Brother, You Can't Escape

The author is sorry. I have tried my best to read it up to this point. I really like your writing, which is not mindless, but the progress of your writing is too slow. I don't want to read it after chapter 50 or 60. But seeing that you write it with great care, I still stick to it. Today is my last update reminder, and I hope to meet the author again in the future. Goodbye, author👋🏻, bye! I hope you will make this book better and better as you write it.

After reading the latest episode, there is nothing toxic in the whole text. It mainly focuses on the daily interaction with my sister. My sister is so cute and the heroine is relatively comfortable to watch. The interaction and two-way running between the male and female protagonists made the corners of my mouth go up crazily. [Laughing evilly] The author is strong, so keep going.

Very, very beautiful. Come on, the author.

Seeing this book reminded me of, "About the incident where I was accidentally turned into a loser by the angel next door"

To be honest, the writing style of this book is eye-catching. It is not like the messy system articles and harem articles in the Tomato Channel now. The author's sentences and quotes are very good. Regardless of the plot direction, people will never tire of it. The only pity is that there are irresistible factors that cause this book to be careless. The ending is rough, (some pitfalls have not been filled, and I hope the author will write more extras in the new book later) and then learned about the author's experience, which made me feel that you are worthy of the author. You have worked very hard. We readers all hope that one day you can realize your dreams and reach your end. Come on! ! ! Author

The overall grasp is actually quite good, especially for sister-control people, it is more attractive. It can only be said that it may not be "cool" that meets the requirements of ordinary users, but there is actually a considerable number of people in the audience. [Laughs] The good news for sister-controllers is that girls have a much more delicate grasp of girls' inner feelings, and can transcend the limitations of the reader's own perspective, allowing readers to experience such characters in a more three-dimensional way. For such readers, such vividness is very happy. [Shy]

The plot of the angel next door is okay, I hope it doesn't end badly. If there was an angel next door on a tomato, this book would basically be useless.

The writing is okay. Whenever the male and female protagonists get together, I will give you five stars [please review carefully] Keep your word,

My humble opinion, no other opinions From reading, Xia Qingluo's character creation is not very full and a bit stiff, and I think the adoption plot may reduce people's enthusiasm. The author here should want to establish a connection between the two, but later looking at Song Yi's meaning, this matter has been premeditated. If Xia Qingluo was cured (partially) by "Jiangxinzhoubian" at this time, Then when getting along with Jiang Yun, he opened up his heart and revealed his identity instead of giving it away directly (this was very abrupt and inconsistent with Xia Qingluo's "Flower of the Mountains" character, even though he knew Jiang Yun was "by the side of Jiangxin Island"). There was a slow healing process, and Xia Qingluo gradually changed from good to enthusiastic. With the author's literary style, there is a high probability that he will become popular. Furthermore, the pacing is very well controlled, but there are only more than a hundred chapters, which is still a bit slow in comparison. I can understand the author's good intentions in writing a good novel, and he can develop Jiang Yun's character and let Xia Qingluo redeem him. Isn't this label worthy? "My Active Pride" Lu Chen and Ye Ziqing in "My Friend" are a good example. Lu Chen and Jiang Yun in it are very similar, but I think Lu Chen has richer emotions and more vivid images (just some immature opinions. After all, I am only a high school student. If there is anything wrong, please correct me). Finally, I wish the author to be happy every day, and to persist in writing such a good book even when he is under a lot of pressure. I hope that the author will find his new moon soon!

The writing style is simple, with few typos and no loopholes or poisonous points. The characters have three-dimensional personalities, have their own considerations for the direction of the article, and will not blindly pursue the public aesthetic. However, it is indeed not suitable for writing in Tomato. Most of the tomatoes are fast-paced, and the change does not consider the writing style, which is just fun. Of course, I still hope that the author can write new works on Tomato.

The writing is very good and the plot is relatively real. As a reader, I can feel the author's intention. The switching of perspectives in the article is very smooth, which makes it very comfortable to read. The psychological activities of the two people are also very rich. Anyway, all in all, it is a very good book, unlike those cool articles that make it boring and cliche to read. Big cheers for the author

Let me explain to you, the meaning is still the same, but the meanings of these five expressions are different, but the basic meaning is the same, the meaning is still the same, and the meaning of these few sentences I said is also the meaning. If you don't understand the meaning of my words, I suggest you read more, it almost means the same. After reading more, you will understand what I mean.

So far, there are no problems. I can only hope that the protagonist is not a eunuch.

It's good. The more desserts, the better [laughing]. After the author finishes updating, he can ask the author to have something to say. This will make it easier to send things. Also, I think the author can slowly persist and write more. In fact, there is no need to read those cool articles. You can just write what you write. And the data of your book is slowly coming up. Finally, can you update it twice a day? Please, open a book group so that I can understand better.

Please come on💪 It feels good now

Although the plot is a bit like the angel next door, overall, the character development is very good and the plot is fairly smooth. Although there are some shortcomings, the overall impression is still very good. Support the author, come on😄

Although it may be considered unfinished, the 100 or so pictures really show the care put into them, and I like them very much.

I really like this book and I hope the author doesn't finish it badly. I also hope that the author will persevere. It is basically not easy in the early stages of becoming an online writer. But if you can survive it, I believe that the author's writing style will definitely get better and better. I will always support you here.

I personally think this book is very well written, but it's too short. It's a bit uncomfortable that the male and female protagonists disappeared just after they got together. However, the writing style of this book is very good and the description of the environment is very good. This is a big advantage. Finally, I really hope that the author can write a follow-up to the story of Xia Qingluo and Jiang Yun.

Come on, it looks great. Support you! The female protagonist and the male protagonist are also very good (forgive me for being illiterate, I don't know how to describe [crying] [crying] [face covering]), they are super good-looking! PS: Can you create a fan group? Just can the update be faster? I finished reading it in just one go [licking the screen][licking the screen]

I hope the author can write to 800 chapters. If 800 chapters is not enough, 500 or more chapters will be fine. Otherwise, it is not enough. Don't stop updating. I really like this book @. If the author sees it, please reply. Thank you😊

Support every dream. Everyone's dream may be different, but in the end they will shine. Qi Xia said that there is no "unable" person in this world, because there are many roads in the world, and everyone has their own one. We just choose different roads, which does not mean that we will never reach the end.

Girls can still write the delicate performance of girls. It seems that there are good-looking books among the low scores. But I am short-sighted. Although when it comes to daily and autobiographical series, Meow-chan's writing is better, but there is still room for improvement. Come on, author! ! ! I would like to add that the writing style needs to be improved emotionally. I suggest you read more books written by Meow-chan [laughing]

I originally wanted to give it five stars, but after thinking about it, I gave it four stars, for no other reason than simply wanting a happy ending. I think this book is really well written. As for the ending, I think the author didn't seem to give an ending. If he gave another ending, my evaluation would be that this book is small, but it has all the internal organs. Good luck to the author, I'm looking forward to the ending of this book [OK][Like]

Big cheers for the author, it's very beautiful and very spicy. I finished it in one go. I hope you can work hard.

Not suitable for tomatoes, but consistent with the core values ​​of socialism

The writing is quite good, but some parts in the front are a bit strange to read, but generally it is very good. I really like this kind of book. Good luck to the author. I am looking forward to the time when the heroine's vest falls off. Good luck.

The writing is extremely good, really good. You don't have to be afraid when it's over. There's still a next one. The author just needs a break. Take a look. Maybe you won't have such an opportunity in your life, so that's why you read the novel, right?

To be honest, I quite like it. Perhaps the only flaw is that it is a bit short. It has been a long time since I have seen such a interesting novel. When you read the story clearly and get involved in it, you will find that the book is a good book and the people are also good people. I think the quality is quite high and I like it very much.

It is a pity that this book is well written, with delicate emotions and vivid characters, but it was not completed as expected. In my opinion, the chapter "I Love Him" ​​in this book is really well written and very moving. I hope the author will get better and better.