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If the author's two male protagonists are not the type to fall in love, it is best to make it clear in the introduction, which can increase the number of readers.

The writing is very good, but it's a pity that there are two protagonists. I would prefer to have one protagonist as the secret keeper, and then treat the other chosen ones equally. I personally feel that the cheat code given to the second protagonist is too big. There is no limit on the number of times it can be used and no cooldown. He can see through all disguises and cannot hide any behavior as long as it is within his sight. As a result, the decryption of the dungeon is greatly reduced and the horror twist plot is greatly reduced. It is basically the same as playing a dungeon. The protagonist directly looks at the enemy's mechanics, and fights those who can defeat them. If he can't defeat them, he hides from the mechanics. It's a pity. It would be nice if there was only one secret keeper protagonist and he would treat the other chosen ones equally. Before Su came out, it was good, but the group was wiped out. After Su came out, it became a bit dull. You can watch it to pass the time.

By the way, who is the other male protagonist?

It's good to read, although it's not the first time I've come into contact with running groups, but the author's writing is really good, and there's nothing bad about it. Anyway, for now, as long as I don't change it much and keep it as it is now, I'll be worthy of this five-star rating.

The presence of the male protagonist in the book is not very high, can it only be said to be ordinary? What interests me is the dialogue between the two male protagonists, and the label of dual male protagonists in this book is not conventional. It can be regarded as a novel similar to two good brothers fighting each other without any homosexuality. The various events in the book are also very interesting, and it feels like a group portrait. Everyone has shortcomings and advantages, and the protagonist's own advantages are not blindly shown. Even the minor characters have their highlight moments. I've learned a little bit about group running from the fanfics I've read before, and it's very interesting. This book is pretty detailed. As for changes, don't expect me, who's only seen them twice, to find out anything. Running a team, throwing dice, and being a secret keeper are all very interesting, and they integrate well with the national destiny (in my own opinion). If there is any sweetness between the author's writing style and the two male protagonists, the former is more logical than the mystery novels I have read before, while in the latter I only found the exchange of insults between the two? For example, if you find that your dice roll has failed, you feel that it is another person's fault, and the other person is a little angry, and the results of the dice roll are random. Emm, I usually like to eat this kind of candies. (If you don't like the candies I'm knocking, don't do it. Just skip it. If you do, I'm not afraid of you. I have time to spend with you.) Okay, it's been a year, and the book doesn't feel that new anymore. As a result, the person who graded it is only in his early 300s. Anyway, I think it's pretty good. Oh, by the way, this article is not a cool article, and there is no such thing as a breakdown in combat power. The protagonist also has a crisis moment and even runs away because he can't handle it. After all, the people around him are running away and dying. He doesn't need to save his life to escape. Is it possible to pass the level directly? All in all, it feels like a growth-oriented protagonist.

The first time I saw the main character was from KP! Great! Love it!

But when I almost gave up, I finally found the book of my favorite genre 2023, 9, 2

This book is based on the framework of the COC running group, which is the basic setting of the action logic. It contains the author's own Yuanhaike biological system. These are the two main perspectives of the secret keeper and investigator Su Fan. In fact, Su Fan can be seen as the protagonist after he appears. The secret keeper is a supplementary perspective plus a ruthless complaining and dice-throwing machine. The author's writing is very good. I just came to Tomato and I don't know much about the ratings and the average level of articles, so I lowered www.

Come on, come on, come on, it's not enough [grievance][like][like][like]

It's wonderful, but there are so few ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Come on, this subject matter is really cool. After reading the article, it was so fragrant that I couldn't sleep. But when I looked for it, I found out, eh? No? ! Seriously, keep updating, don't abandon the article😱, it's really the only salvation for people who are in the cold circle ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Really, so few, so cold I'm in the Arctic Circle, the icy wind blows randomly on my face 2023.8.16

I like this subject and like running groups, but I have never done it [laughing and crying] Cloud Player is now online (bushi)

666666 Confused me

It's quite objective, not a brainless piece of writing.

I think it's quite beautiful. Why are there so few people...

The novel is really good, but I want to ask, which novel Lost is from [smile]

How can the thrilling and bizarre ending be worthy of this wonderful beginning? He is like a chess piece, isolated and helpless, and is puzzled by the world.

Actually, I didn't realize that this book had two male protagonists. I simply couldn't tell that it was written for two male protagonists. As a result, I thought this was a group article.

It feels pretty good, but it feels like one of the male protagonists is like a tool, and seems to have never done anything other than throwing dice. In addition, when I read the comments, I found that some people said that some places were not rigorous, but it had no impact on my reading anyway.

There are no comments on such a novel subject? No, I want to make up one [send heart][send heart][send heart]

Great book! Great book! ! The rating shouldn't be so low

It's pretty cool, but I can't understand it even with my brain.

It looks good, but the two male protagonists have no emotional lines. I'm overthinking it [laughing] [laughing] Okay, okay, my hanging heart is finally dead [staring]

Very good book, made my head spin

Give me back my sweet girly voice to the author [awkward laugh][dirty laugh][dirty laugh][dirty laugh][dirty laugh][dirty laugh]

It's good to watch, but at first I thought the two male protagonists were the kind with emotional connections, but now it seems that's not the case

It's pretty good, but the ending is a bit rushed There are a lot of settings in the first few chapters, so just read it a few more times. Is this what the original COC team meant? Learned a lot ... Although I still feel that the people who run the running group are very mysterious. I think it's really hard work, kp

You can have a brain, not as brainless as others

Very interesting, good luck to the author

Very beautiful, very good

Niubi potential is a good book