The Little Cannon Fodder Who Travels Through Books to Cultivate Immortality Is Much Luckier Than the Protagonist

This is the first time I have written such a long book review, just for this book: I think this book is really good-looking. At the beginning, I thought it was just average, and the later it gets, the better it gets. The writing is also quite good, and the characters are quite rich. There are no unfilled holes. Overall, it's really good to read. If you're not into reading, I recommend reading it. I just took a look at the barrage, and they all said it was watery and not good-looking. But I want to say that this is a free novel, it doesn't cost you money, and it won't do anything to you. And I think what they said is quite reasonable. Why should I give other people low marks? I think this author can continue to finish writing, which is very good, very good.

It looks good, but I can't tell who it is (please send the author a reply [sending my heart][sending my heart])

It's pretty good, but it would be better if there were less personal panels. Especially when I'm listening to a book, I play it again and again, and I almost feel that the plot is no longer good.

Such a beautiful book, I feel sorry for my conscience if I don't support it. It's as cool as a cool article on a male channel. It won't make people want to open comments and complain about it because of various entanglements. Come on!

It's okay, the plot is good, the author's world view and the whole plot are good, but some parts feel that they should be written in abbreviation and detail, and some parts should be written in abbreviation and detail. Give me one way and that's it? A bit confused. Especially the illusion, the one where the Soul Absorbing Lord absorbs soul power, was written in too much detail. I skipped many chapters. Personally, I feel that this section can actually be abbreviated. The emotional lines of the two protagonists also feel a little bit abrupt. Although the protagonist is attacked for the protagonist, the process of falling in love with him still feels a little unhandled. Overall, it is good, otherwise I would not have finished reading it in two days [facepalm] Great support to the author

Recommended, if you like this type of novel [Love]

It's very interesting. I like it. I hope the author can write it well and not end it badly.

The author, please come on + come on + come on + come on! Can the author update it quickly?

It's okay, but the system keeps dinging, and I've read more than 50 chapters so far, but I've read this dinging ding many times. I hope it won't be like this later, otherwise it won't be interesting, and I keep repeating the same thing [smile][smile]

It's pretty good. If I didn't develop a big world view like virtual reality and just wrote about the world of immortality, I think the score would be a few points higher. Suddenly a virtual world appeared, and I was confused by the abo and mental power. Then I suddenly lost the desire to continue watching. The front is quite nice, not abusive at all, just a great article👾👾

This time it's easy to know which book it is. There is something recognizable in it, that is, the system's puzzle-solving function. This book has a very Long Aotian feel. This is the treatment the protagonist deserves [snickering] [snickering] [smirking] Highly recommend this book, it's really great to read

A very nice book. The author's idea is novel. In the interstellar era, a virtual world of immortality is used to heal the spiritual realm. It is this virtual world of immortality that gave birth to the consciousness of heaven. The consciousness of heaven wants to make the virtual world of immortality a real world. The protagonist, Gong, is an interstellar general. He was injured in a fight with Zerg and entered the virtual world of immortality for treatment. Then the royal family wanted to kill him and changed the treatment settings. This also hindered the virtual world of immortality, Tiandao, from becoming a real world, so the protagonist Shou traveled through time. The Tiandao incarnation system helped the protagonist Gong successfully heal, making the virtual world of immortality become a real world.

It's so beautiful, words can't express my love for this book [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

It's a good article. The author is very good. It combines several worlds and turns them into a big network. It tells a story. The plot development is also very good, with ups and downs. Moreover, the protagonist really has a big golden finger. It is indeed a cool article. At the same time, you must use your brain to read it, otherwise it is easy to forget who the person is. It is indeed a very beautiful article [Send my heart][Send my heart]

I like the male protagonist's physique and so on. I also like the subject matter. Maybe I don't quite accept it. I need to save myself and then save others on the way. If this blogger and author publishes other books, I will definitely read them, because I like the male protagonist's physique and other things.

The protagonist is very good-looking. When others thought he was a girl and called him sister, he didn't object and accepted it.

It's very beautiful, the subject matter is very novel, I like [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

What can I say, after reading so many finished novels, this is the only novel that I read from beginning to end without jumping at all. The plot is really good, except for the repeated description panels in the middle. To avoid overestimating the rating, I'll give it four stars. There are some small details that the author didn't consider and still need to be changed. Come on.

It looks good, but it's too long in some places.

The author should update as soon as possible, update as soon as possible, and Xiao Yun is the eldest brother, but he doesn't have a husband or wife yet. Isn't it not good? Let's arrange one, and will he be the one to attack or receive? Actually, I really thought that one was subject to ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

After reading a little bit, I feel pretty good. It's just that the system panel appears too many times. Just pop it up when needed. It's a bit too frequent.

Hehe, it looks really sweet in the back. There are several pairs of sub-partners. [Laughing evilly] There are spoilers below↓ Let me talk about my personal opinion first, "The protagonist seems to rely on the system." My opinion on this comment is: First of all, is the system the protagonist is affected by attacking the brain or the only rare one (although it feels unreliable) and there is heaven behind it. This is equivalent to Tiandao being unconvinced and wanting to make his world real. Although Gong is a bad luck, it is useless if he accidentally gets killed by someone. So I found a feeling, for example, I found a middle switch. Tiandao first makes two people contact each other, such as sending a task. It happened that Gong also seemed to have suffered (although from the physical point of view, I felt that Heavenly Dao had arranged it), the two people became one, so it was more convenient for Heavenly Dao to operate to restore Gong and make himself real. So I think this can only be said to be mutual. The summary is that my attack talent was too good and I was harmed. I was put in the virtual fairy world and was calculated, so I repeated it twice without recovery and almost died. The third time I encountered Shou, I changed many things, and finally recovered, and the virtual became reality. Tiandao sent Shou to Gong, but something happened and the world could no longer tolerate Shou, so the two of them returned to the fairy world to live happily.

The sweetness is medium, and the storyline is interlocking. In some places, it feels like it is very fast and direct, but it is also very interesting. Although it is a bit inexplicable that they fall in love, it is a good article.

Well, it's good to read. I found a copy. Author, come on, don't let me down.

A very good book, quite sweet, but the system is a bit dull

It's really beautiful! The content is very rich, the plot is novel, recommended and praised!

I personally think this novel deserves 9 points. Secondly, there is only the property panel left. I personally think the rest is just fine. It's the attribute panel, there's no need to mention it in every chapter. Except for this property panel, everything else is better. Just keep it up, it's pretty good

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

It's very beautiful, but don't use the system panel to count the words [laughing]