are delicate enough. As long as things are not related to her own feelings, the logic is smooth and self-consistent. Moreover, the heroine's inner associations are like free flying birds, which is particularly comforting to watch. I feel like the heroine is an INTJ (just my personal opinion)

HpAn ordinary secret love Very nice! ! Cp James, the heroine is a Muggle-born wizard, her father is a boxer, and her grandfather has fought in the war and been a gangster (?) In short, the heroine has very strong martial arts skills, she is a Ravenclaw wearing Gryffindor skin! However, the heroine is indeed very "trouble-making". She will not offend others unless they offend her. She is stubborn, smart, tough, and has a great character! I like James. In the process of getting along with the heroine, the predator was gradually attracted to the heroine and has already dated James. The love is very sweet. Please Modo Modo for intimacy! Sirius also likes the heroine, hahahaha, but the puppy likes James better... Please stay warm, thank you. The author's writing is very good, and the plot is very compact. It revolves around the heroine's revelation of Myrtle's death to the exploration of Voldemort. There is a parallel world setting. She sacrifices herself in the original world and decides to help her in other worlds to save James and save the people she cherishes, but they all fail, except for the heroine of this world (she is special!) Not finished yet, waiting for updates! There are already 138 chapters. I enjoyed reading it. The author will update it soon! !

Author, don't stop updating, okay [blow a kiss]? This book is really beautiful! ! [Adoration] The key is that this is the first time I read a Harry Potter book in which the male protagonist is James! [Sending Hearts]! ! Don't stop updating! ! I beg you! ! [Cry][cry][almost cry] This is my favorite HP fanfic [love]. Thank you very much, please update.

Like it! ! ! ! So well written! The writing style is very natural! ! ! The heroine is secretly in love but she is not humble and makes people feel like a slightly sour candy. While the heroine has a crush on James, Sirius also sets his sights on the heroine again and again. An ordinary love relationship does not only refer to the heroine