When I woke up, the world in front of me had changed dramatically.
I want to ask you, what should I do if my half-sister is a genius girl, but my younger brother is just a jerk?
This is a strange and bizarre world, with devils, demons, wild beasts, and all kinds of weird things running rampant everywhere.
How can Chen Wu, a person from the 21st century, survive?
Don't panic, close your eyes and open them again, see you in the dream world.
I practiced when everyone was practicing, and I practiced when everyone was sleeping. The main thing I practiced was a "volume".
What? You ask me if I can stand being rolled up like this?
Next, focus on what you need to test.
I want to gradually become a god in my dreams!
Reader comments
The quality of the author's writing has declined a bit in recent chapters, and he has started to lose his mind. Dragon eggs will not fall as long as they are taken into the space by the protagonist, and there is no loss if the protagonist dies. Why not go back and get more after the fire dragon fights the black tiger or even the death battle with the black tiger later, directly limiting the protagonist's growth speed? Also, the author has not written whether there will be a time limit for the falling of the rules. The eldest lady of the federal family was forcibly bound to the protagonist. Recently, a little girl of unknown origin came (also has a very good background) ), the protagonist took out the dragon egg in front of a girl whose origins he didn't know (in reality), without checking whether the area was safe (there was a group of bandits). As a result, the girl directly threatened the male protagonist with the dragon egg, and the bandits showed up to rob him before they could rob him. There was no need to think about what happened next. Everyone knows how to develop, forcibly binding a relationship with a little girl, please, it's very easy, okay? When did you use the routine to open two books at the same time, or two books with very different writing methods? Does the author have this ability? Want to become a big fat man all at once? A person's brain is limited. Two books have to be updated every day, and the writing methods are different. Can the author's brain change? If the quality of this book continues to be as good as the last few chapters, then this book will probably be ruined.
I only read more than 50 chapters and couldn't continue reading. The first is that because the protagonist has just traveled through time, it is so difficult that he should not digest the memory of the original owner first and try to ensure that he is similar to the original owner. The second reason is because the mind-reading woman immediately targeted the male protagonist and forced him to do things. If the hero knows she can read minds, shouldn't he stay away? The teacher also asked the male protagonist to take her to familiarize herself with the environment. Can't the male protagonist refuse? And why does the male protagonist team up with a mind-reading woman? Her role in fighting wild beasts is not as good as the male protagonist. When the third male protagonist meets Ye Tong, who is similar to the female protagonist, if he is really worried about her, shouldn't he take her back to the city first? Are you not afraid of accidents when taking a little girl out in the wild? The above are the reasons why I gave up the book. In fact, the ideas and worldview of the book are pretty good, but the rating was lowered just because of the design of the protagonist and several female supporting characters.
I have been a human being for two lifetimes. I was a social beast who spent so many years in society in my previous life, so I should be a little more mature. After dozens of chapters, I feel that the protagonist is still very childish. , The real age of the main character is in his dozens, so it's better not to be too enthusiastic, otherwise it will feel weird. I suggest the author to read "Take a Hunting Space with You". I read this book a year ago and finished it. It was very well written and the setting is almost the same as yours. I hope it can give the author some inspiration, but I don't excuse you. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes, and we will see you again [Love]
After reading Chapter 29, let's take a look at the pit the author dug for himself.
1. What kind of modern time traveler is the protagonist? It turns out that he doesn't know what the law is. I don't know what kind of time traveler you are writing about.
2 As a time traveler, you don't know about the development of shadow. As a result, you end up using it as a substitute for death every time? Can't it be used as an assault skill? For example, place it behind the opponent and then change positions to sneak attack [what] [what]
3 As a time traveler, I don't have any brains. The school arranged for the son of a veteran to come to school and he came to the most rubbish class. He happened to sit next to me and then he showed me what licking a dog is. He just threw it on his face [cover face] [cover face] I would have endured it if there was no golden finger. But there is such an awesome golden finger and he still has to lick it [face cover] [face cover] He really can't walk when he sees a woman.
4 Being read in someone's mind, they didn't even know to stay away from others, and they were still together all the time [laughing crookedly][laughing crookedly] It's really unreasonable for the author to cheat. It's been so long without being read [laughing crookedly][laughing crookedly]
After reading dozens of chapters, I really can't help complaining. The author assumes that the protagonist has been struggling in society for several years before traveling through time. But what is the reality? My temperament is at the level of a primary school student. I am easily irritable and can do things without thinking. The most obvious manifestation is from the time I went to Zhongye. I felt that the traces of the thunder element disturbed my sister. I wanted to go to an inaccessible place. Please, I said it myself. Many people went to Zhongye to look for opportunities. You are still there to thunder, are you afraid that there will be fewer people attacking you? When you see a little girl you don't know, you become older and younger. Can an ordinary little girl survive in the middle of the field? It would be better to say that the protagonist was also a child before traveling through time.
The funniest thing is that the protagonist's sister is a super genius at the top university in the federation. What level is she in after she is a sophomore? Shiquan, what about the outstanding classmates in the same class of the high school protagonist? They are both in the Perfect Realm. Is the protagonist in the same class too powerful, or is the protagonist's sister in the same class too weak? I can't understand it anyway.
First of all, I like to read novels with this theme, but this novel has a lot of poisonous points. This novel has touched on all the poisonous points that are popular in online literature now. It is really impossible for me to read it, and I also remind latecomers to be careful!
You can use the rules and practice the rules at the first level. Every cultivator in this book is a god-like existence. (The rules are generally controlled by immortals/gods, and the high-end version of the world is not something that all mortal/low-level practitioners can practice.) If this world is not everyone's mortal/low-level cultivation rules, it will be very messy. The protagonist can't kill the enemy beyond the level by practicing the rules. Look at the first wave of mortal enemies: the man-eating Chen surname. Even if the power of the rules is weak, the power of the rules is not at all strong.
Why are you sleeping? If you are not dead, get up quickly and update! ! ! [Anger]
This protagonist has always been like a primary school student, so I won't thank you for the two-star review
After reading it for so long, I still haven't received any positive reviews...
To be honest, the fighting aspect is not well written, and the storyline also has common problems. I have to write the plot with wisdom.
The protagonist is seriously mentally ill, and this book is full of poison.
The quality of the author's writing has declined a bit in recent chapters, and he has started to lose his mind. Dragon eggs will not fall as long as they are taken into the space by the protagonist, and there is no loss if the protagonist dies. Why not go back and get more after the fire dragon fights the black tiger or even the death battle with the black tiger later, directly limiting the protagonist's growth speed? Also, the author has not written whether there will be a time limit for the falling of the rules. The eldest lady of the federal family was forcibly bound to the protagonist. Recently, a little girl of unknown origin came (also has a very good background) ), the protagonist took out the dragon egg in front of a girl whose origins he didn't know (in reality), without checking whether the area was safe (there was a group of bandits). As a result, the girl directly threatened the male protagonist with the dragon egg, and the bandits showed up to rob him before they could rob him. There was no need to think about what happened next. Everyone knows how to develop, forcibly binding a relationship with a little girl, please, it's very easy, okay? When did you use the routine to open two books at the same time, or two books with very different writing methods? Does the author have this ability? Want to become a big fat man all at once? A person's brain is limited. Two books have to be updated every day, and the writing methods are different. Can the author's brain change? If the quality of this book continues to be as good as the last few chapters, then this book will probably be ruined.
I only read more than 50 chapters and couldn't continue reading. The first is that because the protagonist has just traveled through time, it is so difficult that he should not digest the memory of the original owner first and try to ensure that he is similar to the original owner. The second reason is because the mind-reading woman immediately targeted the male protagonist and forced him to do things. If the hero knows she can read minds, shouldn't he stay away? The teacher also asked the male protagonist to take her to familiarize herself with the environment. Can't the male protagonist refuse? And why does the male protagonist team up with a mind-reading woman? Her role in fighting wild beasts is not as good as the male protagonist. When the third male protagonist meets Ye Tong, who is similar to the female protagonist, if he is really worried about her, shouldn't he take her back to the city first? Are you not afraid of accidents when taking a little girl out in the wild? The above are the reasons why I gave up the book. In fact, the ideas and worldview of the book are pretty good, but the rating was lowered just because of the design of the protagonist and several female supporting characters.
I have been a human being for two lifetimes. I was a social beast who spent so many years in society in my previous life, so I should be a little more mature. After dozens of chapters, I feel that the protagonist is still very childish. , The real age of the main character is in his dozens, so it's better not to be too enthusiastic, otherwise it will feel weird. I suggest the author to read "Take a Hunting Space with You". I read this book a year ago and finished it. It was very well written and the setting is almost the same as yours. I hope it can give the author some inspiration, but I don't excuse you. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes, and we will see you again [Love]
After reading Chapter 29, let's take a look at the pit the author dug for himself. 1. What kind of modern time traveler is the protagonist? It turns out that he doesn't know what the law is. I don't know what kind of time traveler you are writing about. 2 As a time traveler, you don't know about the development of shadow. As a result, you end up using it as a substitute for death every time? Can't it be used as an assault skill? For example, place it behind the opponent and then change positions to sneak attack [what] [what] 3 As a time traveler, I don't have any brains. The school arranged for the son of a veteran to come to school and he came to the most rubbish class. He happened to sit next to me and then he showed me what licking a dog is. He just threw it on his face [cover face] [cover face] I would have endured it if there was no golden finger. But there is such an awesome golden finger and he still has to lick it [face cover] [face cover] He really can't walk when he sees a woman. 4 Being read in someone's mind, they didn't even know to stay away from others, and they were still together all the time [laughing crookedly][laughing crookedly] It's really unreasonable for the author to cheat. It's been so long without being read [laughing crookedly][laughing crookedly]
After reading dozens of chapters, I really can't help complaining. The author assumes that the protagonist has been struggling in society for several years before traveling through time. But what is the reality? My temperament is at the level of a primary school student. I am easily irritable and can do things without thinking. The most obvious manifestation is from the time I went to Zhongye. I felt that the traces of the thunder element disturbed my sister. I wanted to go to an inaccessible place. Please, I said it myself. Many people went to Zhongye to look for opportunities. You are still there to thunder, are you afraid that there will be fewer people attacking you? When you see a little girl you don't know, you become older and younger. Can an ordinary little girl survive in the middle of the field? It would be better to say that the protagonist was also a child before traveling through time. The funniest thing is that the protagonist's sister is a super genius at the top university in the federation. What level is she in after she is a sophomore? Shiquan, what about the outstanding classmates in the same class of the high school protagonist? They are both in the Perfect Realm. Is the protagonist in the same class too powerful, or is the protagonist's sister in the same class too weak? I can't understand it anyway.
First of all, I like to read novels with this theme, but this novel has a lot of poisonous points. This novel has touched on all the poisonous points that are popular in online literature now. It is really impossible for me to read it, and I also remind latecomers to be careful!
You can use the rules and practice the rules at the first level. Every cultivator in this book is a god-like existence. (The rules are generally controlled by immortals/gods, and the high-end version of the world is not something that all mortal/low-level practitioners can practice.) If this world is not everyone's mortal/low-level cultivation rules, it will be very messy. The protagonist can't kill the enemy beyond the level by practicing the rules. Look at the first wave of mortal enemies: the man-eating Chen surname. Even if the power of the rules is weak, the power of the rules is not at all strong.
Why are you sleeping? If you are not dead, get up quickly and update! ! ! [Anger]
This protagonist has always been like a primary school student, so I won't thank you for the two-star review
After reading it for so long, I still haven't received any positive reviews...
To be honest, the fighting aspect is not well written, and the storyline also has common problems. I have to write the plot with wisdom.
The protagonist is seriously mentally ill, and this book is full of poison.