Red Mansion: I Was Exiled at the Beginning, I Want to Rebel

Very good. How can the time traveler stay under others for a long time if he doesn't become Wang Mang?

We just want to ask, will there be any gods or ghosts behind? After all, I remember someone said that he wanted to turn into a ghost and come to find Jia Zan? If not... What would the monk say? Let's get to the bottom of it in advance [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ]

I'm looking forward to it. What are you going to do with this plump Mrs. You [smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's pretty good. It should be about 8.5 Points. Although there are some minor flaws, it's still much better than other 8-point Red House works. However, it came out too late and I didn't get the bonus.

In fact, it's just a normal time-travel historical novel written under the title Hanging in the Red Mansion, but I think the author's writing style is mature, the plot is smooth and refreshing, and it's very comfortable to watch without feeling aggrieved. I think the author will be good at writing systematic martial arts, fantasy, and cultivating immortals. For some reason, the plot became boring after dozens of chapters. The plot was spoiled by the trivial affairs of the Red Mansions. It also lost the sharp style and development... No wonder the score was not high.

If you don't want to update it soon, think about your credit card, mortgage and car loan, wife, children, parents and parents-in-law, and whether you have money for your children's milk powder and education [sneaky laugh]

Come on, the author's rating is still a bit low. I've been following this book. Relatively speaking, I think not many people would like Jia Baoyu. His sentence about "traitors of the country and rich ghosts" not only cursed officials, but also his ancestors. Sister, just like the author said, he has many shortcomings that make him worse than many ordinary people. Come on, this book needs more. I have a big surprise for you at the end of December.

I have read more than 300 chapters so far. Both the writing and the plot are very suitable to my taste. I would like to give you a five-star review. This can be regarded as a fanfic of Dream of Red Mansions. Among the four famous novels, I have never read Dream of Red Mansions. In order to understand the characters in this novel, I also searched for the character relationship diagram of Dream of Red Mansions. Otherwise, I would get confused when I look at the title of "Second Grandpa and Grandma" [facepalm] In my personal opinion, this novel is well written in both official battles and emotions, and the interweaving of them prevents the plot from being too protracted. I personally don't resist reading harem stories, but I don't like the kind of stallion stories that accept all comers. So far, I feel pretty good about it.

Great, two updates a day is not enough, I think we can add 10 updates!

Not bad, not bad, non-toxic and the writing is smooth.

This one in the Red Mansion novel is really good, and it's very comfortable to read. The system has reserved a unitary for the elderly. Why don't you use it? It doesn't suppress the protagonist too much. It's a general with one thousand points. Why don't you just recruit Gao Shun? You still control two provinces. Don't you have military power? There are still tens of thousands of system soldiers. Two provinces with one hundred and eighty thousand should be fine.

Don't think about it, it's been more than 400 chapters, and you haven't rebelled yet [cover your face] and are still collecting beauties [laughing and crying]

The pacing is good and the characters are well-depicted. The setting of the protagonist's mother, Qu Shi, is hard to describe in one word. She is a bit like Qin Keqing in the original Dream of Red Mansions, wanting to die but being afraid of death [Thoughts] The processing of the latest chapter is a bit imperfect. The arrow was on the string and I had to shoot it, but I stopped and went back and was beaten. The protagonist's mother, Qu Shi, was even more speechless. The interaction with the protagonist made the perception of the protagonist worse [Thoughts] Oh my god, the protagonist is completely lying flat now, [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

It is decisive and decisive, not pedantic or procrastinating, and there is no pull of love and affection. It is suitable for reading.

What first attracted me was the introduction, then the plot, and then the author's writing style and characterization of the original characters. It can be seen that the author worked very hard to write this book. Don't know why the rating is so low

Come on, author, how can modern people be trapped by those false filial piety and false fame? There should be something called

I never thought that one day I would like to read Red Mansion type novels. [Cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

Five stars, generally speaking, there are no big poisonous points. It is the foundation to open the war and the loss of the royal blood in the Jia family. There aren't many garden scenes, and the girl is a bit restrained. The orthopedic surgery I thought is probably gone.

It's not too much to rank the Red Mansion among the top three. The author's writing is first-rate. It doesn't look like he is writing for the first time. He is probably a trumpet account of some big boss. The logic is very clear and the plot is reasonable. Personally, I think the only shortcoming is that the article was a bit overwritten in the early stage, but this problem no longer exists in the middle. Maybe the author saw the comments and made corrections. Who doesn't love an author who listens to advice? If it doesn't reach 10 points, I will give it 9.8 Points.

It is the best book in the Red Mansions category that I have read. There are too many dividing lines. The main line should be rewritten to divide the territories into kings and emperors.

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The author worked hard to write the article. May your works sell well.

The author's writing skills are particularly strong and strong

This and this still have cultural heritage. I don't know how to praise the author. Two words: awesome!

At first I thought it was boring, there was nothing else to read, so I decided to read it! As a result, the more I read it, the more I thought the writing and storyline were good! This is a slow-burning book! Later readers, please be patient and take your time to savor it! You will find that your persistence is rewarded [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]

It's just a cool article with a little logic, overall good.

I beg the author to write more. This time, please go beyond 2000 chapters and ask for immortality at the end, so that I can have a book that I have been dreaming of for a long time. Otherwise, I won't have to part with life and death in just a few decades. Let the heroine and the male protagonist leave first, and the rest will be a kind of torture. I beg the author to give the male and female protagonists an eternal reunion in the ending. I feel that only eternal life is the best ending for them. Please, please, if the reality is not beautiful, please make it beautiful in the novel. There are rebirths and time-travels, so there are already supernatural elements and there is no need for an ending of Eternal Life. Please, please, if the author accepts my request, please make more Eternal Life episodes. Otherwise, I am always afraid that Eternal Life will be the male and female protagonist. A dream before death. I beg the author. I feel emotional about everything I read. I really don't want him to die. I beg the author to give him a happy ending. Everything is possible. The ending does not affect the author's outline. If the author sees it, please reply with a trumpet. Please show your respect. The author has a system and it's not too much to ask for an eternal reunion. I really don't want the heroine to die at the end of her lifespan.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's pretty good, but I just can't get enough of it [face covering]

The content setting is very good, and the characters are not inconsistent. I have read a lot of Red Mansions fans, and there are only a few that I can read. This is one of them. It is very well written. I like Qin Keqing and Wang Xifeng in it. I really like 😍. Great support for the author [shy]