Rebirth of the Crown Prince: Starting from Improper Licking of Dogs

It must be five stars, otherwise no one will see this comment. It's really disgusting. I took it from a passage by the amazing Muto. There is a proliferation of articles on the Internet, and the most uncomfortable thing is a type of "turtle man's articles" that pretend to be "realistic" but actually have no character. For the so-called pleasure and conflict, the author wantonly tramples on the protagonist's dignity, treats concessions as forbearance, humility as deep affection, and packages bottomless compromises as maturity and stability, which makes people feel uncomfortable. In this kind of story, the protagonist is always enduring, giving in, and paralyzing himself. When your lover is looked down upon, you endure it; when your dignity is trampled on, you endure it; when your bottom line is repeatedly tested, you still endure it. It seems that as long as you are "soft" and "cowardly" enough, you can get a happy ending. But real life is never achieved by kneeling, true affection is not achieved by licking, and true strength is not achieved by unprincipled concessions. Treating cowardice as affection and humility as kindness is essentially a dwarfing of personality. A good work should convey integrity, responsibility, and what to do and what not to do, rather than teaching people to abandon their spine and self-esteem for so-called interests or feelings. Readers read the article to see growth, passion, and perseverance, not to see how a person loses his bottom line step by step and lives a life that he most despises. A story without character is boring no matter how twists and turns it is; a protagonist without dignity is cheap no matter how "fulfilling" it is. The real pleasure is never to compromise, but to stand tall and live magnanimously.

To be honest, the writing style is very good, the emotional line is really good, and it is very interesting to read. Although it is not disgusting, it makes me want to burst into tears. It is not impossible to write about a woman chasing a man in the crematorium, just like Zhou Qingyu. I think she will end up like Yue. I think a lot of people will applaud. After all, the male protagonist has not seen a woman he really wants to marry until now. , Whether you want a girl chasing a boy in the crematorium, or if there are more female protagonists, there are more female protagonists. Don't keep dilly-dallying, be more quick, and keep dragging it on. It's already 200 chapters. With such a small level of cultivation, it's not like you can't write about cultivating immortals and ascending to another world. It's the same as urban writing. You will only drive readers away. The subject matter is so good. If the author really wants to write it, it will definitely take a long time. This novel is very similar to a novel I've read called Women's New Black. The author ran away before finishing the 3000th chapter. It was so tortured, like you were force-fed a mouthful of shit that made you want to vomit. I hope you can finish it. If you write some cool articles, more people will reward you. @

It's in line with my taste, but it's too slow to accept the heroine. It would be better if there was more meat. Hehehe, please update more.

It is a really underrated novel. The male protagonist is not as cowardly as the comment section, nor can he be considered a strategist, but he is very shrewd, and the choices he makes are the best solutions for normal people. Moreover, the male protagonist has a very elegant character, which is my favorite character. The foreshadowing is also just right. The author's writing style is also very good, and the setting is also good. The shortcoming is the problem of combat power (probably also the reason for the low rating). The male protagonist's combat power is too strong. It's almost 100 chapters and the first level has not yet been reached. Everything around him has to be kept under wraps by his sister and maid. The second is that the emotional drama is actually written in general. It can be seen that the author wants to write a step-by-step relationship, but it still feels a bit inexplicable and indescribable when reading it. To sum up, 8.5 People think this book should be fine.

Good review! ! Urgent update! ! ! Sima Yue felt that he could arrange a wave of training to make up for the hero's line of helping him. It's a pity that it doesn't matter anymore.

The writing is quite good, and it is considered a very comprehensive book in Tomato, which at least makes it less painful to read. Now that I have read half of it, I personally feel that the only flaw is that Sima Yue's previous life was not explained clearly. Sima Yue's positioning should not reach the heroine, but the author spent so much ink on writing about Sima Yue's transformation, and even made a patch to say that Sima Yue only liked the male protagonist from the beginning to the end, and also laid foreshadowing, and even met the male protagonist naked. Then Sima Yue will definitely be accepted later, otherwise it will be missed. I think the author has avoided so many minefields, so he should not make such a mistake. Since Sima Yue wants to take over, and Sima Yue disappeared after the hero's family was ruined in the previous life, I think it would be better to explain clearly. On the one hand, I read that the male protagonist survived for a long time after the destruction of the Hou Mansion in his previous life. At that time, the male protagonist loved Sima Yue deeply. After Sima Yue disappeared, how could he not investigate where Sima Yue went? On the other hand, Sima Yue was nowhere to be seen. It was hard not to think that she was with Lu Chuan, which would make the past life shocking. This was also something I kept asking the author at the time. @ Of course, if this unknown whereabouts coincides with the foreshadowing laid earlier, that is, Sima Yue's extremely yin body, so that the plot will not have any surprises from the past life, I think it will work. Well, I will send some small gifts to support the author, and then I hope the author will reply. If the problem of Lei in the previous life can be solved, I will give the author a big gift.

I don't think it's a refreshing novel in the traditional sense, but based on my perception, I think the author's writing is very distinctive. Although his subject matter is not very new, some of the divisions of realms are still very good, and the writing style is not to mention. I think the perception is very good. It's a matter of opinion. I hope I can stick to it. For the depiction of emotional drama, both the rhythm and the narrative method are very good. If you want to be brainless, this is obviously not suitable, but if you want to develop it slowly, it is really recommended.

First of all, from a general point of view, it is undoubtedly a harem story. At the beginning, I thought it was a bad street. What is a bit flawed is Sima Yue's ridiculous feelings. He is reluctant to leave his wife after divorcing her, but it is normal. Her father does not love her, her mother does not love her, and her younger brother is disrespectful. The person she liked before is also cheating on her. , After seeing Wang Fu's face clearly, he deepened his feelings for the protagonist. However, after reading 200 chapters, he probably needs to clean up, but he doesn't make it too easy. Some people also talk about the issue of clones. The author said that there will be no green clones (although The yin and yang bodies share the same consciousness). The advantage of this article is that the characters are delicately portrayed, the emotional drama is rich, and the outline is quite obvious. The protagonist will treat the emotional entanglements and family members of the previous life with caution and change in this life, and improve his own strength to deal with the shadows and Wangshi (and Yuangui who may not die or will be resurrected). The disadvantage is that the plot is slow and sometimes a bit weak, but I can accept it. After all, I will not get tired of watching the emotional drama, and I can also experience the emotions and changes of each woman, enriching the character image. Reminder: It is unacceptable to accidentally enter the harem and the beginning of the plot (Sima Yue is Lu Shou Shen)! ! !

The plots of good novels are realistic and have a sense of combination of ancient people's thoughts and modern thoughts. They are not like those articles about systems and invincibles, where you can get whatever you want. Those articles are as unreal as sending you a sky ax to kill the gods and people you don't like. It is also not like those articles on immortality and those that only know about cultivation, which have no emotions and six desires and are not like human beings. Those articles are like working hard to get endless money. Right, after using force, you can directly become a monk from the palace. The disadvantage is that the plot progress is a bit slow. The second point is that you will not use the forces and subordinates behind the protagonist. Just like the evil cultivators have subordinates, each force should have its own deadpool team and protectors to protect the descendants. It does not require too high-level force. If you can fight to the death to protect the descendants of the powerful force and escape after encountering a fatal threat, it is enough. In ancient times, it was normal for people to have three wives and four concubines. It can't be too much. For example, the three obediences and four virtues should be downplayed but not eliminated. The author writes very well that everyone has his or her own character. It is good that both big and small figures, good guys and bad guys, have IQs. However, we must pay attention to the differences in hierarchy and thinking of each class. Don't bring modern ideas, everyone is equal, and equality between men and women to the ancient times. People like this will die miserably, and modern people can't do this. , Just like the emperors, ministers and forces of each dynasty, it would be strange for you to persuade others to marry only one person without being hacked to death. Also, in the early stage, it is good to consider the face of your own power and the other party's power by not divorcing the one directly. However, the length is a bit long. It is best to control it within 10 chapters. I hope that the plot in the middle period will be more compact and that the later period will not be unfinished and have a more satisfactory ending. Finally, more updates every day, more updates, don't stop updating, come on.

Objectively speaking, I thought it was a cool article at the beginning. Usually I read this kind of cool article for one night, and then won't read it again the next day, and have no memory points. But the more I read, the more surprised I am. It seems that the structure of the work at the beginning is not the same as the one who wrote the work. The author's literary skills are quite good, he is competent, and the article is also fascinating.

The protagonist doesn't bite the dog, just points it out, and gives it a five-star rating.

I have been looking for a book that I like for a long time. There is no particularly mindless slap in the face plot, nor is there anything that makes you like it from the get-go. So far, the plot is well written, I hope the author will work harder

I'm chovy. I've finished writing the novel. The plot is originally slow, and the protagonist is still playing in the next three realms in Chapter 262. But you haven't updated it yet. What are you doing? To sum up, there are still a lot of poisonous points in the early stage, but the writing style has been greatly improved in the later stage, and the plot is also quite fascinating. Before the 200th chapter, the whole book is basically written about emotional scenes, like female writers competing for each other's favor, and the main plot is not promoted at all. The main storyline started after Chapter 200, and by the time I finished reading Chapter 263, it was just the beginning.

It's true, I haven't seen such a good book in a long time [crying][crying] Come on come on! This is my first time commenting! ! It's so well written, thank you author! I finally saw a book of my favorite genre [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]

It's good. I hope the author can keep writing. I just don't like the Riddler very much. I can see that there are a lot of foreshadowings. However, in this software that likes a fast environment, it doesn't suit the taste of most people. Some bad reviews are understandable.

It's not bad. Sima Yue's change of attitude has made a good transition. Now I'm looking forward to the direction of the plot of Yuhua. I don't know whether it will be integrated or to improve his cultivation in another form. After all, it is really too weak and will hinder him. I guess it is the evil spirit bead that absorbs the evil spirit to improve. . .

I haven't finished reading it yet. It's too short. I hope the protagonist won't be a bitch. It would be more fun to torture her severely. Cool, fierce gauze

It's a very good book. I think it's a pity that the protagonist divorced Sima Yue. It would have been nice to take a step back and take her as a concubine. Three days of fishing and two days of drying nets, this book...

I finished reading it in one night, and at five o'clock in the morning, I didn't expect the author to give up [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] It's actually quite interesting, and the plot flow is interesting, but some people just eat too much fast food, and it's convenient to keep craving for it, and the author doesn't have to care about those words [face covering]

I think it's pretty good-looking, I'll keep it up first, and then read it again when it's fattened up, the author, keep up the good work and update it [Like]

Some people have read too many fast-paced books on the system. The writing is average, the background of the story is relatively good, and there are some poisonous points. However, it is still very satisfying to divorce your wife decisively. The value of not jumping afterward is definitely not considered as a fairy grass. It is superior. It is much better than the system villain books where tomatoes are everywhere. It is considered a top-grade collection.

I'll give it a 4⭐️. In fact, the writing is quite good and logical. It's more comfortable to read than a brainless novel. It's just that the sudden change to the cultivation style is a bit uncomfortable. In fact, I feel that it might be better if I don't change the style [laughs]

It's pretty good. The rhythm is very good. The progress in the front is too fast and the follow-up is ineffective. At that time, I have to add a lot of inexplicable settings, such as the appearance of high planes and subsequent ascension. The suspense left so far is enough to support a little bit of exploration, which is quite good. The current plot distribution is also acceptable. Generally speaking, there are more emotional lines and less main lines. After opening the secret realm, I obviously feel much better. All the emotions are a bit bland. If I push the main line appropriately, the rhythm will be very stable.

The writing is really good. Some of the foreshadowings are recycled and logically coherent. It can be seen that the author has worked hard and has a good foundation. I hope the author can complete it. Don't worry about other people's opinions on the plot. Everyone has their own expectations for the subsequent development. I still hope that the author can follow his own feelings and better express what he has in mind.

I have read one of the few stories about Chasing a Husband that is not so brainless and has a natural narration. This is much better than some stories where the dialogue between characters is written in written language. The writing is good. Do you have any similar recommendations?

There is no muddling, the breakup with the Crown Princess is complete and no thoughts are left. The bitter psychological activities of the Crown Princess after the separation are well written. The protagonist will consider the pros and cons of marriage and other actions, and will not make sudden emotional excitement and decisions. Give 5 stars to see the follow-up

A very grand story line, the foreshadowing of this opening is close to that of Dafeng Dagengren, plus Genggeng.

It's okay. I've read it so far. The review said it's a cuckold. In fact, I think it's normal to break off the engagement after a while after being reborn. In order to avoid embarrassment, I still feel that I don't like the heroine, so I can't read it anymore. But this book should be okay. I don't know what's going on. Good luck to the author.

It's very good to read, but I feel that the rating of 7.7 Is a bit too low. The protagonist is determined and decisive in killing. I stayed up late to watch it until 3 o'clock. It is worth reading. It is a good book in ancient Chinese rebirth, but the author seems not to update it very much, which is a loss of points. Brothers, I really think it's a good read. It talks about Su An's decisiveness and his softness of heart. Most people give low marks because they are not cool or decisive enough. However, this article is originally more emotional. I like to read it more cool. Go read Shuangwen, I sincerely recommend it. The plot in the front may be relatively average and not decisive enough, but the character portrayal and inner portrayal in the back are really easy to resonate with. I really think it is well written (o´ω`o)ノ, but readers always... It's hard to stop updating (๐•̆·̭•̆๐). Finally, I would like to say that no success is achieved overnight. For example, great writers like Potato and The Paper have never written unsatisfactory books. There are so many authors in Tomato, There is no beginning, and there is an end. How will you know if you have not reached the end, you will only be 90% if you walk a hundred miles. Whether you persist or give up, it all depends on your thoughts. I believe there are readers like me in this book, just think it is for us die-hard fans, come on! ! ! Dear readers, please don't stop updating, woo woo woo XX

I really like the technique you wrote, and I also like the emotional scenes. I hope you can write happily. I saw many people saying that you should write more emotional scenes, but I think the current rhythm is okay. I hope you don't change easily when one person says dessert and that person says it's spicier. In the end, my own taste is lost, and the customers who liked this taste at the beginning also left. I really like it. [Like]