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It's really wronging you to write a novel on Tomato.

It would be a pity not to write essays. Writing novels is a waste of talent.

Give it 3 stars for the mother-daughter flower shit. "I" is included in every sentence. You are writing novels, not reports! The plot doesn't flow smoothly, and it feels like it's going here and there. Make more preparations.

Poison. . . . . .

Don't make your abilities so rigid, don't go to worlds where you can cultivate immortals and have supernatural powers, don't participate in those worlds, but it doesn't prevent the protagonist and the protagonist's women from cultivating. The first-person pronoun of "I" can be corrected. Using "I" does not give people the illusion that they are the protagonist. Using "I" gives the impression that it is not a novel, but a story told by the protagonist.