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Overall it's good It may be more suitable for readers with a bit of fun-loving nature (anyway, I can accept it, it's quite interesting) The setting in this aspect is quite interesting, but there are a lot of pitfalls. It depends on how the author handles it. However, my personal suggestion is that it is best to write down the heroine's abilities clearly, because the sacrifice to go back in time still feels too vague (mainly because I feel sorry for the heroine, a cheerful girl) The battle is quite graphic. You can watch it while holding your pee. It might make you feel better. It is recommended that the male protagonist be made cold (not without emotion, but suppressed. After all, the world is very dangerous, and it is impossible to live with love first. This can provide a certain foreshadowing for the true feelings to be revealed later, and it will not be so confusing). The emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are not very well controlled. I hope to improve them in the future. The price of the heroine's ability is finally solved. It can be in the form of one life for one life. The target can be the male protagonist or the enemy. Anyway, it is to let the heroine go. I feel that the heroine's background is a bit pitiful. Overall, the rating is low. It could actually be above 8.5. I hope the author can work harder! [Please update]

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Shan Qingxue's new book, the quality is guaranteed

After reading it, it is a bit similar to the setting of Alien Beasts, but it is a different style, not so depressing, and looks very comfortable. The heroine is also well written, she is not a waste, and there is no male character or plot that is very annoying. The description of the male protagonist and female protagonist is very good, but the subject matter you are writing now is not very good. You can try to write a book with a larger world view and a longer story line. Just use the description of the male protagonist and female protagonist in this book, that is, change the male protagonist and female protagonist into another book with more development and better writing. I think it will be popular.

The heroine must be Zhuo Yunzi, right?

It looks good. Come on, the author, I'm just trying to add more content about Yuzu [laughing]

The new book is great, good luck to the author! !

The story is well told and not rigid at all, which is better than most books. But I feel like the book is getting cold, which is a shame. I hope to skip the middle and write a chapter before the update ends where the protagonists live together for a day.

A nice and interesting book. I think it's quite trendy both in terms of plot and character design, and I highly recommend watching it. I'm not a little neurotic, but I think it suits my taste. It's a rare masterpiece worth watching.

Are there any similar articles? I'm so horny that I can't bear it. This is the greatest compliment to the author (dog head) I would like to ask, do the three books have the same worldview? [Think]

Save money! ! ! It's really good-looking. The descriptions and plot are comparable to most of Tomato's novels. The author must not be a eunuch!

I don't have a worldview yet, but it seems like it shouldn't be too bad right now. If you want to have a good viewing experience, you have to throw away your brain.

I love it so much, but I don't have any literary talent, so I can only ask the author to make it faster╰(‵□′)╯

I was addicted to this book as soon as I read it. It's really beautiful and has many original elements in it.

It's very beautiful, the characters are well-developed and vivid, the sequences also have some innovations, and the combat descriptions are quite passionate, leaning towards Cthulhu.

This is the first time I have been scared in a book. The heroine was stabbed. It was well written and the character was particularly outstanding. I hope it will have a good ending.

It is a really excellent book. The upgrade line is very reasonable and the emotional line is very rich.

I came here to pursue the book, and everything is in good condition at the moment.

Come on, come on, come on!

Come on, hurry up and follow me!

Come on, it looks good

Good book, worth reading

Go, go, go, it's not enough, I want more

A very good book!

Looks great, come on author! [Code hold]

Not bad, very pretty

Come on, I like this book very much

Great Tmall book!

Come on, come on, the author, hurry up and throw [blowing kisses]

Does Qingxue have any special feelings for Slug? Why is it included in the original version?