After I Just Wanted to Become Stronger, the Plot Got Messed Up

It's really good. The protagonist is very rational, with clear grievances and grievances. He's not a saint and not extreme. He doesn't even meet a woman, so it's mine. This is how the story should be written, without writing a lot of nonsense just for the sake of water numbers.

Really, the author is really getting better and better. It was only about 7 o'clock when I first started reading the book, and now it's almost 9 o'clock. It's really super good, and the more you read, the more enjoyable it becomes. If you like to read through the book, don't miss it. Trust me, you really won't regret it. It's been a long time since I read this book, but recently someone has been asking in the news: I wanted to give up after reading the first two worlds, is it still worth reading? So I picked up this book and read it a second time. The early stage was indeed the same as other fast-traveling novels. The author's writing style was not very mature and his rhythm was not well grasped. The first time I read it, it was left on the bookshelf to gather dust. I took a look when I remembered it, but I don't know if the author cheated in the middle and later stages. The writing style, narrative rhythm, and novelty of the story have been greatly improved. It combines the excitement of fast travel with the sweetness of short stories very well, and the narrative of the story is also very complete, with a beginning and an end. So I started to follow the update, watching the protagonist travel through world after world. It seemed like I followed the protagonist through time and space again and again, watching him rewrite his destiny, watching him pursue his dreams, realize his value, and live the happy life I wanted. This kind of satisfaction is indescribable, and you can only experience it yourself after seeing it for yourself. So, really, the following stories are worth reading, really worth it...

Now I like this collection of short and medium stories. The protagonist's grievances are clear and he is not necessarily looking for trouble for the protagonist. He has a normal outlook on life!

It's very interesting to watch. The plots of each world are completely different, and the planning and routes of the plots are completely different. It doesn't make people feel like watching more worlds like an assembly line. Each world makes me want to continue watching. The protagonist will not use his abilities indiscriminately just because he has become older. I feel that the protagonist has a low-level perspective and is more upright. Because it looked good, I read it from the beginning again, and then I realized why there were so many bad reviews. The writing style of the first world was average, and I was a little bit annoyed. But it was also the first few chapters. The first few worlds were more or less poisonous, and it felt like the author had changed and the author's writing had improved. Anyway, I now think this novel is very good, and I like reading the next few worlds. I hope that the protagonist's three views will still be so upright, and don't become fake after writing.

I used to read stories about female protagonists who travel through time, and female protagonists who turn around and counterattack. This is the first time I read a story about a male protagonist and counterattack. It feels very novel, and the quality of the article is also very high. There are endless laughs and interesting points, and it is very attractive. I hope the author will update it soon, and I look forward to more exciting content in the future.

The writing is very fluent and the main character Goldfinger is not turned up, so it is enjoyable to read. Overall, it's quite interesting, especially as the author writes the story more smoothly.

This fast-travel novel is different from the usual revenge fast-travel templates. The male protagonist is relatively salty and can get by with many things. As long as things don't mess with him, the male protagonist will basically ignore it. Unless the original male and female protagonists are particularly bad, they will take the initiative to take action. I see a lot of people saying that it feels aggrieved. In fact, the male protagonist of this book does not travel around the world to avenge the original owner, so he does not have a strong desire for revenge. He just wants to save trouble. I won't take the initiative to contact the male and female protagonists, I just want to live a good life. This is a more casual quick story. I used to watch the kind of revenge and scumbag quick stories every day. I felt that the whole world was full of bad people, and I wished I would slap a dog in the face when I passed by. I can only say that my mood is different and I like to watch different plots. For example, I am very laid-back recently and don't like inexplicable conflicts. I feel that all the characters are bad, so it is especially suitable for this kind of story. , You can occasionally find a partner to spend the rest of your life with, you don't have a deep sadomasochistic relationship, you don't come to your door every day looking for a slap in the face, or you accidentally turn yourself into the hero of the world and save the world, and you can also make high-tech results to make money and be expropriated by the country. There are good and bad heroes in the original world, and they don't all have to be destroyed. The reason why many people feel aggrieved is that the hero's quick travel is not entirely for the original owner. Revenge, so the motivation of the male protagonist is not very urgent. After reading it, I just feel relaxed and calm. Maybe it is because of different moods and different viewing angles. I think there will always be a day when you get tired of reading fast-traveling stories to a certain extent. This rhythm is suitable for this group of people, so I say that this type of fast-traveling is another type. People who like slap-in-the-face, crazy and cruel stories are not recommended to read, because like other comments, it feels oppressive and chest tight.

I can only say that it is a very, very good-looking novel, with very upright views and a very gentle person. [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] Anyway, I like it very much [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart]

After reading this book, I couldn't stand other books. The characters are very relaxed, intelligent, not harem, not a virgin, and the plot progresses very naturally, which makes me feel good. There is always a feeling of unfinished learning after reading this book. The experience of having no worries is very strong, and the comfort will give you a sense of relaxation. It won't make people feel stiff, just make up the word count, and say a lot of irrelevant words. This quick passage is the most relaxing and enjoyable book I have read over the years. It's not abusive or painful. Life is already very tiring, but reading this book makes me feel more relaxed.

It's really good. The stories come one after another. Even if you don't like one of the stories, you can just go to the next story. It's impossible to suddenly not understand it! The main plot is that the male protagonist needs to upgrade, so he keeps traveling from world to world. So far, I don't think there is any bloody plot in the relationship! And even if there is an emotional connection in a story, it is told quite well! Each story has about 15 chapters, so it won't make you feel verbose. It would be great to watch as a story show! [Love][Love][Love][Attention][Attention][Laughter][Laughter] You can really take a look

Although each story is not long, the development of the plot from beginning to end is quite appropriate. I also like the type of story. I will not particularly discredit the male and female protagonists. It's just that sometimes it's okay from the perspective of the male and female protagonists, but it's not the same when viewed from another angle.

Nine points or more. It's funny, and it's also correct. The main thing is that most of the men I've seen travel through time were scumbags who repented, or they had three wives and four concubines. This one is not. I feel good looking. Is there anything similar?

It's good to read. Originally it was just a book shortage, but I didn't expect that the author's writing became more and more readable. I feel like I should write more, otherwise I will have to keep a book.

The male protagonist is rational and transparent, and will not overly criticize the male and female protagonists, nor interfere too much in the plot. He just wants to live his own life, be rigorous in doing things, and have firm goals. "He travels through the endless world, meets different people, and parting with each other is also a kind of experience of the Taoist heart." The pace is neither too fast nor too slow, the plot is complete and smooth, and each world is not repetitive. It is quite interesting!

It's a very good-looking fast-travel story. It's not the kind that wants to kill the protagonist. Most of it has a relatively light feeling. The supporting characters don't do anything, and they don't take the initiative to attack the protagonist. The protagonist himself can't do it.

It describes a smart time-traveler, and I couldn't put it down after reading it. The key is that the author has a correct outlook on life and can produce good works. Five-star review [Like] I like this book very much [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

This book is made up of short films. I haven't finished it after reading it for three days [laughing and crying] When I was in the first small world, the author's writing style was not particularly good. Maybe it was because it was the first world, so the plot in the first world was relatively frustrating, but the follow-up was very good. The protagonist Tu Yufan travels through various worlds in order to live forever, and has experienced many different lives. However, no matter how many worlds he has experienced, his three views are still very correct [Sending Hearts], I hope it will not change [Working on draft] The plots in each world are very good. I still want to watch them after watching one. I highly recommend [Learned] (The above personal opinion, you are right)

It's a very good-looking story about the male protagonist Xiang Kuaichuan. The plot is very smooth. The male protagonist has a gentle and funny personality. There is also a very funny weapon spirit. Some worlds have female protagonists. It is interesting to watch the male protagonist fall in love. Moreover, the stories in each world where the protagonist travels are pretty good. Some worlds are particularly well-written. The IQs of the supporting characters are basically online. There is no such thing. It's obvious that he is mentally retarded and has weird things, but it's quite refreshing to see the protagonist cure the weird things. The logic is basically online. The protagonist's skills are all learned by himself. I think I'll be half-assed in the end. There won't be any restrictions that my own skills can't be used. Sometimes there will be typos and other problems, but @author will basically correct them quickly in the future. This is really a plus. In short, it is recommended among the male protagonist Xiang Kuai Chuan's novels, and there is nothing poisonous about it [Like]

It's getting better! Come on, author [like] (Would you like to ask if this is a female video? I see many people saying it is a male video?) The world in the front is a bit bland, and then the plot progresses very quickly. I see some people say something bad about it, emm. The main character is here to feel emotions and gain experience. It's okay that the world in the front doesn't care much about this, but the main character in the back is quite venomous, hhh. The world bound to the love system and the world of Big Green Insect are very fun, highly recommended!

It's a really good novel. What to say. It's just a normal, light, good book that you can at least read to the end. No poison points. In today's era, when everyone is very angry, it is very quiet.

The plot structure is okay, there is nothing rigid for the development of the plot. The writing is also a strong writer in Tomato. The writing of each plot is more in line with the situation at that time.

If you like this kind of cp, you can take revenge as you please. I feel that many fast-travelers will completely cut off love without cp, and all the opposite sex they meet will be weird. But if there is CP and most of it is fixed, the main line changes from completing tasks to finding a lover in every world [face covering]. Many revenge novels feel like they are always seeking revenge and are not just for the sake of living. Personally, I prefer the plot of this kind of novel where life is flowing slowly. And there aren't many great ones, there are always some normal people. Even if they are not normal, the protagonist will either stay away or "turn" him/her into a normal person [laughing]. It's great. If you don't wrong yourself, it's better than anything else. I looked for a lot of quick time travels and finally came back and wanted to say something. This is the life that Brother Fan lives, and this quick wear is interesting. No matter whether you wear it inside or out, you should live your own life, not just to complete the quick wear mission. This is the quick wear life of my dream. Lie flat. Jpg

It's a book worth reading. It wasn't very good at first, and the writing was mediocre. I wanted to give up several times, but luckily I didn't. The brothers and sisters persevered. The author got better and better as he wrote, and the logic of the writing became better and better. Moreover, the author has one thing that suits me the most, which is to stay away from the best and stay away from bad things. Try not to get involved if you can, but if you really have no choice, don't give up. This is a normal and intelligent human being. The kind of people who are reborn and still entangle with the best, especially those who can obviously take revenge. Talking about letting the other person stand on a high place and then fall down, making the best suffer from extreme pain, etc. Or the kind of saying that time will tell the truth and explain everything without explaining and doing nothing. I really can't stand it. This article is not. It's so good. I feel more and more happy after reading it, and I'm even not finished yet. Come on.

What can I say about the writing? It's okay. But the quality of the articles fluctuates up and down. There are small excellent works, but there are also great controversies. As for the content, it can only be said that it is a bit lacking in flavor and the essence has not been revealed as quickly as possible. Looking at the overall situation, the protagonist has changed quite a lot. However, I hope it will not be so vague when it comes to moral principles. Sometimes the predecessor is wrong, and there is nothing wrong with these things. For all kinds of worlds, there is right and wrong, and a mixture of right and wrong is the norm. The origin of some things is defined from the beginning. There is no need to be dark just for the sake of being dark, and there is no need to write the other person poorly in order to cater to the subject matter. But there is one thing to say about the two articles that impressed me the most. One is the first article, and the other is Jinlougui (everyone knows it). These two articles are of high quality to me. Of course, the quality of the first article is slightly inferior to the second one, but it means something different to me. Finally, I hope that the author can have more new inspirations and write more short stories. Improve yourself through constant writing.

You can watch it, the protagonist is usually involved in the plot, not a passerby. However, the setting is too high, giving the protagonist a very high level of strength, which makes him become a golden immortal, and ordinary people cannot save him. I feel like it would be better to change the settings. The protagonist is more like an ordinary time-travel worker, and each world uses the knowledge learned from previous world-travels.

This is the style I like. The CPs chosen by the male protagonist all have a positive outlook on life, and they are not very merciful. There are few emotional descriptions. The main thing is to improve themselves to complete the task. The male protagonist is a normal person, not the cold kind, not a virgin or a stallion, he is quite good-looking.

The next one, haha, the next one will definitely improve Brother Fan in this book seems to be a person who doesn't like to talk much and doesn't like trouble. In fact, he is very vindictive and just tolerates it hahaha It's not that you have a completely correct outlook on things, but that you do some good deeds while ensuring your own interests in advance. The planes are very rich, there are no big scenes, everything is simple and neat, with some humor and refreshing feeling. I feel very comfortable throughout the story, and sometimes it is very funny. There are quite a lot of settings for various characters. Even though I have seen a lot of them, sometimes they still feel very novel. It is said that there is cp. It is difficult to feel love with the male protagonist. There is some love on the opposite side, but there is very little description. The male protagonist still tries to be alone as much as possible. Only when he feels that the other person cannot live up to him, will he be together neatly. The personal main line is very clear, the goal of sanctification is very clear, and the actions are very determined. Overall, as a fishing novel, it's pretty good.

I have been reading novels for almost ten years, and many of them have their own characteristics. After I read this book, I understood what attracted me to it. First, I like fast-travel novels, and this book is pretty good among fast-travel novels. Secondly, the background of his world is grand. He not only travels through all the worlds, but also has a main world with a profound background. This is the finishing touch, because it is a bit monotonous to fast travel all the time, and readers will become tired after reading too much, just like a lonely ghost who cannot find the direction of home. And a main world with a profound background will also attract readers' interest. After all, the main world is the most awesome! In my opinion, if the author's book maintains this level, it is a book that is very likely to become a god. Come on, author, I hope you can write better works! [Smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

It can be clearly felt that the writing is getting better and better, and the plot conception and overall writing level of each small world have made great progress. It can be said that each story is becoming more and more interesting, and the character descriptions are becoming more and more full and three-dimensional. From the beginning, the protagonist simply does things to obtain destiny points (although the behavior is logical, but it will make people feel that he lacks normal emotional expression), later he becomes more earthly and flesh-and-blood. I won't deliberately stay unmarried or have children for labels like "no cp". Everything will just go with the flow.

Tranquil, this is my overall feeling after reading it. If you like the theme of time travel, it is also good as a time-killing read. Although the protagonist is not a kind and quiet guy, he is both trouble-making and steady. He uses the time and space mirror to travel through the heavens, change the fate of people from the same origin, and create his own holy status. Objectively speaking, from the perspective of the main world, the protagonist's golden finger is quite wide open and has been growing steadily without any setbacks. It is not that there are no enemies, but that the enemies have not caused him any trouble. Throughout their development, they have basically been the party with the dominant force. Although Small World will have some weird protagonists, they are still fun to play as supporting characters. Killing time ~ Food level, but a bit dry ()