Original God: the Awakening of the Other Shore

Each of these titles is absolutely correct. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Nice book, but why is no one reading it? ￣ ￣) Let's see how the author writes it. I hope it will have a good ending.

Mark Literary

I haven't read too many novels so I can't give you good advice. This is just for reference. 1 The plot is a bit far-fetched and not smooth to watch. It is recommended that you write more details instead. To be honest, it doesn't make any sense that the things reported on the previous Stratayan Juyuan Incident were taken away by an ordinary person. 2 Getting along with Keqing is like licking a dog. I prefer that the male and female protagonists have equal rights. I am more subjective in this aspect (don't criticize if you don't like it). I also know that the author is not good at writing about emotions, and I hope to improve in the future.

The story design is very good, the content of the plot is reasonable and smooth, the background story of the protagonist is well written, and the tragedy of the protagonist is also well written. The second personality of the protagonist is also very well written. I hope this book can continue to be written better. Come on, the author hopes that the protagonist in your book will eventually reach the other side! Also arrived at his real home!

As far as I'm concerned, it's very good and the quality is relatively high. I hope the author can write it as he said, and in the end, I hope it won't end badly [Sending my heart]

It can look good, come on

I suggest the author to update four times a day. If you agree, give a like [laughter]

Very good, but it would be better if there were a little more emotional lines. There are a little less female protagonists now [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

It's okay, come on, author! [Praise]

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It's a rare work that I can impatiently read to the end [Like]

The content is rich and interesting.

It's so fun to watch, but it's too sharp [crying]

Not bad, come on, author!

The author is very awesome

Very much in line with my requirements

Come on, author! So pretty!

Pretty good. Come on. It can be seen that the author is very careful, but there are so few people. I really don't understand. Come on.

Beautiful, very beautiful

It can be seen that the author was very careful when writing this book, but the beginning is a bit confusing. I almost thought the protagonist died directly. Also, it is a bit verbose. I hope the author can continue to work hard. It turns out that the author is also Ke Qingchu, and they went together [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile]

My hair, I just realized that golden pupils and red pupils, isn't it Li Xin?

Very nice! Why are so few people watching? ? (*^ω^*)! ! ! Come on, great author!

It's a great book, but not many people read it. Come on, I'll be a long-time fan once it becomes popular.

It's well written, I like it very much, but it's a bit short. I read it in one day [Chigua]

Except for the lack of emotional lines, this book is very good. It is a good book worth recommending, but why are so few people reading it?

Come on! Very pretty [laughs evilly]

Come on, for the sake of Qingqing

Cool article, super sweet

It's really good