This is my first Panlong fanfic. I will change the website and it will be moved and updated soon. It is relatively short. After all, it is my first novel and I cannot control it well. Of course, I did not plan to write it long. At that time, I was just afraid that it would not be finished.
Reader comments
It's very good, but it feels like the pace is too fast and not enough to watch.
It's very good, but the pace is a bit too tight, and there isn't much sense of immersion. Readers who like Panlong can read more. I hope to improve it after I open a new book.
How should I put it? Is it a fusion introduction or a simple and crude introduction?
It's pretty good. It has the fewest words in the Panlong genre. Regardless of whether it's logical or not, it's just fun. Not to mention it sounds very reasonable.
Basically no bugs, worth a look
I'm in the middle and late stages and I really can't bear to post a review. After I ran into the God of Life, I was just a mess. I was grinding and chatting about love the whole time. I was trying to make up the word count. I was now a sister, and now a wife. After seeing this, I came back to leave a negative review [angry][angry][angry][angry][angry]
Except that there is no Hongmeng Space, everything else is fine. The settings respect the original work.
It's very good, but it feels like the pace is too fast and not enough to watch.
It's very good, but the pace is a bit too tight, and there isn't much sense of immersion. Readers who like Panlong can read more. I hope to improve it after I open a new book.
How should I put it? Is it a fusion introduction or a simple and crude introduction?
It's pretty good. It has the fewest words in the Panlong genre. Regardless of whether it's logical or not, it's just fun. Not to mention it sounds very reasonable.
Basically no bugs, worth a look I'm in the middle and late stages and I really can't bear to post a review. After I ran into the God of Life, I was just a mess. I was grinding and chatting about love the whole time. I was trying to make up the word count. I was now a sister, and now a wife. After seeing this, I came back to leave a negative review [angry][angry][angry][angry][angry]
Except that there is no Hongmeng Space, everything else is fine. The settings respect the original work.