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It's not okay to just engage in ambiguity [pouts]! Take it, it's very [punch hard]

The author writes very well! ! ! The plot is handled very well, and the emotional line is also very well written. Just like what is said in the introduction, just let nature take its course, not deliberately write it, but also not maintain it, not suddenly, everything will happen naturally. Moreover, the characters are portrayed very well. The characters in the plot and files are fully described. Ling is carefree, Nian is lively and hot, Xi is gentle and elegant, Zhongyue is mature and reliable, Shu is a deeply rooted image of an old woman, and the second brother hopes that half a day will win. I stayed up all night to finish watching it. It was really enjoyable. I can only say that it is a good thing that it is Arknights, otherwise it would have become a hit. The author updates it quickly, I can't get enough, I can't get enough! ! ! (In line with the porridge ceremony!)

I didn't learn much from the introduction, but after reading in depth, I can clearly feel that the author's writing style is excellent. The plot is not embarrassing after reading it, and it is still very comfortable. The characters are well portrayed, the protagonist's image is getting richer and richer, and the other characters are also very restored, which is outstanding. There are relatively few Arknights books on the platform, and the popularity is not very high. I hope more people will be able to read this excellent work, and I hope this book will get better and better [Learned]

The writing style is very good, and I think it is on the same level as other excellent Ark fan novels. The characterization of the characters is also good. It is not the kind of novel that is very exciting but the characters are very bad. I hope the author can continue to do more, and I hope more Ark fans can watch this excellent work together (I have an announcement! I am a Xichu!!!) (Crazy) (Bright Crawl) [laughing] [laughing] Oh, seriously (｀Δ´)! At first, I just wanted to read this novel quietly, but I never expected that so many people have read this book recently, and it even knocked me out of the top three. I suddenly felt a little depressed π_π But I feel quite happy that this good novel can be liked by so many people.

Author, how can I live without you? Author, it's so good. This is the best Ark fanfic I've ever read so far. It has emotional foreshadowing, warm daily life, without Long Aotian. With online intelligence, I can see the step-by-step process of Ling Hexi and Qianqiu's resentment. It's so real. I have decided to follow this book all the time. Author, please read more!!! Don't make me kneel down to beg you!

A perfect novel, I can't find any poisonous points. My favorite education and training sessions could be more [sneaky laugh] I'm a little curious about how old the protagonist is at the end (I said he was in college). Also, since the protagonist can age, then there is no reproductive isolation [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

The details written by the elder brother, the plot written by Nian [face covering]

A very good daily article, Xigua and Sister Ling have joined the harem. I feel that the author is a liberal arts student. He writes a few poems from time to time. It can be seen that he is very attentive.

It looks good. I have a small suggestion. I feel that the main plot (Yai, evil spirits, and I don't know if there will be heirs in the future) should be appropriately smaller. You can write more about the feelings of the year-old beast coming here, as well as benefits and so on. Maybe it's because I personally prefer more daily-oriented writing.

A good book, indeed a good book. It is rare to see such a good book about the Sui brothers and sisters. The last time I saw it, it was about the plot of pregnancy and separation. Although it may be overrated, it does not prevent it from being a good book. I just read the latest chapter, and I have a bit of criticism about the emotional line. I think the description of the family relationship between the Sui brothers and sisters is excellent, but the male protagonist's emotional line is a bit hard to describe. Maybe it is because of personal factors, I don't like this kind of regretful relationship, but the experience of my sister in this new chapter really makes me feel aggrieved. After thinking about it, I obviously have a lot of opinions that I want to put forward, but I don't know how to say them. It's really uncomfortable. Generally speaking, it depends on how the author plans to deal with the protagonist's emotional line. If it doesn't work, just accept it and have a happy ending (laughs). This kind of statement reflects the irresponsibility of the real world, but this book is a second creation. It is another world derived from the story itself. It should fill the regrets and modify the ending. I really don't want to see new regrets (that's how I feel anyway). The Sui sisters are all good girls, and everyone deserves to be cherished. I still hope that the author can give everyone a perfect ending (I am very grateful).

I seriously suspect that the author is Da Xigua himself.

There are still relatively few books on aging on Tomato. The author's reputation is very good, but it is recommended that the story be improved. All in all this book is pretty good. It turns out there are multiple heroines... I don't like it personally (don't complain), but the emotions of each heroine are well written, keep up the good work

I don't understand why this book doesn't score 10 points. In terms of writing, plot conception, character restoration, protagonist creation, and even philosophical thinking, it is the best book I have seen on Tomato. If I want to use the words of the article, it is super beautiful.

It looks good, bro. The moment I saw your chapter title, I knew that your writing style is not simple ε(*･ω･)_/ﾟ:･☆ To be honest, it would be much better if the participation of original urban characters is reduced as much as possible. Second time: I can't even read the book? Give it a try

The writing style is really good, but it's a pity that just like the author said, I write according to my heart, and I only update when I think of it.

I have never seen this kind of subject matter about brothers and sisters of the Sui family, and I think it is unique. The author's writing style is very good, I hope he can continue to write more.

The author has won the resurrection competition. It's beautiful and I love reading it. To be honest, I couldn't even think of a title.

Rare and high-quality Ark fan fiction, highly praised More and more people are reading it. The author's writing is really good. We have to write novels for a lifetime. Without this novel, Wadasi... (Kneel down and beg)

I love this book so much, one chapter by the author is worth three chapters by others~

Come on, the author. There are really few novels like this. I really like Sui's novels.

It's pretty good, but I don't know why the rating is so low. Maybe it's because the word count is too small and the flow is limited? So author, why don't you update quickly? [Laughing] There are still millet, so I need to hurry into the house [laughing evilly] gkdgkd [laughing evilly]

Except for some plots that seem to be ghostwritten by Nian, they are pretty good, especially the writing.

Bu Hao, the plot director has Sister Nian's signature on it! Everyone, run away——

Zhou has many colleagues, but there are very few who let the operators go back to reality and only specialize in the Sui family. The author's characterization of the characters in this book is very delicate, and the characters are generally consistent. Coupled with the author's solid literary skills, it is very comfortable to read. It is worth mentioning that there are too many daily topics, which dilutes the urgency of the plot and slows down the pace of the article. Personally, I like Ling's carefree life very much. It's also a pleasure to read the love and hatred in the book when I have free time.

The emotional descriptions are delicate and the plot is complete. Although there are multiple heroines, the emotional lines of each heroine are well done. You can't find any faults. It's very beautiful.

The author's writing style is excellent (I don't even know how I came up with the title [Sending Hearts]), and the character creation is also perfect. There is basically no OOC. The main plot is fascinating, and the daily education and training is the finishing touch [laughing]. Overall, it is a rare masterpiece [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

Awesome, I like watching Ximei the most. Come on, author! ! ! As a reader, let me help you (rewarding) The reward has been given. I will save the book for a few days and then come back to read it. Now I have passed it on to my classmates.

Author Author, your novel is really impressive, but it is still too few. Do you have any novels that are good-looking and have a lot of content? Can you recommend them?

It looks great. And Mao Chu also said when Ma Ma will appear on the show.

Please write more about the author, Ernest, I can do anything.